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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver

From ANON - touya4me on May 28, 2005
Yet another AWESOME chapter, girl!!! I must say, I particularly liked when Kurama was all, "SAY WHAT!!!" Very getto! :D Really, I can't wait until you get the next chapter up, and I am SOOOO looking forward to the little threesome you've got planned!! Although I must say, these kinds of threesomes have always struck me as a little bit unfair because then not just two, but three beautiful men are off the market... *sigh* Oh well, at least it's tons of fun to read about! ;)
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From ANON - touya4me on May 28, 2005
Chapter 4: WOW!!! That was SOOO awesome!!! I loved the way you ended the chapter with Yusuke thinking he'd killed Kurama, and Hiei being all lecherous!:D Can't wait til you put up chapter 6!
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From ANON - touya4me on May 26, 2005
Chapter 3:

DANM BOTAN!!!!!! WHY??!!! Well, anywho, once again I LOVED your story!! It's a pity that you haven't written more Yu Yu Hakusho fics. *sniff, sniff* Oh well, I suppose it can't be helped. And now, I'm off to Chapter 4! :D
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From ANON - thelly on May 26, 2005
I have a request. Since you made a chapter where yusuke took control in the bedroom,I was hoping that maybe you would let the youko side of kurama come out and get freaky with yusuke.please!
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From ANON - touya4me on May 26, 2005
OMG!!! Your writing is so wonderful!!! It's perverted, but not too crude and lewd! Wow, I can't wait to read chapter 3! :D
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From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on May 26, 2005
Boy is this late! SOOOOOOOOO SORRY! *Begs forgivness* Oh my God this chapter was simply AMAZING! I loved this line right here:

"Hiei may be short but he was packing a torpedo." --- Priceless!

And yet again you choose the perfect title, "Hiei has no shame!" and he dosen't! Jerking off while listening to Yusuke and Kurama, yet it was delicious! Can't wait for the threesome! Your writing skill skills are just flowing out as if there's nothing to it! Keep up the great work!

I'm glad you did a softer lemon to show the sweeter and more loving side of Yusuke and Kurama's relationship. But you had me on the floor howling with laughter when Kurama told Yusuke he was being curel! Here, let me laugh again: BWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Another cliffhanger! AGAIN! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US SO?! You big meany! I want to see how Kurama reacts to knowing about Hiei moving in on Yusuke! Also, I wonder how Hiei plans to get Yusuke and Kurama to agree to the threesome. And to imagine Kurama shout, "SAY WHAT" like a highschool girl (my way of hearing him say it) was also priceless!

(Yeah, I agree 100% about Botan! GRAGHHHHHHHHHHH! Okay, enough of that... @_@)

Great job!

P.S. --- I love your Disclaimer and Author's Note!

I would have Yusuke chained to my bed and I would be watching him and Koga make out. But I don�t, such as life.

And of course, Yusuke needs his mouth washed out with soap.

I laughted for a while after reading those! Hope you had fun in New York!

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From ANON - touya4me on May 26, 2005
Wow.... just wow... That was so totally cool! Hehe, I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I'm so glad hColleen recommended you!!!! One line I particularly liked was the one about how Kurama was sex on stick! ;D
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From on May 25, 2005
Finally a good Yusuke/Kurama fic! Don't get me wrong I love H/K but after the Ump-teenth million fic, it gets annoying. Variety is the spice of life! Is Yoko Kurama going to make an appearance? You never see a Yoko Kurama/Yusuke fic! Think about what he could do with his plants�vines�. Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE UP-DATE SOON! ^-^
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From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
It's so cruel to leave us here but we will wait and hope you post soon. Your fic is the best I have read with this paring, and I hope Hiei gets to have a little fun with little... (well, maybe not so little) Yusuke and Kurama. I really liked when Hiei busted in on them in the forest, I was rolling around the floor cause I was laughing so hard! ...I think I ate a feather because of it... Anyhoos, post soon cause this is the best fic ever and we really want to know what happons next.

-neko
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From ANON - hanyou slave on May 16, 2005
To ???

You want to talk stupidity points? First, if you actually read this fic, you would have noticed that throughout the fic, the author spelled Kurama�s former self �Yoko�. Have you ever heard of a typo? You get ten stupidity points for lack of an acceptable attention span.

Did it occur to you that there is more than one widely acceptable way to spell Yoko, as in Youko? You get ten stupidity points for forming an opinion on a subject that you have not bothered to investigate.

In proper English, unless the number you insert into a sentence is above ten, it must be spelled out, as in �two�, not 2. You get ten stupidity points each for poor grammar. How old did you say you were?

