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By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - vincent on October 24, 2012
    I have to tell you that of all of the thousands of stories I have read across the site and internet, this one pulls me back and I find myself reading and rereading it again. I am in love with the plot and that the characters are realistic. Absolutely amazing story that I have read maybe 10 times already.
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  • From ANON - Lici (the lay login brat) on March 03, 2007
    Oh. My.

    Wonderful! I can't wait to finish the third one!
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  • From ANON - Dreamseeker on December 14, 2006
    That was so cute, well-written and creative! Though the transition from over 30 chapters of torture and death in Coming Clean to the comparatively mellow events of this fic was... interesting. Actually, it was kind of refreshing. All in all, very good job on both stories. I'll start reading the next tomorrow. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss on January 22, 2006
    LOL, well, once I got started I just had to finish reading, it's that good of a story. I was very sad when Hiei got hurt, but I am so glad that you decided to let him live. And I'm glad they managed to come together as a family. *waves and goes off merrily to look for more of your stories*
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss on January 22, 2006
    Review for chapters 3 and 4. I feel so bad for Kurama and Hiei. Hiei having to do the *thud* thing so many times on the floor. And I'm going to have to remember that line of his LOL. I also think you've got alot of people's attitudes about same sex pairings correct. Sad isn't it, when people can't be free to live their own lives, especially in their own homes. Once again, all I can say is good job with this story.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss on January 21, 2006
    Well, I just found this story and decided to read it. I've made it through chapter two so far and I must say I am very impressed both with your quality of writing and your plot line. Very tastefully done so far, my compliments to you. I will review further as I read more chapters, just wish I had found it while you were writing it.
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on November 27, 2005
    Heres another review and I LOVE IT!! ^________________^
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on November 27, 2005
    oh my god that is so dan sweet!!! Hieie is so nice to Kurama!!!! Imagine if we got to see that sence on TV!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the fifteenth chappie mind you)
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  • From TristarPheonix on November 25, 2005
    AHAHAHAHA!! I really like this story! I especially appreciate the crack about DBZ. Classic! It was so funny how everyone kept walking in on them. Hiei is funny. "that's it. I'm not getting up."..."Ever. I don't care what happens or who sees me like this, I'm not getting up."
    I like that line. ^^ It made me smile!
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  • From ANON - krystle on November 19, 2005
    I LOVE Coming Clean and Bugs!!!!! When are you going to post Akambo?
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  • From ANON - Kumori-hime on September 12, 2005
    I think that the therapist will be the one needing therapy, when this is over. Imagine it: "Hi, my name is Kurama, and I'm a demon. My lover here is Hiei and he's also a demon. My father is having trouble with that." It wouldn't be easy, to do therapy on that. Love the story!
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  • From ANON - Kumori-hime on September 08, 2005
    You have the whole thing planned out in chapter 5? I'm on chapter 8 of my story, and I only just got the story line figured out! This is great! Love it.
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  • From ANON - Kumori-hime on September 08, 2005
    "Kurama staunch refusal to do so touched the small demon." should be "Kurama's staunch refusal to do so touched the small demon." Grammar isn't all that important, though. It's a great story. You aren't the only one that creates your own timeline. I do that too, and sometimes I remove events from the real thing. XD Mostly because I'm way behind everyone else and didn't know they happened. This is definately one of the better fanfics I've read. I'll have to read some of your other stuff, soon.
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  • From ANON - Kumori-hime on September 08, 2005
    Hiei on sugar? you better show us what happens when Hiei is on sugar. If you don't I'll write about in myself. And I don't care if that chapter was 'pointless', it was great. Like a one-shot in the middle of a story, actually. well, this definatly lives up to expectations. (I expect more from stuff that's recommended to me than stuff I find. XD) Can't wait to keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Kumori-hime on September 08, 2005
    Fuzzy Eared (ff.net) recommended this to me after I read Unbalanced Pendulum. She was right. This is great stuff. And done very tastefully. for your first (postable) lemon, that was really good. Damn, if Mom knew I read this stuff I wouldn't even SEE the computer for at least a month. But it's great stuff. I'll glad this was recommended. ^.^
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