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Reviews for Alpha

By : Ametank
  • From ANON - denise on March 26, 2005
    woot! nice chapter! its been FOREVER! hehehe, hope next update is quicker! great job!
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  • From ANON - Hiei Lonewolf on March 21, 2005
    "I tried to send you the fanart picture, but it came back to me. Is your e-mail typed correctly, or do you have another I can try sending to?"

    Hiei Lonewolf
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  • From ANON - cassie on March 02, 2005
    hey girl, this thing is getting good. finally had a chance to read it before class. yea there were a few parts that i thought u could have added ure funny parts too. i mean come on ure stories are serious, but they have to have that special touch u have to make them funny too. this last chapter had many a funny line in them. things i could hear u saying in real life. can not wait for the next chapter. thank god u had that chapter after the cliffie otherwise i think i would have had to kill u. u know how much i hate cliff hangers. especially if the next part doesnt come soon after. hehehehehe cant wait for the next chapter. o the lemon, which was the chapter i just read turned out pretty good. i surely enjoyed the entire chapter with all the little phrases of ures tossed in there. im still laughin at a couple of them. :)
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  • From ANON - BlackBloodEyes on March 01, 2005
    I love you story! AHH! The entire day i was like, grr...i want to go home and read! Please write more! Your also one of the only people i know to get Hiei's personality perfectly! I love it! AHH! Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Sada-Z on February 27, 2005
    X.X *takes deep breaths* Scared me for a minute there. Don't do that! -________- *doesn't particularly like Rai*......*at ALL* >.> Though it was kind of a surprise that Okami would be the one to save me. Thought it would've been Kurama or Hiei... Or all three. *shrug* ^-^ Anyhow, great, great, great chapter. *lovereded it* Update soon! o.o
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  • From ANON - nyoko on February 26, 2005
    omg! i loooooooovvvveeee it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dani on February 24, 2005
    Yay~! I kinda figured the lemon (which was so incredibly wonderful by the way) would be with Hiei, but authors/ess throw in twists sometimes. One question, what is that one word with the '*' behind it that Rai had said when he was talking about one body, two souls, one life, thing? Thanks~!!!
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  • From ANON - hiei_lonewolf on February 24, 2005
    "I had not expected Hiei to be questioning of the pups. But then there is a first for everyting I guess. Nice chapter, and do contnue. The picture is being made, just taking a while because of being quite busy. Do continue."

    Hiei Lonewolf
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  • From ANON - Neoki on February 24, 2005
    hiei loves me! and i got to take kare of that idiotic person i am so happy! i am having my seven year old brother read your story! hahahaha thank you for updating cant wait to see more

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  • From ANON - denise on February 23, 2005
    great chappie...hehehe...i hope you update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on February 23, 2005
    You're right ....I did think it was going to be Rai......It was a good lemon!!!! I can't wait to see the pups and what will Hiei do???will he finish the mating rutal or what ...more...more...more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AoA on February 23, 2005
    Mmmm deliciously wonderful, I must say. I do so adore this story and your lemons *sighs contently* Can't wait for more ^_~
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove (somehow not logged in) on February 23, 2005
    OHHHHH! That was good! I loved it! Why won't Hiei just make me his mate and then we can be together forever! I wish I did kill Rai, but then again....I probably would hate myself after words. I hope he shows his true self to my brother, because then and only then will my brother not be friends with the perv. Anyway, I loved it and I can't wait! My puppies! Yeah! Mine and Hieis! Yeah! Sorry lost controll anyway, please continue.
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  • From ANON - kyli the wolf hanyou on February 23, 2005
    update, and yes that wasnt kool, but hey i got hiei, yesss ^_^
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  • From LadyLeaMarie on February 23, 2005
    Another great chapater!
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