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Reviews for The Betrayal

By : vampmistress76
  • From ANON - black_neko16 on November 24, 2004
    I think Keiko should try to use the dragon...........just a thought. Anyway I really love your story, great plot! I have never read a H/K/K story before and I think this one is great! Update as soon as possible, I know you have a lot of other stories that you are working on.
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  • From ANON - Lea-chan on November 23, 2004
    Still so so good! I loved that chapter. Update more frequently! argh!
    I cannot wait to see what happeneds, will she become pregnant?! omg! haha..eh
    whos kid will it be? Eh... *confused, but happy*

    Kurama is soo hoooooooooot! *drools*
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  • From ANON - kuramasbluegurl on November 22, 2004
    ohhhhhh nicely done
    man all your fanfics are good
    your very talented
    thanks for the great read
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  • From ANON - LC on October 13, 2004
    That was ... so good! Argh! You rock o.O;;
    *bows in deep respect before the hentai master*

    ~sigh~
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  • From ANON - Ymanetta on September 01, 2004
    Girl you know you need to continue this story. And make them have something like a threesome, or what happends when everyone finds out.
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  • From ANON - Abby on August 25, 2004
    Wow! That was hot! Go Keiko! I'm interested to see how the threesome develops!
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on August 22, 2004
    oh i loved the way this turned out
    i love all your stories
    thanks for the great read
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  • From ANON - Joe on August 22, 2004
    This is GREAT! I never really thought of Hiei and Kurama both loving her but I have to say that they fit together VERY well. I can't WAIT for a next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Sandi on August 21, 2004
    I love this story!
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on August 21, 2004
    So fucking good. You rock my world. I love, love, love this fic. I'm so glad that you decided to continue it. Thank you. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Death Phoenix on August 20, 2004
    That was wonderful!!! Keep up the great work!!! Update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on August 20, 2004
    Thanks for shaing this chapter! Three way bond mating thing. Cool. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I wonder what they'll do to Yusuke when they get ahold of him. Please hurry with the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - dunken on August 20, 2004
    too cool! i loved it. wow, the timing was great, though it was probably more coincidental on my part but that doesn't matter, i still enjoyed it. i have to admit, i didn't see the trio coming but i kinda like. can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - dunken on August 19, 2004
    Wow! another great story started! you have no idea how unbelievably addicted i am to your fics. i've even reread several of them. oh, and while i'm usually very much a kurama fan, i decided to read this and and it's so good, of course. now, since you have me addicted, please, please, please, update soon. also, if you could updat boc that would be greatly appreciated too but i understand that things happen and it can take awhile to update, shoot, i haven't updated my fic all summer. oops. :( even though i can't really talk about updates, i'm still gonna request one soon. :) hehe. til next time!:)
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  • From ANON - Alvida on August 18, 2004
    I thought having the dragon come off of Hiei's arm was way cool, uh, hot.
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