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By : Yuki
  • From ANON - Pauline Martinez on March 07, 2004
    th story was good but i need to know what haapen. so please get the next story upASE!ASE!!! i jsut readed both right now so i really need to know what happen.(You konw i was typing so fast i had go back and fix) Oh the story was good. i mean that asshole really needs to die and Hedi was just funking pissed i would too if someone did that to my lover. so good job. Just get that next story up!!!now!!! Umm sorry about that. please forgive me i just want to know what happens. So goodbye^_^.
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  • From ANON - Kori on February 29, 2004
    Cool lemon! Wait, lemons aren't cool they're hot. So, HOT LEMON!! Kurama did a vanishing act? Strange where did he go?
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 28, 2004
    Wild story. Poor Kurama. I love a pissed-off Hiei. More please very soon.
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on February 28, 2004
    OMG why is kurama dissappearing?!?! you better update faster this time you, you.. you great author you!!! LOLS. update soon =]
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  • From ANON - katy on February 28, 2004
    Keep it up. i want to know what is going on with kurama!!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on February 18, 2004
    Wow,this is some story and yes I'd like to see what happens.I hope you update soon,I'd like to see Hiei kick some major ass and do some major damage to that kid for hurting his fox...
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  • From Yuki on February 15, 2004
    Hey guys, I'm SO sorry for not having the next chapter up yet...but Ive been having a few problems lately and it's been hard to do a lot of things so be patient PLEASE! Im really sorry T_T dont hurt me!
    ~Yuki~
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 14, 2004
    How about the next chapter already. I can't stand the suspense any longer. I want to see Hiei kick some major ass.
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  • From ANON - Kori on February 11, 2004
    me like so far. MAKE HIEI KILL THAT BASTARD!!!
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 08, 2004
    This is such a great story. Please update. I want Hiei to beat the crap out of this guy. One big complaint I have. Well, it's more like whining.
    You didn't write out the entire rape scene, only the beginning when he over-powered Kurama. And you have to explain why Kurama was such a wuss and couldn't fight back against a human. Can't wait for the next chapter. Your a very good writer. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - foxhiei on February 02, 2004
    finish this please. it is very good so far and disturbing at the same time.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on January 26, 2004
    Hhhhheeeyyyyyy! Thanks everyone for the great reviews!I love you all sooo much! I appreciate the fact that you all like my story. I think Im just happy that you actually gave me time to read my story. lmao Im so pathetic lol last story was just...sex O.o this one has more thought to it hehe and just to let you know I get more writing...ability (if that what you wanna call it) When ppl review...dont ask I just have to have a reason to wtire lol I guess...as I've said so many times before Im a moron so you guys can review like a million times if you wish I really dunt mind at all and tell your friends about my story if you can cause more reviews is gooooooood lol Well thanks again for reviewing ^^ and sorry if I made some spelling errors o.o;;
    ~Yuki~
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 25, 2004
    hey i dont think it stinks..I like it alot..feel heart broken for my poor Kurama but I just know my Hiei will kick azz for his fox..he will wont he?? he must please please update please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Taryn on January 24, 2004
    your story is really good so far, please continue it
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  • From ANON - YoukoKitsune on January 23, 2004
    verygood can't wait for more please put brad thru some pain for what he did other than that wonderful story
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