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Reviews for The Betrayal

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  • From ANON - haleygace on January 23, 2005
    I love it update soon.
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  • From ANON - eyesofobidesian on January 23, 2005
    OMG whens the next chapter? and when can i slap yusuke?
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  • From Atropa on January 20, 2005
    I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. It was a great story to start my day with...
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  • From ANON - kuramasbluegurl on January 19, 2005
    CUTE!!!
    I love your stories!!! thanks for the update
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  • From SailorPanda on January 19, 2005
    *snorts* I loved the ending to this. Even Hiei needs to be shaken up every once in awhile. And I'm glad Kurama's patched things up with his mother. Always like to see favorite characters end up happily.

    Will be looking forward to seeing what Hiei will do to comfort her. =D
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  • From ANON - Supi-chan1026 on January 18, 2005
    Love it, love it, love it. write more soon
    pretty please.....
    *huggles*
    -Courtney
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  • From ANON - Starcrossed on January 18, 2005
    DUDE!!! I love it! Never been much of a Kurama/Keiko/Hiei fan but I think this story might just change that...Anyways! Continue its really good, update soon!
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  • From ryukotsusei on January 17, 2005
    Keiko is one lucky girl. Great story, can't wait for Hiei to get home
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  • From ANON - Agirl on January 17, 2005
    Different. Never read a Kurama-Keiko-Hiei fic. Me like! U know i'm surprised that Kurama didn't morph into his demon form while they were...ahem...'bonding'. ~_^ Kurama is a cutie(so is Hiei), but Youko...he's just flat out gorgeous. Keiko, u lucky girl u! Anyhoo it's good to see that Hiei and Kurama are getting used to each other and that his mom is going to visit him. Wonder how things will go. Update soon! ^_^
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  • From ryukotsusei on January 13, 2005
    this is an awesome story, please update soon.
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  • From KuramasBlueGurl on December 08, 2004
    aww what a sweet ending, good job!

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  • From ANON - Miya on December 06, 2004
    Nice chapter! Can't wait till the next one! :D
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  • From ANON - Kaori on December 03, 2004
    Hi ya! I really enjoyed this part of "The Betrayal." Indeed, it made me sad at times, but it was nice. I can't wait till you write the next part for "The Betrayal." If you do and have time, please email me. I'm always busy, so often I don't have time to check. Also I would gladly appreciate it if you did. Thank you very much. ~Kaori.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on November 24, 2004
    Keiko wondered how would Kuwabra act? Simple he would want to beat Yusuke up. Kazuma got Yusuke in a headlock when he first met Botan, threatening him that he better not be cheating on Keiko. I think Kazuma Kuwabara sees Keiko as a surrogate younger sister.

    Hiei-Kieko-Kurama

    Yusuke-Botan

    Now the only other pairing that needs to happen is Kazuma-Yukina. Now that Hiei is mated and feels what it's like to love someone unconditionally, I whould hope he wouldn't object to Kazuma being with his sister.
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  • From kogaluver on November 24, 2004
    Hot, hot story. Very well written. Great lemon between Hiei/Kurama/Keiko. I like how you explained Yusuke's feelings towards Keiko, that he really thought she was the one when he had sex with her. That he didn't use her. The person I am pissed at is Botan. I think she is such a bitch. She was supposed to be Keiko's friend and then betrays her as well. Sorry. I just hate when girls steal other girls boyfriends or husbands. I am glad that it all worked out in the end for everybody, so far at least. Can't wait for more. Please hurry.
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