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Reviews for Don't Say A Word

By : serenestorm
  • From ANON - shini on November 21, 2004
    its different from other storys i have read. an i like that. its totally original!! please continue. i would like to see what happens!!^_^!!please update sooon!!!
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on August 29, 2004
    bahh!! evil! you can't stop there, someone has to come and save yusuke!!! please please write more sooN!
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  • From ANON - rheanen on June 28, 2004
    this is very dark it a good strat write more poor yusuke
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  • From ANON - Katie on June 18, 2004
    Hey! nice fic! I can't wait till you get your next chapter is up so hurry!!! ^_^ and you're right..things like that do happen saddly. I had a pastor who did that =/ anyways..good fic! hurry up and write the next chapter please! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nina on June 11, 2004
    I think your story is awesome. I think it needs to be written and continued. I think Sensui needs to eventually die painfully. I think you're creative and a very good writer. You keep this story going. K.
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  • From ANON - Kira on June 11, 2004
    I LUV IT !! PLease continue and write more!!
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  • From ANON - altarofwishes on June 10, 2004
    Finally an author that doesn't make child abuse/molestation/rape and all that other stuff look fun/errotic/heroic. We need more writers like you!
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  • From ANON - War-chan on June 10, 2004
    Well its not the best in the world but most aren't......
    very nicely done I hope you contiue and update soon.

    Ja! ^_^
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  • From ANON - evilchild(not signed in) on June 10, 2004
    Oh, thato sao sad! And he's so young!!! I almost cried! *tear* Please contine! I would really like to know how this affects Yusuke in the years to come.
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  • From ANON - rhi-chan on June 10, 2004
    waahhhh!!! thats soo mean !!!but it was written welll nice little shota boy...! ah gomen.
    yes yes....its good enough to be continued and updated and such...hai!
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  • From ANON - Rebecky-mo on June 09, 2004
    Whoa, interesting concept indeed. Sensui, Yusuke's abusive father (stepfather). It sounds like it would be a great series, but it may be harder to pull off if you keep the chacacter's at such a young age. Though, you could use this chapter as a dream/nightmare/memory of sorts, having older, teenage Yuusuke waking up. Could do this before the Sensui saga too, have Yuusuke flip out when he comes back. Plus, it could be good stuff for a possible Yusukexsomeone pairing *cough Kuwabara!cough* >_>.....

    *stop ranting* But whatever you do is cool too. ^^;;
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz on June 09, 2004
    You should defina mak make this a series because people do ignore the signs and sometimes help comes too late. Also, the plot seems very well thought out and well written. I love how you put the lulluby as the song for the prolouge, gave it a certain mood. Anyway, update soon =]
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  • From on June 09, 2004
    No no no no no no no no no! Not Yusuke! No! No! No! NO! Yusuke is cool...and nice..and *rube away! screaming and crying to her mommy becasue Yusuke is etting abused by some nut!* In the series, I HATE Sensui! I HATE HIM! I HATE HIM! I HATE HIM! Poor little Yusuke. And yes! We adults need to doethiething about the whole child molng sng stuff! I see things like that on the six o'clock news! And it really pisses me off! Children are our future! We should take care of them! Child molesting is wrong all the way around anyway! ~Yamistar
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