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Reviews for Eternal Darkness

By : Ravenx
  • From ANON - Nina on April 09, 2004
    You stinker. How could you leave it off there. You better hurry and finish this sexy lemon. I love this story. And I love vampires. Hiei makes the most perfect vampire. Dark and sexy. I'm glad Kurama has taken it so well, but I wonder what he'll think when he finds out Hiei does kill every two weeks and that Hiei wants to make Kurama a vampire too. Should prove interesting. Hurry up you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shin_yue on April 08, 2004
    Kurma should have answered the door naked that would have been less subtle
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 08, 2004
    Sorry to mention - it's on one of the reviews:
    "kireina kitsune" = beautiful kitsune
    "kawaii kitsune" = cute or pretty kitsune
    Sorry it was bugging me a lot. (I just passed 2 kyu of the Japanese proficiency test with the result 350/400 - I'm soooooooooo happy)
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 08, 2004
    Ya-ho!!! I love your story sooooooooooo much!!!! And I'm sooooooooooo glad you updated, can't wait to read more more more & more. ^.^
    And about 'my lil' vampire', it would be "watashi no chiisana kyuketsuki". But it really is preferable to use english version for 'vampire' - Jap. people use it more frequently and it sounds like "Bampire".
    Hope I helped you.
    Don't stay away too long!!
    Best Wishes, XD
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  • From ANON - Katy on April 07, 2004
    That was so cool!! I just love this story.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on April 06, 2004
    I havne't watched any of those movies you mentioned, although I want to. Wow, Kurama was flirting big time with everyone's favorite Kitsune. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - angelkitty77 on April 06, 2004
    lemon lemon lemon we want a lemon
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on April 06, 2004
    i love Hiei as a vampire. . .it fits. . . and i like the way you are writing this. . . very well done. . .

    anyway you asked for a Japanese translation and being a second semester student of the Japanese language i feel compelled to offer assitence. . . my little vampire literally translates into:
    watashi(boku) no chiisai kyuuketsuki
    watashi is more polite. . . Kurama seems like a very polite sort of guy. if he didn't use watashi though he would probably use boku. no implies possession(among quite a few other things. it can get rather confusing sometimes.) chiisai means little or small. you could also use chibi but chibi is rather(make that very) rude. . . and kyuuketsuki means vampire as you said. . . though the word vampire is actually used in Japanese(they write it in katakana and you really can't tell what it isn yon you read it because Japanese doesn't have v. . . it's written more like banpiiya- and yes it's written with the little dash at the end. the dash seems to show up in words with an r at the end or right in front of a consonant or with long vowels, like party, pa-ti-. you can tell when they speak it though. that's how i figured out banpiiya- was vampire)

    however i must say that literal translations aren't always the best things to go with(if you asked someone who is truely fluent in Japanese they could probably come up with a better way to say my little vampire than i have). . . in Japanese, pronouns(such as watashi) are dropped as much as possible and there are often diferent words used depending on a person's relationship to another person. for example the word for a person's own father is chichi, and mother is haha. for someone elses father it is otousan, and mother is okaasan(though in anime people seem to refer to their own parents this way as often as not)

    on a tangent: kireina kitsune means pretty fox *wink* anata wa kireina kitsune desu.(that means you are a pretty fox.)

    anyway i must return to writing the third chapter of my own Hiei centric fic, "Conquest" and bugging my beta over it. . . i wish more people would leave reviews. i would like to know how i'm doing *hint hint*
    . . . *sigh* i really need to stop this self promotion thing. . . naughty me. . . well i'll be off
    ja mata!
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  • From ANON - Nina on April 06, 2004
    I think this was just so sweet having Kurama and Hiei watch the movies together and Kurama slowly trying to cuddle up with Hiei. So many fics have them just jump right into the sex, but this approach is better. Don't get me wrong, I am looking forward to the lemon, big time.
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  • From ANON - silvershuriken on April 06, 2004
    They were awfully cute while they were watching movies, I could actually see them, practically. Very cute and very nice. Thumbs up! Hiei as a vampire is perfect too! Looking forward to more! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Youko Starr on April 06, 2004
    Try 'Ore no chicchai kyuuketsuki'

    Ore - Watashi - Boku (All are ways of saying me or I. Ore is a more pompous way of saying it. Watashi is a polite way. Boku is usually said by guys only.) I've heard Hiei say 'Ore' in the movies and shows on japanese language settings. No is possessive maying it My instead of me or I. Chicchai is little. Kyuuketsuki is vampire. Hope that helped, and hope I got it correctly.
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  • From ANON - Youkojaganshi on April 06, 2004
    *starts to cry* why did you stop there??? *sobs* its was getting good and u stoped ...
    *rubs tears from her eyes* anyway please update as fast as u can type (which i hope is fast...)

    - Youko Jaganshi
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 05, 2004
    Ok, Hiei lives the body...BUT WHY DID YOU STOP AT THAT POINT?!
    Still everithig's just wonderful - please continue soon.
    Best Wishes, XD
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  • From niki on April 05, 2004
    Great:)Plz update soon,k
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  • From ANON - Kori on April 04, 2004
    I like where this is going! Just don't make it an angst ok? Please keep it up!
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