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Reviews for Alpha

By : Ametank
  • From ANON - hm on November 20, 2004
    Cool story, but well you last chapter seems to be cut off. Is that just my comp? Cool story though, love the main character.
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  • From ANON - hm on November 20, 2004
    Cool story, but well you last chapter seems ot be cut off. Is that jsut my comp? Cool story though, love the amin character.
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  • From ANON - Tinberg-san on November 08, 2004
    Another awsome chapter. You really are one of my favourite authoresses. Keep up your great writing skills and I look forward to your next chapter. Ja!
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  • From ANON - cassie on November 08, 2004
    hehehe my ashley has done wonderfully. i loved the chapter. the events made me want to keep on reading it. the only thing i didnt like was when i saw ure little comment about reviewing...that meant the chapter was over and i didnt like that it was over since i would have loved to have more. good god that was a long drawn out sentence that didnt need to be there.
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  • From ANON - i read. i review. 'nuff said. on November 06, 2004
    i would like to ne on your e-mailk update list, please. loving this fic. please continue.
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  • From ANON - Dark Priestess on November 05, 2004
    Once again I'm reviewing to tell you what a great writter you are! Thanks for the lemon ^_~ Post the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Zigs on November 05, 2004
    great chapter ^-^ i hope you update soon, okay? You did good for your first second-person lemon ^-^ keep up the good work *gives Hiei plushie* Ciao! *dissappears*
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  • From ANON - Shera on November 05, 2004
    Please email me when you update this story, I realy like it^_^.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on November 04, 2004
    It was a great lemon....I love Hiei, but I never think about him as a lover....you did a really good job, it's so Hiei......I know Hiei is Hiei but he should be a little more nicer to me.....Are we going to fall in love soon????? UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Dani on November 04, 2004
    Oh god, that was great. Please update really soon. Great lemon also. You should do another *winkwink*
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  • From ANON - Asilin on November 04, 2004
    YAY!!! LEMONY-GOODNESS!!! can't wait to see how hiei handles his "dominance issues." LOL. neway, can't wait till you update!
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  • From ANON - Neoki Jaganshi on November 04, 2004
    yay lemon with hiei-sama great chapter by the way i cant wait for the next this is the one thing getting me through school (don't asl how) update soon!
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  • From ANON - denise on November 04, 2004
    coolness! update soon! made me go: O.O while reading it lol
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  • From ANON - tryxi on November 04, 2004
    great story so far. love it. pls send me a email when u update i want to keep up w/ this story. :) hugs
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  • From ANON - Serena on November 04, 2004
    hey i read it and i have to say i loved it!^^ to be quite honest with you out of all the lemon i've read it was the best up date as soon as you can. you can email me yet again when you've upd. id. i'l be waiting

    thankies ^^*""""""""""""
    hiei: you have to shut up onna! *takes out katana*
    yuyusailor13: i guest u don`t want sweet snow, it's all for me then *starts eating*
    hiei: drop my sweet snow onna *walks toward serena a.k.a yuyusailor13*
    serena: hiei if try anything i'll tell yukina that your her long lost brother *smirks*
    hiei: *sweetdrops*
    serena: oh hiei of coarse i'll give you sweet snow! *hands hiei a bowl of sweet snow*
    hiei: *starts ending* up......date or i'll you you! *unshelths katana*
    serena: hiei put the katana away! *serena puts it away for him*
    *kurama walks in*
    kurama: hiei, serena what are you two doing here.
    *serena and hiei look at eachother confused*
    yusuke: yeah were you 2 planning to do something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    kuwabara: urameshi please don't make me think about that stuff, it will be scary to serena and hiei doing something or even doing anything together!
    botan: serena spill. =^_^='''''''''''''' meow
    *hiei and serstarstart chasing everyone*
    botan,yusuke, kurama, kuwabara: up date!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............wahhhhhhhhhh
    hiei and serena: GET BACK HERE BAKAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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