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Reviews for Bishies: Heaven or Hell?

By : SmutQueens2507
  • From Bouken on February 24, 2008
    YAY! Again thank you so much my own two goddess' of athoress'!!

    Not only did you give me such nice feedback for a review you also wrote my name in the chapter ^w^!!

    I'll do like last time and part the review in too for each of you to ravish as you like ;P hehe.

    ~Heaven-Ali~
    Why you, you should be writing the hell section, you little devil! Haha just kidding but it was so evil of you to just change the from my site awaited heated Lemon with Yusuke to one with Hojo! Hahahaha! But it went out to be very pleasing indeed anywho! ^___^ Tho' I must admit I've never really thought of Hojo to be anything near sexy as you make him here, but guess the boy have some hidden qualities I never had the time to see in those briefly moments he even showed himself in the anime series, hehe ^__~ But surely you've made me hot for more and expecially with Yusuke as he's more hot here than everything left in my imagination! Woo girl you rock!

    ~Hell-Jasmine~
    Now now, I must admit I've always wanted to dominate Naraku!! He's so much the king of my favorite badass char's! And I mean REALLY badass characters! (As my love for Bankotsu is indescribeable, he is still for me a GOOD guy ^__~) But some hot heated sex with Naraku isn't bad oh no no!!! So now the only thing that reminds is to praise you HIGH SKY for your remarkably writing skills!!! As for that the intruduction part where a bit boring this was just soooooooooo pleasureable you can't think of how much i just WISH for more!!! You rule babe, and I emna it!! ^___~

    As to both of you! Ali you told me you have made like nine chapies more, that's right ne? So it's now too late to beg for your mercy about the lovely Bankotsu topic?? *Can't just get more adoreable eyes than now*

    Anyhow I love love love your work!!! And also want to write more with you! ^^ Guess I get attached to ppl easily, but you are one of the few that actual beam of shining adoration of what you do! You just love to write and it's shown in your stories :b Can't be any better!! Hahaha...

    Ali I forgot in my mail to you to discuss the Jaken thing, cause you are sooo right! He's just a toad and tho' someone like it I think it quite disgusting, of course a toad can have wierd fantasies, but there has to be some borderlines XD ahahaha!

    Uh still with all my love and thanks:

    ~Belinda!! *Fluffy hearts and strawberries*
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  • From Bouken on February 24, 2008
    Eh? I couldn't see all of my Review when i first added it so I try again XD If you can't see it either tell me please, then I'm sorry for it.

    Hi again girls ;D Sorry, but I wanted to review again as I felt like saying more, haha.

    I'll part this in two reviews so the one goes to Ali for her Heaven story and the other goes to Jasmine (I LOVE your name! The same as my cousin :b) for her hell story !

    But first I want to remind you both of what you told in the prolouge section that if there was a character from one of the anime's you are using I really want to see, then funny enough there IS! Haha xD He's from InuYasha and I've had a crush on him since I saw him the first time, and if ya have seen all of InuYasha you probaly know him as well ;P I surely hope, his name is Bankotsu and he's the leader of the band of seven (Shichinintai) Wether you choose him for heaven or hell is up to you, but I'll beg you so many times to just TAKE HIM IN!!! *puppy eyes from a dear fan!* And as I see him he's maybe a bloody murdere but with a heart of gold! *in love*

    Another thing ^^ I have to characters of my own (As I draw a lot, actual I go on a drawing shcool and soon animation shcool, hehe...) and they represent me as two twins like yin and yang, my good site and my bad site, so of course I use them for this as it's an opputurnity you doesn't get often ;) so thanks again for you briliant stories!!!

    Haha, so that was my "write shity things part" xD and now for the lovely reviews :b

    ~Heaven-Ali~

    I love your writing skills girl and the way you explain everything, you have a thing for making it so interesting I just want more. Oh and yes you are VERY evil to stop just in this lovely upcoming hentai with Yusuke, and god you have made him SEXY! Gawd haha... Emma is such a bitch and I love it ;b I know one called Emma as well and she's almost like this haha. Atlan sounds gorgeous and I want to personal see more of him, Teehee XD ahaha.

    ~Hell-Jasmine~

    Oh my girly you have just the same awesome tecnique as Ali to want me scream for more, there's less of the ecplanation of everything, but it's just the start chap so I can bear with it as you already ahve me on the leash. It's so tempting to smack Anna verbaly as she seems just as bitchy as her twin sister, but it's the thing that makes it exiting. Oh and for my own personal pleasure I am right now dreaming and merely hoping that the one "I~The goddess" is pointing on to come with me is Hiei! But I'll wait anxious to see who ya had in mind sweety, huhu. I'll love everything from you!

    ~*~

    That was my second review as I thought of giving you a bit more than the crapy one I first did, hehe. I'm the kind of person who reads the stories I like more than once to be sure I got everything with ;D

    Now I also want to appology for my (maybe) bad english, but I'm from Denmark so I hope it's exuse enough ahahaha XD

    ~Belinda
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  • From Bouken on February 24, 2008
    Oh my fucking GAWD! Why have NO ONE reviewed this story yet???!!!

    It's to put it right just AWESOME!

    I mean, the idea is brilliant, just brilliant, my god.
    It's a bit lame you got no more reviwers tho' I'm sure others have read, but maybe you just have to put more chapters up and I hope, really HOPE you'll continue this and put another chap up soon!! Please let me know when you have, I'll just put my email up if ya will want to write me then ;P

    I've choosed the hell's path cause Hiei was there haha xD In heaven it's only Kouga I want, but I've read it too and it's just as good, just I'm a bad ass and all this heaven thing isn't quite me.

    But I'll support your both, cause you girls have bright and awesome Ideas and the fact it's "me" who's the main char is quite good, hehe.

    Here's my email: FreakyBou@hotmail.com , so if ya up for sending me a mail when you update again then please do ^^ Thank you so much for the time you take to make stories for others like me to enjoy!

    ~Belinda (I know my name quite sucks XD)
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