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By : kle10
  • From ichigokun on August 03, 2009
    A few nitpicks before I tell you how awesome this story is:

    "Roan" is red with white flecks, not pure red. It's also a weird adjective to describe eyes, since it's only used to describe coat color (usually of cows or horses).

    Hanging Neck Island is a PART of Ningenkai- a secluded one, yes, but a part of it.

    And now to the compliments:

    I really enjoy your style of writing. It's very suspenseful, you have everyone pretty much IC- and you kind of made me care about Kurama/Hiei again. I like how you brought Karasu (I think?) back...and yeah, quality fanfic.


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2009
    I very much like it. You capture their minds and emotions well ^^
    ...I would love more. Like a follow up. You know, like what happens next... it's too painful to leave this short!
    A very beauitful, painful though.
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  • From mhmartini on January 17, 2009
    This is good... really good. You write extremely well and paint very vivid pictures with your words. You've also captured Kurama and Hiei very well and created a perfectly believable situation. I certainly do hope you continue this story, as I would love to see where it takes the demons and if they are ever able to accept the things they feel and the things they share, and adapt to each other's needs.
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