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Reviews for Alpha

By : Ametank
  • From ANON - Serena on January 21, 2005
    i loved it!!!! omg, i can't wait to find out what happens next, i wonder what hiei's gonna ask me..............
    (hiei walks in)
    hiei: what do i have to ask you onna?
    Serena: ooooooooo nuthin, it's just about a fanfic
    hiei: hn.
    (yusuke and kuwabara walk in)
    yusuke: yeah!, hiei you should of read what the fanfic said about you and serena getting it on, if you know what i mean........~_*
    hiei: what do you mean?...........serena?
    serena: uh....... um. arh..... don't ASK ME EHEHHEHHEHEHEH!...........
    kuwabara: oooo yeah you should of read hiei, it was disgusting, you and serena were doin the hanky panky......
    hiei: i am no sex object, serena ............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ( kurama and the rest of the group walk in)
    kurama: hiei you misunderstood, you see, it's a fanfic, as you do the group of the urameshi team are famous, and the girls establish a fanfictionfor us, to kind of let their dreams come true, in writing. and the type of fanfiction serena was reading was youxhiei, so it's not really real..........
    hiei: hn.
    serena: yeah you see i would never think of you that way,..................^O^' he doesn't know me very well, do he........heheh heh '
    hiei: 'i can read your mind onna'
    serena: 'hi hiei..............'
    botan: well lets go party
    yusuke: why, koenma is finally gettin off that pacifier, hehahaha
    kuwabara: yeah, i was thinking when he's getting off of that.........
    keiko: yusuke even though i have to agree with you, he's still your boss
    kurama: well then shall we go?
    serena: Wait! i gotta send this email...........then put my computer in standby........*gets goin*
    hiei: come on onna,.................
    serena: i'm comin i'm comin,..
    *types*: hey update as soon as you can, hiei can sometimes be a jerk, but i love him, heheh hehehe
    thankies
    serena: let's go hiei........*grabs his arm,..........and kisses him on the cheek*
    hiei: *blushes* hn.
    serena: oooooo hiei you look sooooooo cute, you don't have to be blushing, your with me only
    *serena and hiei leave the room*
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  • From ANON - Asilin on January 21, 2005
    NO!!! Evil cliffie! a very good, well-placed cliffie, but evil nontheless. *growls* why'd you have to stop there???? please, please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - kyli the wolf hanyou on January 21, 2005
    update sooooooooooooon
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  • From ANON - denise on January 21, 2005
    wow, this is great! update soon!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - cassie on January 21, 2005
    ashley it be getting better and better with every second i read it... how could u have left that stinkin cliff hanger, it was horrible cause i couldnt read the next chapter right away. ryan had walked in the room so i got distracted talking to him. so yea i think ive said enough, if u want to know mroe about what i think u can always ask me and believe me i could probably go on and on about likes and dislikes, but that dislikes would probably maybe be like two things so yea...keep up the great writting :)
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  • From ANON - Tibbi on January 21, 2005
    One of these days i'll review when i'm logged in, haha. Ah love, it's perfectly awesome. i dont' think i'll ever be able to tell you enough how much i love it!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on January 21, 2005
    I am scaried about Hiei's request....what is he going to ask me? Will I ever forgave Kurama for that he said about my pack? I need more update soon...
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  • From ANON - Serena on January 20, 2005
    I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOO, ok.........lol, can't wait for you to update, i hope the situation that just happened gets cleared up...can't wait to find out want happens next.........
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  • From ANON - kyli the wolf hanyou on January 20, 2005
    i saw the movie. i thought that it was ghetto how they changed the voice characters.
    can i be on the mailing list for your updates my e-mail is Aparis15@aol.com, update soon
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  • From ANON - Asilin on January 19, 2005
    which movie are we talking about? the 2nd one? cause i thought Hiei's voice was quite good for that one...*blushes* neway, interesting chapter. what's going to happen next?
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  • From ANON - crystal_moon13 on January 19, 2005
    argh! I hate you! You always write cliff hangers and I have to wait a week until I find out what happens! hehe sorry. I really love your story, please keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hiei Lonewolf on January 19, 2005
    "You say that she is unmated, but yet she is pregnant...? I am confused there, although thisis a good fanfiction and I do enjoy reading it. it actually has a plot that is not just about sex.... But do continue."
    - Hiei Lonewolf
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  • From ANON - Dani on January 19, 2005
    God, that was great!And, yes! It felt like centuries~ before you updated! Thank you~. Glad your inspiration hasn't thrown the bucket in the well!
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  • From ANON - denise on January 19, 2005
    hey great story, took a long time to update but it's alright. i hope you keep on updating quickly though ^-^ heh
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  • From ANON - Dark Priestess on January 19, 2005
    Took you a while to update huh? Oh well, it was worth it. I wanted to die when I watched the Yu Yu Hakusho movie too. They could've at least had the same voice for Kuwabara. (It would've been funnier that way)
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