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Reviews for The Forbidden One's Secret

By : midnightdemon
  • From ANON - Cookie on December 15, 2007
    OMG! you have no idea how much i love this story!
    its suck a good idea!
    Love your writeing style!!
    GAH! its just plain good! ^_^
    Plz update date soon i cannot wait to read the next on!!

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  • From smokyheather on December 13, 2007
    i like this alot, update soon? -x-
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  • From Chidoridragon on February 19, 2007
    i just read all the cahpters and i love the story so far but i suggest spell checking quizzically is a word you just spelled it wroung... and i'm not purfect eioth so i check over my work three times... if you check under this same pen name for www.fanfiction.net then you'll see that i too have some problems with typing errors. more detail would be good too.


    hiei's a hottie!,
    Chidori-dragon
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  • From on April 10, 2005
    Oh shit...... Oh shit...... Oh my god..... OH my god...... DAMN WOOT WOOHOO DIS STORY ROCKS I LUV IT OH NO tooo muc h excitement and coolyness caant take it i thnk im gonna HURGH Bleah............. P.s ROCK ON THIS IS SWEET
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2005
    hmm i think the chappies are too short. but i like the storyline! it rocks. please update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - Blah on January 17, 2005
    When the fuck are you going to update? lmao,... not far i have read more then everyone else and im still going nuts, i'll give you your cookie, cholocet chip even. Sorry about the spelling. talk to you later, COZ

    PS Aryanna is Crawling

    Crystal
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  • From ANON - Your Cousin on December 07, 2004
    Hey,
    Just cause im "family" im aloud to update. Right?

    lol, yes im in one of thoes annoy the hell out of you mood. Whats new. I love the flow of the story, I have read this fic from the beginning but never relized how great of a writer you were, already in this fic i laugh and cry and well not cry but you ge tthe dramatics. Im proud of you for sticking with it and cant wait till you get over your block so i can read more.

    Crystal
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  • From ANON - travieso on April 15, 2004
    Hey. Great job, but you should really post the next chapter. It should be done by now. Oh, and you're welcome for helping you out with the next chapter...yes, it's me...and thanx again for helping me. Laterz.

    -travieso.
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  • From ANON - Lela on February 18, 2004
    Please, Please, Update. If you do I'll give you the biggest cookie in the world!
    I need to read more. Are they finnaly going to admit there feelings?
    I need to know, Please the suspense is killing me!!!!!!
    By the way, your story is fabulous! Simply brilliant! :)
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  • From ANON - Hana on February 18, 2004
    Hey, I love your story.
    It's perfect, and I love the way that the Sareiu is training Hiei, very original.
    I like it alot, very entertaining.
    Please continue, I want to read more of your work!
    Congrats on the Graduation, I'm happy for you.
    Great Job Midnight Demon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on January 19, 2004
    Your story is good! Oh and congradulations on graduating!
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  • From ANON - nina on January 19, 2004
    This is a very cute Hiei story. I like that this girl is stronger then Hiei, it's a good twist. Keep going. Please don't take too long to update!
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