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Reviews for Memories of a Life Long Passed

By : ShadowsCall
  • From ANON - Aenima on May 15, 2004
    update dammit lol

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  • From ANON - Craig on May 01, 2004
    your workon mon more right? I alone know how much of a tease you are, for MORE than 3 reasons I can point out? ;) But come on hun... don't leave us hanging for too long. >:D
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  • From ANON - Aenima on April 30, 2004
    lol! I love this...update soon and keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 30, 2004
    Great lemon part!!! Please continue soon!!!
    Best Wishes, XD

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  • From ANON - Craig on April 29, 2004
    I read it :P ;) yes I liked it, very well done. I'll prove it later. Can't wait to hear what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 27, 2004
    Hey!!!! Come back already!!!! Still love your story not to mention that you’re a tease.
    There’s not only Hiei craving for more, you know?
    Best Wishes, XD

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  • From ANON - Naur on April 23, 2004
    Awesome s! I ! I need more!
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  • From ANON - IchigoKumaguro on April 23, 2004
    Thank you for giving me the URL to this! ^^ I love the story!! Please keep writing!

    (Ok, I'm not good at reviews, but hey. ^^;)
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on April 23, 2004
    you said you wanted constructive criticism. . . *cracks knuckles* well here we go.

    overall the story is good. I do have to say that i'm not overly fond of Hiei/Kurama romances which is why i haven't read this story before(in all truthfulnes i am extremely sick and tired of Hiei/Kurama. nothing personal). It is, however, quite good for a Hiei/Kurama romance, with enough original bits to keep my interest. The Kurama/Kurounue parts were a pleasant surprise and i enjoyed them greatly(you might want to change the summary to mention that. it would have caught my interest and you wouldn't have had to ask me to read it). i wouldn't mind reading a story just about them. you have integrated the past and the present well though i did have some slight confusion over chapter 3, i believe it was. In the begining there is a Kurama/Kurounue section and later it switches to Hiei, waking from an erotic dream about Youko Kurama. I'm assuming the Kurama/Kurounue part is Hiei's dream? if it is i can only think that you're setting things up for Hiei to be some sort of reincarnation of Kurounue. That appears to be where you are headed. . .and if it is i must say that it is a very original idea.

    overall your grammer and spelling were both excellent. i only spotted two mistakes, both in the first chapter.
    the first mistake was the phrase, "passers byers" it would be more appropriate to say passers by.
    the second mistake was the phrase ". . . hinder my search than help it. . ." it would be better to say ". . . hinder my search rather than help it. . ." the change s ths the sentence clearer.

    your story is good and well written, and if you're going where i think you're going, creative as well. as long as you keep up the creative components and don't fall into the cliches of Hiei/Kurama i will continue to read this, if only for the Kurama/Kurounue parts(did i mention that i'm really fond of the Kurama/Kurounue parts?). i will be waiting for your next chapter.


    now i read yours and reviewed it on request from you. all i ask is that you please read and review one of mine in return. ja mata
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  • From ANON - Keaira on April 14, 2004
    Oooo, very good. I'm glad you reminded me to read it! *saves to favorites*

    ~Keaira~
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 14, 2004
    Really like your story, please update soon!!!
    Best Wishes, XD
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  • From ANON - Anya on April 13, 2004
    Please continue soon – you’ve got a very good story!!
    Best Wishes, XD

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