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Reviews for Kuronue's Pendant

By : vampmistress76
  • From ANON - chris on January 11, 2005
    cool story. although i think u weren't being harsh enough with the detective, but ok. let me know when you have another chapter up.

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  • From ANON - Kami Anya on January 05, 2005
    Finally, Yay! I have been checking for a new chapter almost every day! This was definitely all I could have hoped for....well, not to mention the evil cliff-hanger....please don't wait so long to update this time, I beg of you! I love the fic, and eagerly anticipate more.
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  • From ANON - vashta on January 04, 2005
    I really really like this story! Does Yusuke get Kagome? I have been looking for a Yus/Kag fic forever! Update please, soon, you are doing a good job with your writing. There aren't any spelling mistakes that I have found and it is original, not just another way to tell the same old story. Are they going to go through the well and get Kuronue's body back, shouldn't that be about the same time? I suppose I have to wait and see. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 03, 2005
    Yay! Angst and a bit of citrus, a lovely thing to see.

    Now to get Kuronue a body and have a full-blown menage lemon. *evil grin*

    CybrEmly
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  • From ANON - xoulblade on January 03, 2005
    oh please update soon!!!!! I like this story!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on January 02, 2005
    I'm enjoying this story, but there's one minor detail in Chapter 5 that really touches on one of my pet peeves. The hymen, aka "maidenhead," is NOT an internal barrier. It's actually a piece of skin, an extension of the labia that covers the OUTSIDE of the entrance to the vagina, with a hole in it large enough for fluids to pass. This is a common mistake in fanfic lemons. The stretchiness of the hymen varies from girl to girl; some lose the hymen during childhood from playing sports, riding bikes, etc, and some don't even lose it during sex, so it has to be surgically removed. There is NO internal "virginal" barrier.

    Thanks.

    --Your friendly neighborhood anatomist
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on January 02, 2005
    *waves* Hi! I'm still reading this.... I'm just lazy. *gives the author some cookies* Kurama sure has Yusuke beat. Oh well. He should have been thinking about Keiko.
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on January 02, 2005
    go man, what a chapter
    loved it
    cant wait for the next one
    thanks for the GREAT read
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  • From ANON - Starcrossed on January 01, 2005
    Sweet! Really, really good, continue please! Its a lovely story. Well written.
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  • From ANON - Youkai of Flames on December 23, 2004
    One word can only sum this story up: WOW, this is definitely one of the best YYH fics I've read in quite a while. Absolutely astounding plot! I love it! Continue updating! I'm a big fan of the series and have several YYH fics in the works.
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  • From ANON - Eyra on December 23, 2004
    OMG! I LOVE IT!! It is hilarious! I love all the witty comments that Kuronue makes and by the way, I googled him to see what he looked like ^^ nice choice. lol. Oh my I hope you finish this soon if it's not already. BREAK UP WITH YUSUKE!! lol. I like Yusuke and all but eh eh the other two choices are much more enticing. lol. Oh man I hope this isn't going to be a love triangle square thing. lol anyway, ja ne!

    Eyra
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  • From ANON - akumu on December 14, 2004
    still very good and am waiting impateintly for an update.
    i hope you haven't forgotten us or your story! XP
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  • From clhuff on December 06, 2004
    I am really enjoying this story and hope that you update it. It is a nice original idea for a story and nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Ikaaro on December 04, 2004
    Very well done I applaud you! Not many people can keep all the characters in character and have good spelling and grammer. There were only a few grammatical errors, but I think they were just computer glitches, but all in all they were easy to figure out. May I suggest putting a slight Japanese translation note at the end and/or beginning of the chapter? 'Cause I don't know what Toushin means XP

    Either way I cannot wait for chapter six.

    And kagome... foreshadowing perhaps? I recall a certain vertically challenged fire youkai mentioning a thing or two about priestesses...

    And how old are they all? Or did I miss that in a chapter somewhere?

    ::..LoR..::
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  • From ANON - Pandly on November 29, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much, would like for u to update because sometimes YU YU's fanfiction aren't updated which really pisses me off.. so please please UPDATE SOON!!!
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