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Reviews for Potions of Fortune

By : TheDarkBeginning
  • From MidNighFlower on October 11, 2011
    I like how you started of with action and jumped right into the story. But the links to pictures kinda threw me off. Maybe you could have those at the end or let the readers imagination come up with images. It might also be easier to tell when the characters are talking or thinking if there was a font change or you could start a new sentence, before and after whatever is being said.

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