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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 02, 2005
    ooh gods i laughed when yusuke thought he killed kurama. ooh what a way to go!! ROFL and how can you not add hiei? i mena he's there, he seems ready so go for it! for someone as inexperience as Yusuke he certainly knows how to play the master role really well. i love your fic so plz more lemony smut!!
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  • From ANON - June Briefs on April 02, 2005
    GREAT CHAPTER, but... PLEASE! Don't put Hiei between Yusuke & Kurama. No way! ;__;
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  • From ANON - \'Jita on April 02, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!! That was...wow! Fantastic! Toe curling sex scene for sure!!! My GOD is Yusuke sexy in that role, exactly how I imagine he would be... *pants* I'm seriously having an episode over here, I think I'm hyperventelating..... *fans self furiously* Not to mention the drool all over my keybard! DAMN that was hot!!! And Hiei, oh HELL yeah! That would be so freakin' sexy I'd prolly end up needing some ice, several fans and oxygen!!! lol ^_^ Oh PLEASE put him in there with them, pretty please?! Those three are just meant for each other and would be unbelievably sexy together!!! "fucked him unconsious" heh, heh... Damn... I'm impressed too! (and extremely envious) AWESOME, FANTASTIC, SUPERB, HELL OF A JOB!!! THANK YOU ^_^
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on April 02, 2005
    that was amazing!! i couldn't even peal my eyes away from the screen!!!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on April 02, 2005
    Oh wow what a great chapter,long winded no way baby a good lemon takes time and your good at writting them.Adding Hiei might be fun yet Kurama and Yusuke still have some discovering to do on their own yet I would think.Although having him to talk to for both Yusuke and Kurama could lead to some interesting insights from Hiei to both of them.Can't wait for Kurama to wake up maybe in his bed with Yusuke holding him?
    Update soon pleeeease!
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  • From ANON - Sandi59 on April 01, 2005
    My favorite chapter was the 1st, the slow seduction of the unsuspecting Yusuke. I liked the insite you gave to both characters in dealing with there feelings. Your story heated up quickly from there. I would love to see Hiei added to the relationship.
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  • From ANON - whirleeq on April 01, 2005
    wow... well, I have no words, really... but... wow... :) You must be a really cool mom... I have to tell you, that despite writing smutty fanfiction myself, I'd be absolutely horrified if my own daughter suggested that we 'co-author' something together. And if my own mother were to suggest such a thing, I would probably have a stroke from the sheer shock of it. So, kudos to you. This chapter was... er... interesting :). I could definately see Yusuke playing that role... I didn't really care for his referring to Kurama as a 'slut' - I thought that was a bit degrading, even in play - but the rest of it was pretty sexy. As for bringing in Hiei? That's your call and I'm sure you can make it work. --julie
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  • From ANON - Ali on April 01, 2005
    Damn girl. That was the most incredible lemon I've ever read. The whole slave/master thing was awesome. I've readed the first two chapter before and did't have enough time seeing the updates but the wait was worth. And also I don't mind bringing Hiei into the mixing, not only is Kurama/Yusuke my favorite pairing, also Hiei/Yusuke and Hiei/Kurama, just call me crazy but I have a crazy mind. Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens next. You are doing a great job by the way. :) smiley
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  • From WindCharmer on April 01, 2005
    that... was... HOTTT! Oh man that was definiately worth the wait. OF COURSE I enjoyed chapter 4! LOLS Oh man such a submissive Kurama, I mean I wouldn't lie, if i had a penis I couldn't help myself from wanting to have Kurama either... Okay that was a weird comment. You can ignore it. HAHAA. HIEI! I love his last line... OOOHEHE. Stop it Hiei, KOOKEKE> =]
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 01, 2005
    hell yeah the lemon was so kinky i didn't think yusuke would get be so dominant so fast and hell yeah you have to add hiei. i nice yummy fire demon will always spice things up
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  • From ANON - ria-chan kitsune on April 01, 2005
    Ohhhh, that's funny. Y'know, that was a VERY good chappie; I most definitely approve. I'm becoming addicted to this story. What would be very interesting is seeing something with, say, sweet foods or something. Or one with games, simple games we played when we were little. I'd also very much like to see Kurama live out the little fantasy he mentioned in the latest chappie about tying up Yusuke with his vines and ravishing him. Of course, it's all up to you; I'm just throwing out little suggestions. Update soon! Luvvies.
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  • From ANON - cillaxox on April 01, 2005
    That was so fucking hot!! I hate to sound uncouth, but that's the only word that comes to mind to describe this chapter. From now on I need to have a sponge handy when I read your story. A dominant Yusuke and a submissive Kurama what more can a person want? I loved this chapter! I wouldn't mind seeing Hiei thrown into the mix (hint, hint ^_^)
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  • From ryukotsusei on April 01, 2005
    Oh wow! This chapter was incredible, you did a spectacular job on it. Well worth the wait, the Master/Slave setup is to die for. *Fans self for several long moments* Where's the boyfriend figure when I need him dammit lol Hiei's reaction was particularly amusing, I would have no objections whatsoever to him joining in. I'd love to see the scene you would write in fact. I beg of you, please update soon! I wish I had your talent for writing lemons, but alas mine will probably never be this good. Who knows maybe one of these days I'll try my hand at a yaoi fic and see if that helps any ;-)
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on April 01, 2005
    0___0; Hey! That was all right to me! It long and drawn out which makes me happy! I only wish that the chapter was part 1 oout of 2 or 3 or 4... ^____^; Oh things that detective does with his mouth! *spazzes out* Yeah I read the Wet series.... so? It was kinds of scary when I first read it. I guesss because I was innocent about "yaoi and teh other gay stuff" you know? *runs off with her Yusuke and Kurama make out dolls*
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on March 31, 2005
    You see, I only review when there's a new chapter... I don't want anyone to see me doing this but... *gets down on her hands and knees* Pleaaaaaaaaaaaase update! *returns to normal* Okay. I did it.
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