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Reviews for The Betrayal

By : vampmistress76
  • From ANON - Missy B AKA razielslittleflamekaat on June 24, 2011
    Oh gosh this is amazing! Tell me you're muse is ok because I so want this story to continue. Please update soonest!
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  • From HannaFO on April 04, 2011
    I really hope you someday decide to pick this story up again cuz I really liked it :)
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  • From theklvkid2 on March 24, 2010
    What's going to happen what's going to happen?!?! This better not be the end! It's too good of a fic for this to be the end!!! So, Please, assuage my fears of future lack of closure. Please!!!!!

    klv
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  • From ANON - Roseanddragongirl on March 01, 2009
    Your doing a great job. Could you write more? I'm interested in knowing how Kurama and Hiei get her back.
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  • From ANON - puppydog on November 11, 2008
    What evil grandparents!!!! I hate them!!!!! Love the story!^-^ Please continue!
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  • From SkyaraSnow on October 28, 2008
    Oh wow. I'm not sure what to say on this, but it was great!!!! Keep up the great work, and hopefully, we'll see an update soon!!!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on October 14, 2008
    I'm on the edge of my seat.. Please update soon.. Don't make me beg!
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  • From Keikura on September 29, 2008
    I love the story please post more chapters, I read the eighth chapter on your Journal though
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  • From ShibuNoNeko on September 18, 2008
    This is great! I'd never been much for threesomes but this has a good storyline and is well written. I'll be waiting for the next chapter^_^
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  • From ANON - rice ball ^^ on June 23, 2006
    OMG!!!! PLEASE FINISH IT!! >.< I NEEEEEED THIS STORY!!! YOU WRITE SO WELL! I LOVE HOW YOU USE YOUR WORDING AND IMAGERY IN THE LOVE SCENES AND THE REGULAR ONES...JUST PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP?!! *POUNCEGLOMPHUGGLE* it would be GREATLY appreciated *puuurrrr* heheh
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on December 27, 2005
    It's over.... Damn, I'm really addicted to this story! It's really good and I'm enjoying it a lot. I love the relationship you have goin here too! I can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - kana on December 08, 2005
    oh my god this was the best story between kurama and kieko and hiei ive ever read.

    thanks for writing it and kept up the good work !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2005
    Oh, please, please tell me you are continuing this story. I especially would like to see if there are any developments in Hiei and Kurama's part in the relationship. It's not very often you find a good story and I absolutely love this one.
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  • From Suryallee7104 on November 09, 2005
    I am glad beyond words that you have your internet back and can now continue with this wonderful story!
    I really LOVE this fik from you and hope you update soon.
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  • From YaoiGoddess on November 07, 2005
    um...eep! Poor Keiko! ;_; *huggles Keiko* I hope it's nothing serious...I mean...her parents haven't even met the boys yet!
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