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From ANON - Yukizora on December 09, 2005
Wow, Hiei is VERY out going in this story!!!^^ A new personality ne? Continue!!!
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From ANON - Yukizora on December 09, 2005
Huh? No offense, but I'm not sure what's going on in this story yet. But I'm sure it just gets better from here on right?!^^
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From ANON - blue on June 06, 2005
I didnt hate just yusuke being uke is wrong have a baby is to....please remake it. *begs on knees* pleaseeeeeeez
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From ANON - kit-kit on June 06, 2005
the story was great i loved the lemon and the birth of the kids.
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From kogaluver on June 06, 2005
This was such a fun fic to follow. The last chapter with Kurama and Yusuke giving birth was soooo funny. It was perfectly written. You really did a fine job with this. I was wondering if you're going to do a sequel with Evan trying to get Yusuke back or a quick one-shot side story with Kuronue turning Evan into the fuck toy that he is, LOL. Anyway, wonderful fic and I can't wait to read more from you. CYA ^_^
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From ANON - kwitchr on June 02, 2005
PLESE UPDATE
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From ANON - kwitchr on May 22, 2005
This fic is great. But whats takeing so long for you to update. Plese update as soon as you can.
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on April 20, 2005
Wow. *in awe* That was- Yusuke's pregnant?! *A little in shock* I think this is the very first 'Yusuke's preggers!' fic I've read for this pairing. At least in English I'm sure it is, I could be wrong though. The idea of Yusuke's being pregnant is sort of, er, hard to get around. Which now reminds me, KOENMA AND YUSUKE?! Did I *read* that right? Because I'm certain it said something about Koenma being jealous. *thinks* Actually, that wouldn't be a bad pairing, some Teen!Koenma sex is in the works yep. *jots this down for future reference* Side note: The argument with Yusuke and Kurama was perfect. Yusuke was desperately sarcastic as I'd imagine he'd be in a situation like that, and Kurama finally lost it and almost bit off Yusuke's head (Dirty, dirty, mind -.-). But, did I *read* that right? Kurama is going to have the baby out of his ASS?! *cringes* Poor Kurama.

Which also reminds me, Kurama's baby. You named the baby Kuronue *Beam's happily*, I love you for that. I've always believed that if Kurama had a little boy, he'd most likely name the child Kuronue; afterall, Kurama and Kuronue had such a close relationship, that naming his first son Kuronue would only be appropiate. In a way, Kuronue still live's on *nod*. Oh, just remembered - what are you going to name Yusuke's baby? and what gender? (*Can't help but warm up to the idea of a pregnant Yusuke. Without that damned gel in his hair, Yusuke would be an adorable mommy.*) I'm really curious as to how you're going to handle the Yusuke pregnancy, and now you've got me anxious to read about the pregnancy.

In conclusion, (must always brush up on those essay's eh?) this chapter was very good, in fact, I'm sort of pissed that I can't read anymore about Yusuke's pregnancy *_*. I'll be waiting for your next chapter!
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From on April 15, 2005
Great update! Oh no Yusuke's pregnant too? Poor Yusuke...is he going to keep the baby? I mean with Kurama's baby on the way that may be to much for them. Well anyway great chapter and update soon!!!
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From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on April 15, 2005
Another great chappie ^_^ Yusuke prego too! OMFG that's awesome. Why should Kurama always be the one to get pregnant, ya know. This fic has been such a fun pleasure to read. I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh and thank you so much for the shout out about my fic. That really touched my heart. Thank you sooo much.
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From ANON - Ghost dragon on April 15, 2005
HOLLY SHIT! YUSUKE GOING TO HAVE ABABY?! But Kurama's going to have a Baby!O.O DAMN! you don't see that ever day. I had to read thos all the way though,this is funny
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From ANON - kit-kit on April 14, 2005
yeah a pregnant yusuke*squeal like a little girl* i will forever love you for doing this for me.
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 (Formerly, Lurker/Pervert/Fag/FagHag/etc) on April 03, 2005
Chapter 13:

I Had No Clue This'd be an Mpreg. And I also have no idea how the hell Yoko is able to manipulate Shuuichi's body in order to get knocked up. And YOKO ACTUALLY WANTED TO GET KNOCKED UP IN THE FIRST PLACE?! *Puzzle's this* You just wanted Kurama pregnant didn't you *accusing finger* Knocked up!Kurama scare's me. But, it'd be a pretty site. Because he looks so much like a girl already lmao. Knocked up!Sesshomaru would be fucking delicious. Because. He'd. Be. Knocked. Up. 'Nough said. I've never thought of Shuuichi as pregnant, but I have thought of Yoko as such. I mean as much as he fucked around in the Makai, (FOR 400-500 year's none the less) he's bound to have a few illegitimate kids and, hopefully he's birthed at least one kit - with that sexy fuck Kuronue. Kuronue, my other demon God (sad that he's dead. Him and Yomi would have great rivalry over sexy Yoko). Er. right. Where was I.... OH YEAH! PARTIALLY THE FATHER?! Is that even physically possible with humans? I was just wondering, because then that would be fucked up. Imagine, somewhere out there, you are somehow related to Orlando Bloom. *Drops dead*

