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Reviews for Rose, Fire, and Dragon

By : wilbj
  • From ANON - EvilS. on March 15, 2004
    Great story! Your lemons are just fine the whey hey are. Please update soon. I love this story, if you don't put up another chappy soon, i'll just die! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - nina on March 14, 2004
    I think you did a nice job with the lemon. It did seem a little rushed through, but considering how horny the guys were at that point. It made sense. Maybe the next lemon have them slow down a bit and do some exploring of each other. And I'm glad that you're going to make this about Yusuke. Because when you get right down to it. Kurama and Hiei have the majority of fics and pairings of any other anime characters. Not that I don't love them because I do. It's just nice that finally several Yusuke fics have been popping up recently, which makes me very happy. Good luck with the rest of the story. I'll be watching for updates.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2004
    how can someone write such a good story, but not do well in language arts???
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  • From ANON - Kimothy on March 14, 2004
    Wow i think your relly good at it and i got hot just reading it..;)
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on March 13, 2004
    o0olalas. a knock on the door, if its kuwabara and he's gonna join, i will be very sickened and i'll try to pretend its someone else. LOL. but itf its kuwabara and he's just gonnaget very freaked out, then im all for it. LOLS. WHOEVER IT IS, UPDATE SOON =]
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  • From ANON - sidhechild on March 13, 2004
    Two words.... Please Finish!! I will die (falls over) not really but I would love more
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  • From ANON - Anya on March 13, 2004
    Good story!! Though, something's missing...guess what!!!- the yellow part!!!! You are evil to end a chappy on that!!!
    Update soon!!!
    Best Wishes, XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2004
    u really are pure evil, to end it like that!!!!
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  • From ANON - SKF on March 11, 2004
    Man talk about bad timing... Great chapter, Update soon,
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  • From ANON - LadyMoon on March 11, 2004
    I want...MORE!!!!!!! Please keep writting, I want to know what happens next, please, please, contune.
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  • From ANON - nina on March 11, 2004
    OK, the guys have got to send Kuwabara on some scavanger hunt to get hut out of the way. I can't believe you left us off there. Big meany. So far so good with the lemon. Don't forget detail and sound effects from the guys. Also, don't rush through the foreplay. I love that you have Yusuke tied up so he has to watch and get all hot. But please make sure Yusuke gets his turn and then some. I've found that more times than not, in these threesomes, that Yusuke tends to get the short end of the stick. Lets make this about Yusuke. Please hurry with the next chapter. Lovin the story, lovin you.
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on March 10, 2004
    o0o0olalas K/Y/H =] yay. the writing aspects of this fic in the first chapter can be improved, to be more emotional or indepth, but other than that i really like it. OMG >.< i hate giving criticism. mostly becuas ei dont take it well. but i love the fic nevertheless. it did get betterin the 2nd chapter. update soon!
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  • From ANON - evildarkkick-assdragonthief on March 10, 2004
    this story is very good. NO! THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!! ITS BETTER THAN FANTASTIC.THIS STORY IS THE BEST I'VE READ DEALING WITH HIEI/KURAMA/YUSUKE! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE SOON! P.S.I CANT WAIT TILL CH.3
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2004
    hurry nd und update soon!
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  • From ANON - WITCHWERE on March 10, 2004
    Fantastic! There is very little H/K/Y threesome fics out there and I am always happy to find a new one. Please don't stop writing it...at least give us a lemony ending!!! Update soon!
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