In proper grammar, you capitalize the noun �I� as well as names. You get ten stupidity points for each error and for either being lazy or for being too uneducated to be criticizing anyone on this site.

You get ten stupidity points for not putting a space between your failed attempts at forming sentences.

You get ten stupidity points for a typo.

You get 20 stupidity points for making a poor attempt at being facetious, i.e. (Youko is who again? i haven't seen the show in a while). You can look up the definition of the word �facetious� at www.m-w.com.

You get 30 stupidity points for having such garbled grammar that half your flame is incomprehensible. Again, I refer you to www.m-w.com.

You get 50 stupidity points for being too much of a coward to identify yourself.

And, if I have properly discerned the meaning of your flame despite the grammatical mess you made of it, yaoi is boy on boy regardless of how many boys or which boys are included in the fic. Since your meaning was lost in your obviously uneducated attempt at a review, forcing me to explain yaoi regardless of whether or not you comprehend its definition, you get another 30 stupidity points.

Now, unless I have missed something, lets add up all the stupidity points you have accumulated. Again, I refer you to www.m-w.com.

Your stupidity points are a grand total of 240 (and that was going easy on you).

The next time you want to flame someone, at least make the review intelligible (once again www.m-w.com), you twit.

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From ANON - hanyou slave on May 16, 2005
I love your vocabulary and the fact that where you could have placed one word, such as �grin�, you place two, �lascivious grin�. Here is are just a few examples.

Mortified
Eliciting
supple spine
naughty smirk
lascivious grin

Your phrasing is sometimes hilarious. I believe you have put more thought and hard work into your descriptions with each new chapter.

You made Yusuke so funny in the first section:

�Creepy ass, fucking fire demon��

�And would you stop looking at me like that!� Yusuke was feeling like a piece of raw meat dangling in front of a lion.

Examples of your descriptive prowess:

Yusuke sensually traced the contours of his fox�s pouting petals the fox�s exotic beauty had transformed into a breathtaking expression of erotic and wanton radiance

Kurama could roll in pig slop and still come out smelling like a potpourri of wild flowers, roses and fresh cut grass,

an electric storm raged throughout his body

What have we here? Just who will be entertaining who?

If the fox was willing, this could turn out to be quite entertaining,� he thought while settling in for the night.

I loved the way you ended the chapter. �SAY WHAT!� Hiei may be in deep shit with Kurama now! You might get tired of hearing it, but that chapter deserved at least two hot showers with a detachable multiple setting showerhead. No cold showers for me! Hehehe.

Love ya, Koi.

Hanyou Slave
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From ANON - chibi hentai on May 16, 2005
Dear ???,
You, my dear, are the "twit" (such advanced vocabulary, by the way). "Youko" is another way to spell "Yoko". Youko+Yoko+Kurama = all the same damn person!!! And what is this, "no youko/kurama its a yaoi fic you twit," crap about? Even if it was a Yoko/Youko/Kurama fic, (IE: Yoko, Youko, same person) what the hell would that have to do with it being Yaoi or not!!? It would still BE YOAI you MORON! They would BOTH still be MALES getting it on! (it's not a matter of you haven't seen it in awhile, it's that you didn't understand the show to begin with!!). People sometimes like to pull the "two personalities" apart and pair Yoko+ Kurama together, (they are not, I repeat NOT two entirly different people!)

Your stupidity point rating... 20 (for not being bright enough to figure Yoko/Youko out).

One question, How thew hell old are you!? That had to have been one of the most IMMATURE flames I have ever read (especially when it had no point behind it). Koga's Luver said nothing about a Youko/Kurama pairing to begin with!

Thank you for your time, ???. "??????????????????????????????????????????????," What the fuck is that about
!?? O_o

Have a nice day.

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From ANON - ??? on May 16, 2005
Well 2 things 1 i forgot to put my name and there was a glitch and it said anon and 2(you get 10 stupidity points for this btw) i said yoko kurama as in demon kurama as in the same one he was in that tournament no youko/kurama its a yaoi fic you twit.(Youko is who again? i haven't seen the show in a while)
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From on May 15, 2005
YEA!! i can't wait for the threesome!!! now THAT will be hot!!!! your right, inu and yusuke do have the same personality in a way...please please please update soon!!!! gods kurama and yusuke together is sexy!!! and don't forget hiei!!!
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From ANON - cillaxox on May 13, 2005
It's a good thing I don't need my mouth to type otherwise I wouldn't be able to get this review out. Really sexy chapter!! I especially liked Hiei masturbating! I don't believe there is anything sexier than that fire demon pleasuring himself...unless it's Hiei being fucked by Yusuke ^_~ Yes I am looking forward to that chapter. Awesome chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
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