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By : mhmartini
  • From EmbersEye on August 28, 2005
    I'm so glad to have finally found the end of this story - I've been absent from the Yu Yu section of AFF.net for a while. The ending was very sweet. I'm impressed that you didn't fall into the trap of ending with another long sex scene. It was simple and sweet without any "contamination." I feel that this ending got the point across and was much more final and original than the alternative would have been. I can't believe how prolific of a writer you are, that's a feat in and of itself. Thank you for writing this fanfic and this whole saga. From the fuzzy one.
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  • From ANON - b. on July 27, 2005
    i really enjoyed this fanfiction. normaly i dont take the time to read them, but this one was awsome. i mean it. thank for the good reading material. see ya, and hope you make more, if you do, plz keep me up to date if you want and have the time. bye.
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  • From ANON - Renair (to lazy to log in ^^U) on July 25, 2005
    WOOT!!! Your one of the best writers on here! Very moving story, and can't weight to read the last installment, (or the rest of comeing clean for that matter...) And I love the dig at DBZ you added in, someone finally aggrese with me on that. And please eventually write the death sene and the fammily runone(sp?) Lots of opurtuntiy for funnieness there! (the rununon, not the death sene!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2005
    This was amazing! It was so sweet...not that sickly-nauseating-over-the-top sort of fluffiness that some of the fics out there have, but a genuine sweetness! thank you for being such a wonderful writer!
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  • From ANON - mikai on June 30, 2005
    i actually saw this on Thoth_Moth's profile, and checked it out....nice, nice! that was great. im thyinkin' of reading coming clean...so look out for my review! im a major angst, drama, and fluff and HieiXKurama fan, so yea, give me time, and i'll check it out...great story...*applauds*
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  • From ANON - jenn on June 25, 2005
    This isn't to bad, in fact it's a whole lot better then when i do my Kurama and Hiei lemons. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - morgankit on May 27, 2005
    While I've always liked some of the romantic tones of your fics, this one is more humanly realistic, but a little unbelievable to me (as a huge oxymoron)...

    In purly my opinion: The family thyrapy was a tad off; you know Hiei is openly sarcastic when people bring up his past, but even though he's now in a peaceful, family setting, I don't think he would really openly subjugate his past to Shuuichi and Shiori. Was there supposed to be another installment of the thyrapy? There were a lot of things going on in this story, and the last chapter sort of just... ended, rather abruptly, giving me a feeling that you wanted to finally get it done to continue other projects.

    I sound like I'm flamming sarcastically, but I'm really not! I do like your romance with Kurama and Hiei, and sometimes I keep coming back to look at your lemon fics, it's just this one left me... I don't know. I don't want to insult/upset you with any bad comments.

    ~mk
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  • From ANON - bionca on May 26, 2005
    that was sooooooooo funny i criied please write more it seemed so funny

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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 24, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That has to be the absolute best fic that i have ever read!!!!!!!!!
    Yes,I'm a little hyper,pay no heed.I was in tears during the entire thing.I cried because Kurama and Hiei were so cute,I cried because Kurama got slapped,i cried because this is the greatest story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I have been wanting to review for a long time,and I finall did!!!!!
    Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Signed,
    Miss Terious
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 24, 2005
    No, I don't want it to be over. Well at least you promised a sequil. Hey don't forget to update Coming Clean too. You left it in an aweful place. Update and post soon.
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  • From ANON - Dark Delta on May 23, 2005
    absolutely fantastic ending can't wait for the third part...well actually I can. keep it up
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  • From ANON - D.S. on May 23, 2005
    Whoa! Great ending chapter! I'm sad that it's over but happy that there will be another sequel(plus there's still "Coming Clean" also ^-^) You did a very good job with spelling and grammar throughout the story. Just a few minor mistakes in more earlier chapters. Revising would be good if you have the time, but only if you have the time, don't drive yourself insane. Well good luck with future stories and I'll check those out too! See ya!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 23, 2005
    *sigh* It's done...that's sad, in a way, since thie is such a wonderful story....but as you told me, all good things must end (I really appreciated that, too, because that story was starting to stress me) I look forward to your next story, as well :D

    I think it's cute that Hiei played with Kurama by making him chase him all over the house just because the fox was being worried/overprotective...and good that Hatakana was making efforts and progress toward accepting the two...his gifts were wonderfully thoughtful. My opinion on the lemons...if they fit into the plot line, fine, wonderful, put them in (given that the story is plotted), but if not, leave them out. I think that leaving things to the imagination at the end of this was more effective than a lemon would have been....it fits more with your style that way.
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  • From ANON - Mea on May 22, 2005
    What a great end to a great story. This story will remain a favorite of mine for the rest of my life. Thank you for writing it. It was great. I'm looking forward to the reading Akambo and the rest of Coming Clean. I'll keep reading to the end.
    Sincerely Mea ^_^
    PS- You're a great writer.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on May 22, 2005
    So they're finally leaving huh?
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