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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver

From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2005
ahhh thank you thank you thank you!!! I love you fic so much, its my all time fave! ^ - ^
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From ANON - cillaxox on July 12, 2005
You just keep getting better and better. Vivid descriptions, accurate characterizations, interesting dialogue and really hot lemons. You're a really good writer that's why I enjoy this story so much. Well that and it has my favorite pairing and the really hot lemons that I mentioned earlier. I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter.
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From ANON - StarLindaKirara on July 09, 2005
ohayo!!! i think that yusuke REALLY fits the seme part!!! like u said, he s drippin testosterone (i write like fucking hell!!)(im argentinian , sorry n_nU)
well, i just wanted to say one thing....KURAMA=UKE, KURAMA=UKE!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye, nyaoh!!
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From kogaluver on July 09, 2005
To ??? TrippleQuestionMark

Apology wholeheartedly accepted. This was a huge misunderstanding. Next time, I'll try to be more clear when I respond to a reviewer, leaving no room for misinterpretation. I'm glad you like my story. Take care ^_^
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From ANON - ??? on July 09, 2005
Also(sorry I forgot to mention) don't take the points or the twit comment too seriously, I never use the word twit i was just bored and didn't want to say idiot(which you are so not). And also with the points I was just bored it was late but on second thought it was really mean sorry.(I might have been in a bad mood that day)
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From ANON - ??? on July 09, 2005
Of course i'm sorry to you, and I'm sorry about the gender thing I'm pretty sure i knew before but I don't really judge people by gender and it was late so I didn't even think about it. I hate being yelled at or embaressed especially if i know i'm wrong is all. I got lightheaded reading your response. I talk on forums alot and I live in NY(not manhatten but still NYC) so I take things in a bad light quite often. Ummmm.... to me usually means like yours saying "what are you talking about......" not "well...." as it probobly should. Also I tend to jump from topic to topic if i'm talking about too many things.(I've had two conversations at once before with the same person) Once again good story, your a very good writer, real reviews from now on.

P.S. This was mostly a misunderstanding wasn't it?
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From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on July 08, 2005
hello! you just keep getting better and better. wow! waoh, it's like sooooooooooooooo good. and the lemons, to die for (and then some). and now it's time for a little threesome action. but first i want to see what kurama will say to hiei and if yoko will ever come out to play? well anyway, update soon or try to think about later (cause any later and my giant panda of doom shall reak havoc on this story and change it to a kuwabara/mukuro fic. not pretty^_^V).
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From kogaluver on July 07, 2005
To: ??? TripleQuestionMark

Okay, first of all I don�t usually respond to flames. I don�t believe the review board is a proper place for it. I�m not interested in starting a flame war like I�ve seen on other review boards. I wish you would leave an email address so I can address you privately, rather than doing this on the review board, but oh well, here I go.

First of all, I would like to thank you for enjoying my fic. I�m glad you like it. Next, let me remind you of your initial review that I responded to after chapter four. You kindly said: �This is really good although I wouldn�t mind a yoko Kurama appearance. And I�m not a huge hiei fan.� I responded to your review by saying: Glad you like the fic. Um� Sorry no Youko in this fic, maybe next time.� There was nothing malicious in my response to you.

After my response to you, you obnoxiously wrote back:

??? 2005-05-16 id # 2035247093
Well 2 things 1 i forgot to put my name and there was a glitch and it said anon and 2(you get 10 stupidity points for this btw) i said yoko kurama as in demon kurama as in the same one he was in that tournament no youko/kurama its a yaoi fic you twit.(Youko is who again? i haven't seen the show in a while)

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Now, I had no idea where that came from. Why you flamed me or what you were even talking about. It made no sense. I had no intention of responding to it; however, my daughter and best friend jumped all over it. They were pissed because your flame/review made no sense at all. I decided not to acknowledge your second review because they basically said everything I would have and I didn�t see the need to repeat what they said.

