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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver
  • From ANON - Yukizora on September 04, 2005
    Wow. Wow. WOW. That's all I can say, wow. You should definitly stick to what you are best at LEMONS! Man, I'd rather you write each chapter just as long and lemonish as this one than have short ones withour lemons everytime and update faster. This way, I can enjoy your story for a longer time each time you update! I can wait. I'm patient enough. Anyway, Wow. Wow. WOW. wow...wow....wow.....wow......wow.......wow.......*voice fades away*. *shakes head* You are so good at this. Update soon!!!!^_______________^
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  • From ANON - lisha on September 03, 2005
    wow...just WOW THAT. WAS. HOT. AS . HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG YOKO IS SO SEXY WHEN HES ALL DOMINATING^_^
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  • From Aly on September 03, 2005
    Damn. That was the most awesome. Man you have the most incredible ideas that I've read. That was a nice touch with the vines too. Never thought that Youko can so....whats the word.....intense. I can't wait to read your next chapter with Hiei. I'M A BIG HUGE HIEI FAN. Man I wish I had that talent of yours. You now I was wondering. Would it be possible if you can give me pointers. You see after I finish my fic. that I have posted up, I was going to start a Yaoi fic with different pairing. The pairings are undecided though. And I not just a hiei fan girl. I'm also a YOAI FAN GIRL too. So I was just wondering if you would give me pointers to work on a yoai fan fic. But if your busy and all I understand and all. So anyway, can't wait to see the next chapter. Bye :)
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 03, 2005
    Oh yeah ! an update and what a update it was..whow,had me on the edge of my seat through most of it.What a lemon in the last one as well,no I never mind reading your lemons and hope they continue through out the story.Poor Yusuke(yeah right) what a way to be taught a lesson and I can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up.Hope you can update soon and not leave us so tightly wound up for long.Very very good you write very well and I hope to see alot more from you
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 03, 2005
    wow that was hot it was so hot that i don't even care that yusuke passed out and that you left a cliffy.
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on September 03, 2005
    You know I liked this chapter. And someone actually had the balls to flame this? I should kick their ass.

    *smiles lecherously*

    It's so cold...*coughINTEXAScough*...won't you let me use your thighs as ear muffs?



    Good times and rock on,

    Dom
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 03, 2005
    I'm... I'm Speechless LMAO Trying to get my lust filled mind to cooperate with what I want to say here, it'll take a moment so bear with me please. Oh wow. You have a talent with lemons that I could never hope to achieve. This was spectacular. Everything flowed just so damned perfectly. From the moment Yusuke walked into the room until Kurama cuddled up to him, it was all just perfect. I wonder though, how will Yusuke react to him when he wakes up. The trust they have, although it was unintentional, was broken. Though Yusuke seems to bounce back rather well, I think he might be a bit more hesitant now whenever Youko comes out to play. I know i would be. Damn, that was intense.

    I like how you are bringing Hiei into the mix, even if it's only a one shot deal. Hiei/Yusuke is rapidly becoming one of my favorite yaoi pairings. Now, that said I know I've been wishy washy on doing my own Yaoi fic. That has now changed, somewhat anyway. I am in the process of writing what was SUPPOSED to be a one shot and it quickly ballooned into more. The official pairings will be Hiei/Kag and Kurama/Miroku. Don't ask, I have no idea where the hell the thought actually came from, I just have to figure out exactly how to pull it off LOL

    Sorry about what happened to Kouga in Moon, it had to be done. Never fear, his part in the fic is not over though I'm not entirely certain how much more he will show up. I have someone who wants to do a side fic to accompany On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon for the next chapters where Kouga does appear. I'm greatly having fun with that one, although I think I might have lost alot of readers with just how dark it became.

    Ahh well, enough about my fics, I greatly enjoyed this chapter and I anxiously await the next one. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon please!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on September 03, 2005
    I have to tell you that your lemons are simply jaw dropping and the newest one is drool worthy. I can't wait to see what kind of punishment that naughty fox will get...or how well Yusuke will dominate Hiei.

    I noticed that you left a comment to Ryukotsusei about a Yusuke/Sesshoumaru pairing and had to tell you that she and I have discussed such a pairing before and thought it would be most tasty if it were Toushin Yusuke/Sesshoumaru. Both have that gorgeous long hair and those sexy markings you just want to trace with your tongue.

    I also have to tell you that I agree with you about Kouga. Such a sad way for him to go, but like I told Ryu, had Kagome picked Hiei, Masakazu would likely have killed Kouga anyway and then she would have been left completely alone.

    Excellent chapter and an excellent fic. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From on September 03, 2005
    I wish I had the balls to write like you. There are so many phrasings that I find particularly or done so well that I can't possibly list them all, but here are a couple:

    full disclosure (such seductive inuendo)

    gleefully humping his navel (so funny, lol)

    Physical sensation is heightened when sight is removed from the equation, Yusuke. (Oooh, I just loved the way you worded that)

    The references to food in Yoko’s description of Yusuke are so cute and witty.

    You have such a way with words. You are delightfully witty, embarrassingly lewd, have a wide array in styles of phrasing, and you can make it all work together wonderfully. It is great how you decided to have Yoko be seme and Kurama be uke. That was a nice twist.

    Oh, and the incorporation of Kurama’s plants was so expertly done. I don’t know how you do it. You’re so much the hentai! I feel sorry for poor Yusuke. I want some revenge on the fox. Yup.

    There is way too much fun, serious, sexy and hot stuff in this chapter that I could comment on, but alas, I would have to write a chapter of my own size in order to do it!

    Another awesome and amazing chapter. Well, worth the wait.

    Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall

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  • From ANON - Neko Miu on September 03, 2005
    I hopeyou post t he next chappie soon, just reading that preview and having to wait for the chapter is torture!!! Not to mention all the torture Youko is going to do to Yusuke before he gets anything ^ - ~
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  • From ANON - ??? on September 01, 2005
    Alright sounds good hope you keep up that date you and so many other authors say something like this weekend or 3 days and I see nothing from them for a few months I can't tell if they're dead or alive.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    *screams like a crasy fangirl*!@!!, yay, this stoey lives!!!, I ca already tel from the preview it wil be a great chapter, don't worry about posting at a certain time cause I'd wait to next christmas just to read your wonderul story!!!
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  • From ANON - Neko Miu on August 28, 2005
    FINALLY!!! man I can't wait for the next chappie!! ^ - ^
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on August 28, 2005
    Do you know what?
    I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS INCREDIBLE FIK!!
    I really love it!
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  • From ANON - Shuichi Shindou on August 28, 2005
    O.O OMFG!! I didn't think yusuke/kura could be SO SEXY! OMG I want more you do a good job!
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