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By : mhmartini
  • From WindCharmer on April 03, 2005
    AHHHHHHH! HIEI! YOU BRAVE LITTLE BASTARD! WHY DID YOU DO THAT! NOOO! NOOO!!!! NOOOOO DONT DIEE!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Mea on April 03, 2005
    Mea:Yay! Another update. I really hope Hiei is alright! S.L.H.A.K.: He better be alright or I'm gonna- Mea: Sarah, what the hell do you think you are doing here! S.L.H.A.K.: I'm reviewing with you to save space! What was I saying before I was so rudely interupted!
    :: looks at Mea, who is rummaging around in the closet:: S.L.H.A.K: Oh yay! You had better make him live or- :: Mea hits SLHAK over the head with a bat:: Mea: I'd better finish this before she wakes up. Mea thinking: Sometimes that little monkey makes me wanna..She thinks she's so cool making threats and giving flames..:: SLHAK starts waking up:: Mea: Great chapter, Update Soon!
    Sincerely Mea ^_^
    :: SLHAK pushes Mea off the chair. Mea dives back into the closet:: SLHAK's PS- Hiei had better live or- :: SLHAK gets hit with tranquilizer dart:: Ah crap, not again! :: faintsx_x:: Mea thinking: When will she ever learn. I should have used the gun from the start! Mea's PS- Sorry about her ::whispers:: she hasn't taken her meds today. Again, Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom on April 03, 2005
    This has been an awsome story. I'm so glad you are going to finish it. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - DarkRoseDamael on April 03, 2005
    woooooooooooooooooot! great fic! am so happy to see a h/k pairing all the hiei kurama fics died, or something have you noticed? i have! anyway do you think i can barrow this part of your fic? its just the perfect thing
    “No bloodshed?” he asked. Hiei shook his head. “No one is tied up anywhere?” Hiei shook again. “No death threats?” No response.


    plz ill copyright it to you! let me know.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on April 03, 2005
    Another good chapter...I'm glad Shirori is showing a back bone....but, agh! Poor Hiei!!! I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - D.S. on April 03, 2005
    Wow!...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just finished reading all the chapters and I can't wait for the next update. Oh and about the therapy thing, for having almost no knoledge on it you did a pretty good job writing that part. There was only one mistake, most phychiatrists or counsellors can't tell that much about you in only that short of a time. Oh, and therapy sessions are really annoying. Unfourtunaly I have to go to them every 2 weeks and I hate it! Oh well, what can you do*srugs shoulders* Anyways, you are doing a great job so please continue!^_^

    P.S. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pls?:D
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on April 03, 2005
    Oh no what did you do to poor Hiei! After everything he has been through with Kurama's
    family you bleed him as well .I had no idea this was a sequel to something else but would love to check out the first story.! You didn't say where it was posted (if it is that is)
    can't wait for the update hope its soon
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 02, 2005
    Good chapter. I hope Hiei's all right (well, I think I have a vague notion, considering a recent conversation we shared, hm?).

    I think you should put "Coming Clean" on this website, even if it's not as "adult" as some stories.

    Looking forward to the next chapter! ^__^
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on April 02, 2005
    That was excellent!!! I was at the edge of my seat!!! Poor Hiei....He has to survive...it's Hiei!!!! Please update soon!!! I'll die if you don't!!!
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  • From ANON - MrVampire on April 01, 2005
    This story is the best. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I wonder how the shrink would reacted if Hiei and/or Karma told him they wore demons. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - blu_dragon on March 30, 2005
    aw that chpt was really swt. i thought u did a good job on it. i also see where u get that kurama is the strong one in the relationship since he had grew up w/ a mother that loved him but hiei was a bandoned at a really early age. but it swt to see the caring side of hiei. :)
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on March 29, 2005
    I love this fanfiction. It's about one of the only ones I continue to read here. The therapy session went alot smoother then I thought it would and I truely can't wait to read more of what you are righting. I like that Kurama is the stronger of the two. I never see Hiei as having to deal with his emotions and so he would be unsure in a relationship like this. However, Youko might not have had to deal with emotions, but Shuuichi has, so Kurama would be stronger. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on March 28, 2005
    I've never been to therapy, but the scene you wrote sounded most therapuetical to me. Then again, I suppose sessions do vary depending on the person and doctor, so don't worry if someone deems it "inaccurate" or not.

    That sounds like such an awesome restaurant. ^__^

    I wonder if Hiei will return to the therapist's office, or maybe make Kurama his own personal one. That could prove quite interesting... Anyways, I think this could take some entertaining turns, so I hope the muse helps you update soon. But don't worry, I'll be patient =)
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  • From ss_dragon_lady on March 28, 2005
    YeaH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!!!!!! This was a great chapter. The therapist have them perfectly pegged. I still don't like the stepfather. HE HIT KURAMA FOR PETES SAKE!!!!!! No one should dare hit the fox. Anyway update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on March 28, 2005
    That was all so beautiful (wiping tears from eyes). You did an excellent job with the therapist, just me I've been to a few (looks around nervously) I should defintly know. Anyway, I love this story, have reviewed for a while, been busy and such. However, I will try and make an effort to review, since I really like this story and how it's developing. Please update soon!!!
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