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Reviews for Yusuke at the Beach

By : hiei77
  • From ANON - Laesk Light on October 26, 2006
    i find this story to be pretty good, it is nice to read
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  • From ANON - Foxgirl_500 on July 01, 2005
    Mesh Likes! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - sarah on December 04, 2004
    I like this please contiue
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  • From Jakuri on March 04, 2004
    Why'd...you leave it at that?! ::rubs hands together:: Let's see some hot Kurama action soon!! Spicy lemon!

    J3
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  • From ANON - Katy on February 09, 2004
    Hey i think that was the best massage i ever heard of!! That was a very good chapte. Only one thing missing..Kurama? Where was his action??
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 09, 2004
    Now that's the way you do it. Well done!!!!!!! Please write more. I love this story. Let's get Kurama in this next chapter. Very hot. GREAT PAYOFF!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 08, 2004
    You can do your lemon in the next chapter. You've done so well with this story so far. You're a good writer and very creative. However, if you're not able to write a lemon due to personal matters, i.e.: your parents. Then perhaps you should change your rating to "R". Because people who choose to reach "NC-17" are doing so for one reason only, and we all know what that is -lemons-! All I'm saying is that it's very disappointing to start reading a really good story, such as yours, and then not get the payoff in the end. Please find time to finish your fic the way I know you want to. Good Luck. KEEP WRITING, YOUR VERY TALENTED.
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  • From ANON - kat on February 07, 2004
    hey this is a really good fic I cant wait to read more!! I diI didn't mind this chapter not being a lemony... I only wish the chapters were longer but hey keeps you waiting and wanting more!!! and you up-date a lot I check everyday cant wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - iJ3i on February 07, 2004
    No disappointment on this side! Yummy chapter!

    J3
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 03, 2004
    I think your writing is very good. I'm enjoying this story. I think you did a great job with the car ride, it's a slow build up. As for your upcoming lemon. Just take it one step at a time. And don't forget detail. People like to visualize what you're writing. I would take a little more time and make your next chapters longer. We all know how long other writers make us wait for an update. Why should you be any different. I don't mind waiting as long as it's good. Good luck. I'll be waiting. Chow for now.
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  • From ANON - Katy on February 02, 2004
    That was real good! Take your time a forced fic is never good!!
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  • From ANON - LadyVamp on February 02, 2004
    THEY HAVE TO GO TO THE APPARTMENT CAUSE YOU CAN'T LEAVE HIEI OUT OF THIS ONE.
    HIEI AND KURANMA BELONG TOGETHER NOW ADDING YUSUKE TO THE MIX IS A NICE TWIST.

    THANKS FOR WRITING THE FIC
    AND FOR READING MY REVIEW

    LADYVAMP ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jena on February 02, 2004
    Go to Kurama's place, I like this threesome. Update asap!
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  • From ANON - J3 on February 01, 2004
    Oh, to Kurama's place most definately!! Let's see some hot boy on boy on boy action! ::smacks lips:: Yeah! (And on another note...college sucks! But don't let me discourage you. It'll be worth it in 2007 when I'm oh-so-out of there!!)

    Waitin' fo' mo'!

    J3
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  • From ANON - kuramaandhiei4evr on February 01, 2004
    ^^ A little short, but it was still good. PLEASE MAKE THEM GO TO KURAMA'S PLACE! *begs on knees* hiei...kurama....yusuke....=FUN! ^_^ please update soon!
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