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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver

From ANON - Yukizora on December 29, 2005
Oh thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ For updating! Can't imagine Hiei taking orders from anyone yet, but in this story you're writing loads of things happen that I've never even thought of, so I guess Hiei submiting to Yusuke is very possible. Can't wait for the next chapter and holly crap-thanks for another super-long chapter!

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From ANON - Dominic Shade on December 29, 2005
That was hot. Seriously. Rock on with your hentai self. I can't wait for Kurama's Punishment Part 2. I'm kinda wondering if there's anything Yusuke could really do to surprise his foxy slave though...I mean...there are only so many devices and positions, lol.

And omg, when do we get to the Hiei loving?! I mean...grr! Come on woman!

And I would so wear you like a feed bag.

Good times and rock on,

Dom
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From ANON - Kitsoru on December 25, 2005
yay! new chappie!! twas great, can't wait for Hiei action!! the sexiest Hiei is an uke Hiei, ne?
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From BlueUtopiah on December 24, 2005
Too...many...things...brain melting...

OK, I'm better now. You know, my boyfriend went on a business trip, and I was on the phone with him while checking aff.net, and then I'm like "OH GOD - SHE UPDATED" and the bf says "So that chapter of the Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke is up?" (obviously I talk about your story ALOT), and I'm like "YEAGOTTAGOBYE!"

You so rule. I keep bursting out with "Fuck your boy toy!" and "Crawl to Daddy, my little firefly" and then giggling. You know I can't wait for chapter 9, and that Hiei's introduction to foreplay and master-servant play is going to be both humiliating and painful (but he'll like it anyway - he's just surly like that). I'm looking forward to how you portray Hiei - as your characterization had always been spot-on.

As usual, your lemon was exquisite. You always seem to come up with new ways to make my jaw drop, and your writing always pushes me to be more craetive and over-the-top in my own stories. Jeez - that whole position with Kurama bent over backwards on the floor - my brain popped. And Yusuke can really dirty talk, it's funny and hot at the same time.

Did I say that you rule? Well, even if I did, I need to say it again - you rule!

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From ANON - Neko Miu on December 23, 2005
yea I'm back.. well I still really love your story, so much so that I have come here to tell you good luck with future chapters for I will not be able to read them. *damn internet companys!* I hope many ideas come to you and you enjoy writing them.

good luck!
-Neko Miu
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From mysticneko on December 23, 2005
Whoa... Yusuke and Kurama have been fucking like rabbits for like a week straight! Talk about a sex drive! I would be so worn out if I were in a situation like that. But who cares, right? Its not real and I'm getting my fix!

Thanks for sending me an email to tell me you updated. I'm reading so many fics, sometimes I lose track! @_@ Oh, btw. It would be so nice if you would send me some links to a few Yus/Kura fics. I may be reading a lot of fics but a few more couldn't hurt! Hope your life is more ontrack so you can write more of this delicious fic! ^_^
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From ANON - night_tigres on December 22, 2005
Congrats on the lap top!! You just get better and better every chapter you write. Your my hero!!! I can't wait to see what Yusuke has in store for poor Kurama. I almost feel sorry for him. Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - excelsaga433 on December 21, 2005
i dont care if you add hiei in the mix. but some yus/kur fans might be mad so you could make a story just for them and no hiei. and u can also do a story for hiei/yus plz *blushes because of being embarassed to ask*, dont get mad at me for likeing that pairing because in the series yus effects hieis life a lot as you can tell and he effects kuramas life also. it seems that hiei and kurama both love yusuke because he effects both of them so much if you can tell, i mean hes the spice, if hes wasnt there the show will be bland and boring. i like threesomes but i hate just regular hiei/kur because its the same routine: hiei come in kurama window and they confess their "feelings" and they "bump the buoy". its always the same if not its a lot like the routine it gets boring. i used to read them then after the second week, i got really bored and i found the yus/kur site called the detectives the link is: http://thedetectives.fannish.org/ , its awesome. thats how i got into yus/kur. keep writing yus/kur but try something other than the master and slave style, its gets tiring after the first couple of chapters
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From ANON - penpen on December 21, 2005
now don't get mad at me but i think that the whole master and slave thing is getting a little boring and tiring on my part. i think later you should try something else, plz don't get mad at me, i know a lot of fans are going to be mad at me. now i didn't say i hated yur writing, infact you have probably the one the best types of writing i've read. u and zelia theb, and other yus/kur and hiei/yus writers are my favorite. your writing really creates a describtive picture, you go into detail which is great, you should write books because i believe you have the talent. i think you should try something besides the master slave thing, because its almost every chapter the lemon is the master and slave routine, it would add more variety if you did a change. Now you don't need to apologise on the updating time, its hard to write a chapter that is as long yours, i mean some authors that have chapters that are one forth shorters than yours takes twice as long for them 2 write than yours. but if they have bad writers block, then i understand why it would take a while 2 update.
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From ANON - Neko Miu on December 21, 2005
wow..... I just loved the show of dominace by Yusuke... and how well Kurama explained things.. But I still can't wait for your next chappie ^ - ^
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From ANON - Vivian on December 21, 2005
Finally getting around to reviewing. I had to stop writing when I noticed this was updated. I don't usually read that much and hardly ever yaoi/yuri. But I have to say this is really a hot steamy fic. Throw me in there and it would be perfect. This has to be one of my favorite fics out there, though I guess I need to thank Ryu since I read it cause it was on her recommended reading. Keep up the awesome work, I can't wait for part two and when will Hiei come to play?
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From silversong on December 21, 2005
you need to update soon because i enjoy read this story and look forward to read more.

please have hiei crawl and beg

and maybe kurama

could somehow yusuke tell hiei that he is going to be begging?
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on December 21, 2005
oh. my. lord. *wipes to drool away and fans self* that chapter frickin' rocked my socks to the moon and back! that had to be the most intense, kinky, makes-you-wanna-cum-from-just-thinking about-it scene i have EVER read. this chapter was SO worth the wait! i'm so glad i saved this fic for last cause you've ruined me for any other reading for the night. heck, for the week. your writing skills are just simply surperb and it just seems to keep getting better and better. you are my ultimate fav when it comes to this pairing, just as hColleen is my fav for anything with the hiei and yusuke. Needless to say, i'm definitely looking foward to your next update, whenever that may be. i can't wait to read about the rest of kurama's "punishment" *snorts* (i wish i could get punishments like that) and see hiei's part in yusuke's plans. *rubs hands together and grins deviously* oh the things you could make him do... anyway, this is absolutely great stuff here. the things legends are made of. so i'm always looking foward to more. until next time, you and your family have a happy and safe holiday and a great new year! ^__^

*waves banner saying "VIVA LA YAOI!"*
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From ANON - Raven on December 21, 2005
Why is it that every time i read everyone of ur chapters i end up changing my bed sheets? i could be the fact that u freakin rock and ur stories r hot!!!!!!!!!!! oh and question r hiei and kurama gonna be master in the story and yuske slave? not in the next chapter but anywhere else in the story? and another question, r there gonna be other people in kurama and yuske's sex thing, like older konema? oh and great job keep up the work!
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From ANON - ChaoticAngel on December 21, 2005
Oh god woman you got me again, You know i checked this story like 4
and sometimes 5 times a day for an update. i'm really obsessed! that was
a kick ass chapter and I don't know how you keep topping yourself every chapter
but you do.

peace,

Angel

ps. I love restrictedsection.org too, but my home is The Silver Snitch

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