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Reviews for Alpha

By : Ametank
  • From ANON - neoki on July 06, 2005
    yay my babies are coming! i want to dress them in warm blankets and name them and...sory! pleases updates for the children! they love to be born to the person that is me and my mate hiei!
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on July 06, 2005
    Hm, not too bad! You're a pretty good writer. The only thing that I can think of that might help, is to make the story a little less confusing. In the earlier chapters, I was easy to understand but as this story progressed, it got a lot more complcated and I almost the whole plot line. Now things are cleared up somewhat, but I think that it is rather confusing for some other people. Just a thought though, you don't have to take it seriously, and I hope that you don't take this in the wrong way. I think that this is an amazing story and I'd love for you to continue it as soon as possible. Good luck and get some rest. See ya!
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  • From ANON - InfinitysDaughter on July 06, 2005
    Great chapter! Cant wait for the next one! God I suck at reviews..... *^_^*
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  • From ANON - Sky on July 06, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A HIEI AND KURAMA PLUSHIE ON TOP!!!!

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  • From ANON - ummm on July 06, 2005
    ohh, I loved it! Whens the next chapter? ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Hotaru1421 on July 06, 2005
    hey, good job on the new chapter!^-^ Can't wait for the next one! Let me know when you update,K?
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  • From ANON - Twilight on July 05, 2005
    Yes finally the pup's are going to be born too bad hiei is too much of a jackass to be happy for once *sign*oh well
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  • From ANON - kyli the wolf hanyou on July 05, 2005
    NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, DONT STOP THERE THIS IS HELLA TIGHT. UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY.
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  • From ANON - denise on July 05, 2005
    Heh, good job on this chapter!
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  • From KuwaLover on July 05, 2005
    That was great!! So I'm becoming an Alpha!!! Yeah!!!! But my pups are earily.....I hope this sudden change didn't affect them. Oh I wonder how many I'll have? Oh, please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - yuyusailor13@aol.com on July 05, 2005
    hey, yay finally my pups are goin to be born, i'm soooooooo happy, i hope they come out healthy.... can't wait to read the next chappie!!! keep up the good work. luv it luv it luv it
    Serena
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  • From ANON - TainteD_Flesh on July 05, 2005
    Aiya!!! i'm so sorry!! it's almost done, it's just i had request's from school and fanart-central.net to finish up before i could even start on yours! it will be ready soon, i swear!! great chap. update soon please!!
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  • From TainteDFlesh on June 27, 2005
    umm, i know i just reviewed, but im new, and i can't figure out how to add a story to recomended, is there like a secret code that i didn't know about, or a memo that i didn't get?? bleah, this stinkies...

    ~TainteD_Flesh~
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  • From ANON - lauren on June 27, 2005
    wow, i really likethis story, i don't think i've liked many THIS much, including all the ones i've read on ff.net, umm, two things, 1) i would like to be on your mailing list, muchos gracias, 2) and i wanted to know if you would still like fanart for this beautiful story, because i am more than willing to do so!! oh, please please update soon!! (sorry for any spelling mistakes, it's really dark in here!! X3)

    ~TainteD Flesh~

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  • From ANON - Dani on June 26, 2005
    That was brillant!!! Awesome, amazing. I loved it. But out of all that, I think my favorite part was the tenderness Hiei had for Yukina at the end. Especially after all that. But the way you made up that battle was unbelievably amazing. It was so cool ^^! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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