Next, your third review, said in response to the two people who took issue with your flame was:

??? 2005-07-06 id # 2035312578
owwwwwwww the flames they burnnnnnnnn...........anyway WHAT I WAS TRYIN TO SAY, in response to his response was:

That I wanted the demon kurama and i'm pretty sure one of the girls are named something like yoko(I said i wasn't sure since i haven't seen it in a while) but i spelled it youko to differenti...uh ate(not a good spelling day). Anyway i really like the fic and i just wanted to make sure he understood me because his response was like i had two heads. Hmmmm well i do feel like an idiot(which i hate thank you very much.....) thats weird......could've sworn there was some girl named yoko....in some anime......hmmmm well i'll look into it it was probobly a different one. It didn't help that he gave me such a strange response though.

Grrrrrr i hate you people now for making me embaressed(grrrr i hate that feeling) and for making me sound like an idiot(I'm so not an idiot) mean people.....should've just gone.........what?!? and let it be in all its confused-ness. I'm gonna go jump in a lake for being such a idiot. Worse part is that I don't know why i thought that but i probobly just got a name wrong.

+20 intelligence points for the people who flamed me but -5 for being so mean about it. Anyway sry people. He can keep his though for that strange response he gave me. And for not realizing(bad spelling day) that anon is short for anonymous at least he didn't seem like he did.

??? 2005-07-06 id # 2035312605
Three more things.

I didn't have the best grammar before when writing online but someone complained they were having a hard time reading what I was saying on a message board so I vowed that I would try to do better bu including capitals and paragraphs and such.

I'm very glad yoko kurama IS going to make an appearance although you seemed like you thought is was a crazy idea when I said it(as mentioned before).

New chapter was great keep it up.(Also I have an official name now its " TripleQuestionMark " I just didn't log in).

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Now, is when I decided to respond to you. First of all I�M A WOMAN, NOT A MAN! I just had to get that out. Second, I�m very, very sorry that you took my response to you in the wrong way. Apparently, you thought I was being a bitch and trying to make you feel like you had �two heads� or something for suggesting I add Yoko Kurama. That was the farthest thing from my mind. I honestly don�t understand how you could have misunderstood what I said. When I used the word �Um�� I was implying that I was thinking about your request to add Yoko Kurama. I never intended to add him when I started this fic. I thought I was being cute and sweet. You know, like some people say �Erm� or ya know� or Um� I guess you didn�t get that and took it the wrong way.

Since I had decided not to add Yoko, I responded to you by saying: �Sorry no Youko in this fic, maybe next time.� (Adding the �u� in Yoko was a typo by the way) There was nothing in that response that was negative towards you. Perhaps it was too short and to the point so you took it the wrong way. Maybe I should have said: �I�m sorry, but I�m not going to add Yoko in this fic. Maybe I�ll write another fic with him. I�m sorry to disappoint you.� Would that have been better?

I am sorry that you misunderstood my response to you, but that did not give you no right to call me a �twit� and add up stupidity points for something I didn�t even do. In your last review you admitted TO THE TWO PEOPLE WHO RESPONDED TO YOUR FLAME, BUT NOT ME, that you were mistaken, or as you put it �an idiot� that you thought there was a female called Yoko in the anime, maybe you�re thinking of Yukina, Hiei�s sister. I don�t know. Then you made reference to �anon, being short for anonymous� I am well aware that anon is short for anonymous. Once again, WHERE THE HELL DID THAT COME FROM. You said there was some glitch and it said anon. I don�t know anything about any glitch. All I saw was a review from??? That�s all. Where did anon come from. I have a wonderful reviewer named anon and I know that reviewer is not you. I also have a second reviewer named anon, and I highly doubt that was you either. Go look at the order of reviews that came in and take note that your review is not next to a reviewer named anon.

Your next comment was about how mean the flamers were to you. Well, do you think you weren�t mean to me? Do you think that calling me a twit was a nice thing to say? Do you think that adding up stupidity points for something YOU were mistaken about was a nice thing to do? If you�re going to dish it out, then you better be able to take it and not whine about people being mean to you when you�ve been mean first.

This whole thing started by a misunderstanding. If only you had voiced your misunderstanding of my response to you, I would have answered and cleared everything up immediately. But you chose to flame me instead.

