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Reviews for Alpha

By : Ametank
  • From ANON - Tinberg-san on November 03, 2004
    I love this story. I read it the first 4 chapters on mm.org, not sure if I reviewed or not- I'm really bad at remebering to do that type of stuff- but I really do respect the effort you put into this. I'd really be happy if you could email me when you update. Well, much praise- Tinberg-san
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  • From ANON - Serena on November 03, 2004
    hi, i would like to tell you, i like the way the story is coming out. keep up the great work! ^^ E-mail me when you up dated!, i can`t wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^*
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  • From ANON - Mookie-Chan on November 01, 2004
    hey it's mookie-chan have u read my fics? like the story keep it up^_^



    I reviewed for yours so PLEASE REVIEW FOR MINE your life your youko and the squeal k?
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  • From ANON - denise on October 31, 2004
    i love your story, keep it up. is it possible to email me when you update? thanks in advance!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on October 31, 2004
    I just found your story and I like it alot.....update soon and it you can email when you are updating. I can't wait to read more....
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  • From ANON - Saiyuki on October 30, 2004
    Wow! This is really good! But I just have a couple of questions. Before I ask, though, you gotta know that I am only informing you of these in the correct way, and that I'm Japanese (or half, anyway) so I kinda know what I'm talking about.

    First, I wanted to know why you chose Kami as a name for your pack leader. Erm, Kami is god, if you don't know, and it just didn't make sense to me...t ift if you wanted to make her seem godly or something, it worked! I was so held in awe!

    Next, why Okami for the brother's name? Well, Okami is the name of a women inn keeper or care taker of a hot springs. It just seems wierd for the guy to have a women title as a name.

    And last, but not least, when Hiei calls Kami-san 'onna', why did they take it as an insult? Onna just means girl, so why did the OOC freak like that?

    PLease don't take this as a flame! I was just asking a couple of questions I wanted to have answered! I'd appreciate it if you emailed your reply to me!

    Saiyuki

    P.S: You can bet I'll keep reading this story, so please keep updating! And send me an email when you update, if you can! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - pensword on October 30, 2004
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - misa on October 30, 2004
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Neoki Jaganshi on October 30, 2004
    i want a e mail when you update! so thats what a surgute is. it really really sucks thank god i dont have one update soon.
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 28, 2004
    Okay, i just wanted to know how surrogate applied in this situation. nice chapter! and would you e-mail me as well when you update? thanks!
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  • From ANON - AoA ^_~ on October 28, 2004
    i like this chapter, it's been a while since i got to read any of Alpha ^_^;. and it's wonderful to see some things really can be cured with a hug, lol.
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  • From ANON - -midnightdemon on October 27, 2004
    i love the story. cant wait for you to update
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 25, 2004
    surrogate??? wtf? and no explanation for us??!! *cries* no fair! please update soon! i've got to know what's going on!
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  • From ANON - Neoki Jaganshi on October 24, 2004
    awsem chapter. question what is a surget? if i am hiei's then what the hell would i need one for? lol love it. continue pplz!
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  • From ANON - Dark Priestess on October 23, 2004
    Thankies for the chapter! Hurry and post the next! ^_^ OH! Can you e-mail me when you are going to update? Please?
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