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Reviews for The Betrayal

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  • From ANON - Sandi59 on November 06, 2005
    I am so glad you are continuing this story! I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on November 06, 2005
    Awww, how sad. Poor Keiko, well at least she has some good support from her mates.
    Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on November 06, 2005
    Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From ANON - Morwen Re on September 13, 2005
    good job! i really, really like this fic and was reading it on mediaminer.org, but you stopped updating there.... i found it here, and just read the new chapter. please tell me that you will update again soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Tazzy on August 19, 2005
    I am completely loving this story! The unique idea of mates in the Makai is interesting and exciting now that Kurama's mother knows of his heiritage and his relationships. *grins* Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on March 20, 2005
    O_OAWESOME!
    I've never even HEARD of a story like this, and how you potray Hiei and Kurama, along with Keiko's teasing side..is magnificent..I have a sinking feeling you might not have updated this story in a long time because its a yu yu hakusho fanfic and most of the fanfiction writers who were hooked on it have long since left the stories half finished.
    PLEASE don't let this be one of those cases. I only go for yaoi, but this story was a exception, even if it did have a bit of Kurama/Hiei
    Beautiful..wonderful story. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on February 20, 2005
    fan-freaking-tastic!!
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  • From ANON - QUIX MIX on February 17, 2005
    AWESME STORY!

    UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Joe on February 12, 2005
    I love this fic! I don't know why I like thid couple so mcuh but I do and I really can't wait for the next chapter and what Hiei will do. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Abbychanb on February 06, 2005
    WOW! this has to be the best K/K/H threeway I have ever read! Hey its the best threeway period! Gotta say just love the way CH. 5 ended!! He tripped! lol! Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - noomma on February 04, 2005
    This is a great fic! Are you going to finish it? I was a bit leery about reading it since it wasn't a Yusuke/Keiko fic, but your summary caught my attention! I never would have thought it but a Hiei/Keiko/Kurama works for me! Please! Finish it! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 29, 2005
    Wow. All I have to say is wow. I absoloutly love your writing style, and I've read all of your Yu Yu Hakusho fics. Please please please continue with this one! I also am very pleased with your pairings, especially the Hiei/Keiko/Kurama, but plain ol' Hiei/Keiko and Kurama/Keiko are great too. Your so descriptive in your stories, please update them all soon, very soon. Very very very soon. Your writitng inspires me to write. I write of Fictionpress and Fanfiction as Kai Kaida. You're really an inspiration. If you wish to IM me, which I seriously doubt, you may reach me at Faerie Candle. I < 3 you! Keep it up, and keep writing! You go girl! I'm rooting for ya! Peace out, yo.
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 26, 2005
    Excellent chapter!! I'm glad that things worked out for Kurama involving his mother. I'm anxious to hear Hiei's response to Keiko's worries. Keep up the excellent work! Please, please update soon!!!
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  • From YaoiGoddess on January 25, 2005
    Aiee! Such long chapters! It took me a little while to read them all so I had to stop and come back a couple of times. But now I've read 1-5, and I have to say this is a great fic! I've never seen anything quite like it. And I love the originality of it all. ^ ^; *snicker* Hiei tripped!

    Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - L on January 23, 2005
    Still very good, i cannot wait for next chapter :)
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