What hurt me the most was that you admitted that you made a mistake and felt like an idiot, said sorry to the people who flamed you back, yet, you never once apologized to me. As a matter of fact, you said. �He can keep his stupidity points for that strange review and for not realizing that anon is short for anonymous.� Now that I�ve explained that I didn�t mean anything rude in my response to you, and I have no idea where the �anon� issue came from. I would really appreciate an apology, because I really can�t understand how you misinterpreted what I said in the first place. Also, you said you were just trying to make sure I understood you. How did you accomplish that by calling me a twit and awarding stupidity points? You�re initial flame was mean-spirited, unfounded and just plain wrong, over something that YOU misunderstood in the first place.

As a final note, I am glad that you like the fic and that you�re happy I�m adding Yoko Kurama. I didn�t decide to add Yoko until I was three quarters into chapter 6. I thought that demon Yoko would work well with Kurama�s jealousy. It was a last minute decision.

P.S. Please remember that I am a woman and not a man. And please feel free to continue to review if you like. Just please don�t call me names and if you have a question, please ask it rather than assuming the worst, okay ^_^

Thank you

Kogas Hentai Luver

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From ANON - ??? on July 06, 2005
Three more things.

I didn't have the best grammar before when writing online but someone complained they were having a hard time reading what I was saying on a message board so I vowed that I would try to do better bu including capitals and paragraphs and such.

I'm very glad yoko kurama IS going to make an appearance although you seemed like you thought is was a crazy idea when I said it(as mentioned before).

New chapter was great keep it up.(Also I have an official name now its " TripleQuestionMark " I just didn't log in).
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From ANON - ??? on July 06, 2005
owwwwwwww the flames they burnnnnnnnn...........anyway WHAT I WAS TRYIN TO SAY, in response to his response was:

That I wanted the demon kurama and i'm pretty sure one of the girls are named something like yoko(I said i wasn't sure since i haven't seen it in a while) but i spelled it youko to differenti...uh ate(not a good spelling day). Anyway i really like the fic and i just wanted to make sure he understood me because his response was like i had two heads. Hmmmm well i do feel like an idiot(which i hate thank you very much.....) thats weird......could've sworn there was some girl named yoko....in some anime......hmmmm well i'll look into it it was probobly a different one. It didn't help that he gave me such a strange response though.

Grrrrrr i hate you people now for making me embaressed(grrrr i hate that feeling) and for making me sound like an idiot(I'm so not an idiot) mean people.....should've just gone.........what?!? and let it be in all its confused-ness. I'm gonna go jump in a lake for being such a idiot. Worse part is that I don't know why i thought that but i probobly just got a name wrong.

+20 intelligence points for the people who flamed me but -5 for being so mean about it. Anyway sry people. He can keep his though for that strange response he gave me. And for not realizing(bad spelling day) that anon is short for anonymous at least he didn't seem like he did.
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From ANON - youkaiblood on July 04, 2005
WOW...Yusuke is so dominant I can't register it. X_x
and Kurama...is his sexy bitch.
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! ^^

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From ANON - Hayla Canter on July 02, 2005
These chapters just keep getting better and better. Can't wait for the next update!
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From ANON - Kitsune Girl on July 02, 2005
OMG!!!! Do you have any idea how much you ROCK!!!!!???? I waited sooooo long for the updat but it was soooooooooo worth it!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awsome work!!!!!
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From ANON - Dominic Shade on July 02, 2005
...I just read some of your reviews...what the fuck is this stupidity points thing? Dude...stupid people make the world go round, they make us life, cry, horny...fuck go watch the commercials for Lifetime. And anyway, don't argue on other people's review list, ya'll got an issue, sort it out with explosives.

Rock on with your bad self KHL bitch, you have to be one hell of a sex kitten to be gettin' a raunchy Texan like me all up an' up. So good on ya...and make sure Yusuke rocks Hiei's world.

Good times and rock on,

Dom
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From ANON - Dominic Shade on July 02, 2005
Hm...a Yoko Kurama entrance? It doesn't really suit me...I mean Yusuke and Yoko are pretty far from being 'lovey dovey'. But good God woman...your porn--ahem--I mean story has made me go through five pairs of underwear and almost cost me a marriage...so write more, bring on the Hiei bitch. But I don't think you should have any Kurama/Hiei buisiness, only Yusuke should get to beat anyone's ass, lol.

Good times and rock on,

Dom
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