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Reviews for Risk of Conviction

By : Artemick
  • From ANON - Aya on May 15, 2014
    im in awe... everything was beautiful. the pairing, the plot, how detailed and how it's written... i can't explain it, but i just love how angst it is ^^ you should write more! it's one of those written works where you will have to look for again in the future to be read over and over again. i seriously enjoyed this and the last three fics i read from you. i can't wait to read the rest!!
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  • From ANON - LadyMacabre on April 06, 2013
    My brain has turned to mush and i'm trying not to babble. Takes a deep breath... Alluring and sexy yet heart aching and oh so psychologically intense with all the mind games, with seduction and non-con filled with pseudo romance and tenderness that scares and arouses. An exquisite fic with beautiful choice of words, the metaphors and similes made the prose appear like poetry.

    In the beginning I was slightly disappointed that there would be “no use of toys or props” to spice things up but I was proven wrong since the dialogue alone was enough to keep my mind teetering back and forth from fear and pleasure. My whole body was wrought with tension as I read kurama's verbal sparring with koenma afraid that the deity would renege on their deal and damn him for eternity, yet at the same time it had me squirming in a good way

    I don't know if it was intentional on your part but i noticed that in your dialogues you left most of the description of the delivery of their bantering empty
    making it more powerful for it leaves the reader in the dark of the nature of their exchange whether it is a teasing repartee with feigned charm or an exchange of dangerous threats, making the atmosphere more tense and letting one's mind speculate of the worst.




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  • From ANON - Lemma on November 16, 2010
    I love this. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love how this is written and how your chapters are getting longer as it goes. its like a build up. Keep it up kay?
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  • From ANON - J on May 24, 2010
    This is hot, hot, blazing hot piece of fiction. I do hope you keep writing, I can't wait to see the next part. I love your portrayal of Koenma -- very believable with regard to his canon background and setting. And of course, Kurama's just plain smoking. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ruka on May 22, 2010
    I don't really like it... I like long captivating chapters this just seems to be short chapters. I also am not too pleased with first person. I read like four chapters and am calling it quits.
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  • From on May 17, 2010
    Now of course I love this fic, but this is a review reply more than a review, since I can't seem to find your email anywhere. Mine is stalkercrow@gmail.com, just for the record.

    I'm glad you liked Honor Among Thieves! I was going out on a limb a bit with a new pairing, and I'm relieved it came out as nicely as it did.

    You and I have very different perceptions of canon Kurama, in regards to locks. That's quite alright, of course; I was very young when I started watching the show and fell in love with Kurama. Because of that, he isn't as fleshed out to me as he is to other people - I have a slightly cartoonish view of him. Also, the only reason the second chapter of Locks was a let-down is because I am horrible at strategy in real life - strategy games, anything that requires thinking ahead. I'm too impulsive for that. That's my apology for it not living up to the first chapter.
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  • From geeclock on May 15, 2010
    Captivating peice. I've never seen anyone translate Koenma like this before. Keep it up. I can't wait to see were this is going.
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  • From on May 14, 2010
    This was very fun! I can't wait for the continuation; I hope it comes soon. Both Koenma and Kurama are so devious, I love it. Keep going!
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