Ooooh Kurama talking naughty again. *Is happy this story is going on her favorite "When in doubt, just have sex" path* Now I'm curious. Is Kurama gonna actually screw Yusuke? Or is Yusuke going to somehow manhandle Kurama enough to fuck him senseless (I'm all for Kurama being fucked senseless. Anytime. Anyday. Just get the lube and I'm ready. lmao)

Now. It's been a month since your last update. You. Had. Better. Update. Damnit. Look at all the review's I left you. See, this is called literary support. I'm supporting your ass, so give me some sex (lmfao that sounded real bad)
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 (Formerly, Lurker) on April 03, 2005
Chapter 12:

~HIEI SAID FUCK AGAIN! AND THIS TIME IN CAPITALS! OMFG! *spazzes* I'm not even mentioning the shouting match between Yusuke and Hiei. Because Hiei said Fuck. In Capitals. *boggled*
~LMFAO @ your �Human with Special Abilities Ward�. I also liked the bit about Yoko being too proud to get killed by a *human car*. lol *decides to be a smartass after reading all those MST's.*

//The only reason Kurama was alive was because his Youko half had too much pride to be killed by a *human car* so he kept them alive.//

Take 1-

Sesshomaru: "As opposed to an inhuman car?"
Inuyasha: *stray's from script* "Or as opposed to a human airplane? As opposed to Kagome and the Pink Bike of Doom(tm)? She's way more dangerous than any human car."
Sesshomaru: "*eye's Inuyasha* *look's around*... I half expected her to pop out of no where and 'Sit' you. Yes, if you get Sat for being alive on a good day, then that was definitely 'Sit' worthy."
Inuyasha: "Feh, it's because Ash has placed a hex on her, she's now being groped by Jinenji and Naraku's recording it. The more shit I have to blackmail her into taking off this damn necklace, the better."
Sesshomaru: "And how, praytell, are you going to get your hands on that tape?"
Inuyasha: *cough* "Er..." *murmur*
Sesshomaru: *poison claw's hiss* "What did you just say?"
Inuyasha: "Well... I just promised Naraku that I'd inform him when your next heat comes... *crack* HEY! NO HITTING ME! ASH! HELP!" *flee's*
Sesshomaru: "How DARE you whore THIS Sesshomaru?! Come. Back. Here. You. Half-Bred. Whelp! Make no mistake, THIS TIME I *WILL* GUT YOU!"

*Chaos ensues, Ash command's them to sit (no pun intended) and tell's them to stick to the script"*
Ash: You'd do well to act like that did not just occur. Insufferable bastard's. I swear, if you both weren't so fuckable, I would have tied you to Naraku's dick by now. Then we'll see who's laughing.
Inuyasha: But no one was lau-
Ash: *glare's and silence ensues*

Take 2-

Sesshomaru: "As opposed to an inhuman car?" *glaring back at Ash*
Inuyasha: "And why did he have to get hit by a car in the first place?" *nursing his black eye*
Sesshomaru: "For suspense. Or Review's. Most likely the latter of the two."

YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU. NOTHING BUT LOVE FOR YOU *huggle, tackles Danni*
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 (Formerly, Lurker) on April 03, 2005
Chapter 11:

OH FUCK YEAH *HAPPY FUCKING DANCE* HA TAKE THAT BIATCH *spike's Evan-the-non-jap* *evil cackle*
*ahem* Now that I've let that out, lol Evan didn't get spiked (unfortunately) but the almost-appearance of Yoko more than made up for it. *happy sigh*

*By the end of chapter is highly pissed off* YOU KILLED KURAMA! (okay, so that's far-fetched but damnit) How could you? *wails* I mean. What'd he do to you? You've abused him the whole time (even though I'm pretty sure he liked the molestation from Yusuke and the over all... mind *pounding* sensation's in between. lol) This does not change the fact that you got him hit by a car. A car. Because he was crying. And running in the street? *eye's that* Do I hear some 'All My Children', 'General Hospital', and 'Passion's' in there? lol I'm a little peeved with the 'Let's have random shit happen to Kurama's all ready fucked up life' thing lol but, great chapter still.

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