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Reviews for The Walls That Lie Between Us

By : Wenderric
  • From ANON - clowangel on December 21, 2006
    I cannot believe you had stopped right there. O_O I was waiting for a lemon and BOOM! .... the end. haha.. But beautifully written one-shot. If only you had continued for a few more paragraphs, I would be happier. XD

    Still, you must find it strange for a review to pop up now since this fanfic is somewhere at the end. :P I've been spending hours looking for a good HK fic and I found yours. ^^ So yeah.. Heh. :) I only see one YYH fanfic you've written though. :( It'd be great if you could write more.

    - Clow Angel
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  • From ANON - AnnaJaganshi on August 16, 2006
    That was an... interesting place to stop. But it was a good story, you should add to it. Keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - Foxgirl_500 on June 27, 2005
    A. the beging of the fic makes no sence when compared to the end. B. The fic just STOPS. and C. I don't think Hiei would rape Kurama if he was stariting to love him (lust after him maybe, but not love) But still please write more, I want to no where your going with this.
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  • From ANON - TGB on January 21, 2005
    Nice story and all. But, that isn't really a lemon. You should add more chapters or something.
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  • From ANON - techempath1 (not signed in) on October 13, 2004
    That was so great! No I're tre their relationship isn't all lovey-dovey, and you put a great spin on that. Great job! Can't wait to read more of your fics.
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  • From CarlaLou on September 07, 2004
    Good story. I really liked the part where you had both Hiei and Kurama thinking the same things; about not trusting each other, and wanting more but not knowing how to go about it. I also liked your disclaimer. It made me think about something I've always believed would happen if anyone asked H&K whether or not they were gay. I think Kurama would giggle, raise his hand to his mouth, and turn away without a word, and Hiei would snort and say, "I can't believe you brought me here just to ask me that," then blur away.
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  • From EmbersEye on July 17, 2004
    Awesome story. I completely agree with that version of their relationship. The only suggestion I have is that you edit/proof read this fic...and write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Nina on February 24, 2004
    I just loved this. What wonderful insight you have into the emotions and feelings of Kurama and Hiei. I don't know what you could have done or added to make this story any better. Excellent job. You're a very, very talented writer.
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  • From ANON - little one on February 23, 2004
    that was beautiful. so well written too! It had depth and substance! Spicy and angsty too! Two thumbs up! You are an excellent writer! Kisses!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anya on February 23, 2004
    Gorgeous!!!! I love the story REAL much!!!! The best thing about it is that it’s not as fluffy as the other’s stories of Hiei & Kurama getting together.
    Hope you’d write something more in this style.
    Best Wishes, XD

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  • From ANON - teresa on February 23, 2004
    Yay! I would have never found this if it hadn't been right at the top, of course. Changing your pen name...how evil. So yeah, looked at the codes...you aren't that bad, don't worry. And it makes it better that you have never DONE those things. So yeah, don't feel like a ho. Agent Marmalade also enjoyed the codes, hella funny.
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  • From ANON - Katy on February 23, 2004
    That was really cool!!
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  • From ANON - jadewtch on February 23, 2004
    really great take on kurama - hiei =) i could definetly see it happening that way
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