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By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - GreenFire on January 17, 2005
    I love your story. It's very well written, the characters all have a reason behind they're actions which makes the plot move smoothly. That's a charateristic missing from many fanfics but not this one. I love the shift from comedy to angst, it worked very well. Oh and of course I loved the Kurama/Hiei sex scenes as well ^_~
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on January 17, 2005
    Bad Hatanaka! Stressing out poor Kurama like that! But hey, now everything's more or less out in the open, so maybe things will get better, huh? Update soon, I must find out!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on January 17, 2005
    Yay!!! You updated!!! A lot!!! ^___^ OMG, I just love this fic sooooo much!!! Very kewl idea!!! It has a perfect mix of comedy, sensuality (or just plain sex...that's good, too... ^___~ ), and angst...and it's well written!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, kk? Thanks!!!!!
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  • From ANON - StormAz on January 17, 2005
    I didn't even KNOW about the last couple of chapters!!

    Oh ... poor Kurama! Trying to keep everything on an even keal and nothing wanting to cooperate! And Hatanaka ... ooof is he ever being an ass! Well, at least Shu-kun figured it all out on his own (even if daddy DIDN'T believe it at first) and the whole family can know the truth. Isn't it so much fun when parents think their kids are stupid to what's going on around them.

    Favorite parts in the last couple of chapters have got to be Hiei telling the sales girl that one, my house today! and Hatanaka himself saying that the boys were demons. Not to mention the little speech of Hiei's about Kurama facing OMG demons without flinching and not being able to handle one week with his own family! Maybe Shiori will step in now and make Hatanaka mind his own business when it comes to our favorite firebaby and kitsune ... maybe ... we'll see.

    Love the story and I'll be back to check on it here and at the website ^___^
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  • From ANON - BeautyChan on January 17, 2005
    It's okay that it's not full blown comdey.
    It's the diversity that is making this story great.
    However, I'm sad. It seems like this chapter is
    eding to a wrap up with Shuu-kun finally learning
    about the situtaion. Anyway, I hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) on January 17, 2005
    So the story has finally reached its climax. The 2nd bug problem was, given, an author's direct intervention but, Hell, so are most of the twists in story plots. I love the way everything just fell apart with one strike and how Hiei has basically said "Fuck you" to Hatanaka. It's nice to see the softer side of Hiei (I've seen enough terrible OC sap to last me a demon's lifetime). I can't see Hatanaka taking this easily, adjusting will take a long while.

    You already know how addicted I am to this story so what more do I need to say? Oh, P.S. There were a few typos in the last two chapters (6 and 7), but nothing major.
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  • From ANON - maya on January 16, 2005
    must u take so long to update when it gets sooooooo good?

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  • From EmbersEye on January 16, 2005
    Oh man, I'm utterly addicted to this story! I can absolutely not wait to see what happens next. There were a few typos and such, but nothing too distracting in the last couple of chapters. Everything (except for chapter 3, but we won't talk about that one) has been so realistic and believably, nothing too over the top for a week or mortal Hell. It makes the demons' situation all the more frustrating for the readers (i.e. me, lol). I won't pose a guess as to how this will go, I'd rather just wait and see. So please update.
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  • From EnchanteNoir on January 09, 2005
    I have been following this story for a while and I absolutely LOVE IT! Poor Kurama. Damn his father Kurama should have hit him anyway! Regardless though awesome fic! PLEASE update again soonnnnn!
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  • From ANON - The Fire Fae on January 08, 2005
    I want you to kill Hatanaka off as soon as you get the chance. If I was Kurama, I swear I would have chopped off his head by now, he doesn't deserve to be treated like that, no one does. Please put up the next chapter soon, I REALLY enjoy reading this fic.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on January 07, 2005
    To cool,and can't wait for the next chapter to be updated.Poor Kurama and Hiei when will his step brother say something or his mom say something to his stepdad,can't imagine her letting him upset the couple this much.
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  • From ANON - yoarashi on January 04, 2005
    update faster please ill give u candy

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  • From Saka on January 04, 2005
    Wow wonderful story so far! I really really like it. Update soon again. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - me on January 03, 2005
    This is a great story, I love it! Poor Hiei and Kurama they must be clawing the walls by now. What was Shiori thinking when she married that close-minded homophobe? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - BeautyChan on January 03, 2005
    Yes, An Update! An out controlled party- increased intention,
    the story keeps getting better and better. Keep writing.
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