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By : mhmartini
  • From EmbersEye on December 07, 2004
    Hmm...no offense intended because I appreciated the update but that chapter (incomparison to the first two) was pretty bad. The first two chapters really evoked feeling and were quite well done, while this one is comparable to a parody written on not enough sleep. But I loved the first two chapters and so will definitely continue to read this fic because of its potential. I'll give it another chance ::wink:: Oh and one thing - about the rant about crazy movies - Karasu's hair changes color when he powers up - I didn't know if you knew or were bashing DBZ.
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  • From ANON - GreenFire on December 07, 2004
    I love your story. Please keep more coming! That "Sweet Snow" bit at the end was priceless!
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  • From ANON - StormAz on November 18, 2004
    arghhhhh... another one I've caught up to =/
    Please tell me you're going to continue this?? It is just tooooo cute of a story to let the thing die right here!!!
    The romp through the house while Shiori was watching was absolutely precious. The firebaby actually playing with the kitsune with someone around ... adorable!!! And I'd really like to see if you have them and Hatanaka getting along a lot better at the end of the "invasion of the ningens" ^_~ At this stage, seems like Hiei is ready to let Shiori be a member of the household anytime. Guess we'll have to wait and see ... but ... not toooooo long kk? Onegai?
    Oh, and if you can ... please let me know when you do update?? ^_^
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  • From EmbersEye on November 10, 2004
    That scene was so endearing - you must continue. I cannot wait to see how this develops.
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  • From EmbersEye on November 10, 2004
    Loved it. Lol, I've never really thought about produce that way before.
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  • From ANON - maya on October 24, 2004
    its great n all but u have to do me one thing n thats..........get the next chapter up very soon
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  • From ANON - fan on September 30, 2004
    it was good next chappie
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 29, 2004
    tooo cool,can't wait to see what happens next (blush) poom wam walking in on some great sex.hehe

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  • From ANON - clowangel on September 27, 2004
    Oh wow, the ending was sorta funny with Shiori's reaction. Continue this soon, alright? ^^ It's a good one! Well-written too!
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  • From ANON - Stella on September 26, 2004
    I loved it. Don't ever leave the produce isle again. Hurry up and write the follow-up cause I can't wait to see how Kurama "smoothes things over" with his mom.
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  • From WindCharmer on September 23, 2004
    whooo.. its always shiori who walks in on them. me like me like. kekee. update soon! i wanna see how this turns out
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 19, 2004
    THAT WAS GREAT!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
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  • From ANON - Kyoden on September 16, 2004
    Awesome! Very nicely written. Please keep going. I think you should have Kurama's brother discover about him and Hiei. That would be really cool, especially if he accepts them. It is a great story with a nice plot. Keep going PLEZ!!!
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  • From choukitsune on September 16, 2004
    Tasteful smutty? Erk. Thinking too much about it make brain hurt. Just enjoy smut, like smut very much. Smut good. Yes.. like smut.

    Giggling at Hiei's comment about ningen infestation. Kind of how their house was roach infested LOL.
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  • From ANON - Nyktavykta on September 15, 2004
    Tastefully smutty. Delightfully smutty. ^_^ I loved it! You must update at once! Pocky for you!
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