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Reviews for Stepfather

By : Artemick
  • From ANON - Aya on May 08, 2014
    omg this has been one of my wet dreams!! lol! you have no idea how long have i been fantasizing over a fic like this! it has every thing i ever wanted on a freaking fic, its scary!! i had always wanted an OC/kurama yaoi rape fic! no lie! taka's personality is spot on awesomeness! seriously im crying right now reading chapter 4... sorry, i dont mean to sound exaggerating but.. i am soo overwhelmed im shaking in bliss T_T this was just too beautiful. i know im being such a nerd right now ^_^ but i just love kurama uke fics and it has been years since i read a good one! pls pls pls write another story like this one! omg, im soo excited to read the rest >_< i had to read chapter 4 three times so i can enjoy every minute LOL!! if you can recommend fics like these pls email me!
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  • From starchilds on December 02, 2011
    Just finished reading up to chapter 11 of STEPFATHER. It is really exciting. Lots of action and lots of mental anguish. Poor Kurama. Can'twait to read the next chapter. Thanks, Starchilds
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  • From ANON - Sekah on November 07, 2011
    Jzhhhhh. Can I just, may I just eat your mind? I'd really like to.

    Fantastic as always, Art, and you better know I can't wait to read more. Reiterating my other review, my body is yours, to use for your pleasure.

    And if you'd like a fic, tell me a prompt and I'll write it for you (you should have my email). I'm in the mood to give back.
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  • From on June 06, 2010
    Only my knowledge of how annoying it is when people review with that is stopping me from begging you to post the next chapter. What a mean cliffhanger - I love it! You got me all excited and then the chapter stopped!

    Lovely as always! Kurama's going to teach Takasune the meaning of fear, I guess? I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lyn on May 03, 2010
    There's just something about this story that I really love. I can't really put it into words. I love how easy everything is. By easy, I mean like...ksadjf;ajksflj the words just seem to flow so well. Especially the dialogue. I just really love the dialogue. Format-wise, it'd be easier to read if there was a space between paragraphs, but I love it anyway.
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on April 11, 2010
    This is an interesting story. However, the last chapter feels kind of like a side story. I am hopeful you will write more and tell what happens to Sensui and Takasune(is that how it's spelled?). I haven't read such an angsty story that I could read without throwing up in a long time. I like angst but too much makes me sick. The last chapter did help alleviate some of the drama and sadness but I want to know what happens next. I hope you update soon. This is an interesting story.
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  • From inuren on February 20, 2010
    Okay i really tried to follow this but it just left me wondering what. I can't follow this and say to say I won't continue it but please think about editing it
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  • From ANON - Mika Starlight on February 19, 2010
    I've been reading this since it was only three chapters and I feel bad that I haven't reviewed until just now. But... whoa on the hottness!! I'm liking this immensely. I really love alternate story-lines and you're keeping everyone so in character it's just...

    And the pron is ffffffff!!!
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  • From on February 03, 2010
    This fic is one of my new favorites, absolutely. The intrigue, the attempts to make Kurama remain Kurama despite the rape, all the other great things you've done just make me insanely jealous. You're much better at psychology and characterization than me, and don't I know it.

    Update soon! I can't wait to read it.
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  • From on January 06, 2010
    Oh my god. You've managed to create the same emotional powerhouse of Hotel Room, and done it with a more cohesive plot this time. The result is magical. I'm on the edge of my seat for this one, please update soon!
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  • From ichigokun on November 06, 2009
    I thought this was going to be one of those "Hatanaka is evil" fics (you know, where he abuses Kurama for no reason at all besides just being a bastard), but you subverted that nicely.

    And, to be quite honest, I don't think that Sensui would have any female followers. But I do like that he's in this fic, even though I think his desire to kill Kurama is a bit OOC. (Plus I'm thrilled that he's [presumably] going to start fucking his followers. Are you going to have some of the canon Seven in this AU or not?)

    All in all, a pretty good AU-fic.
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