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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver
  • From Hemamal on October 26, 2007
    I kind of sorry for Hiei. He has no idea of what he's getting into!!
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  • From Hemamal on October 26, 2007
    Poor Yusuke!! I guess that was too much, too soon. Kurama must feel horrible! But knowing this fic he'll probably say he loved it!!
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  • From Hemamal on October 25, 2007
    Very HOT!!
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  • From Hemamal on October 25, 2007
    Maybe you shouldn't have said that Yusuke!!!!
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  • From Hemamal on October 25, 2007
    Damn Yusuke!! You fucked the poor guy unconcious!! Take it easy next time!!
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  • From Hemamal on October 25, 2007
    Damn you Botan!!! Damn you!!!!!!!!!! Kurama was finally going to get whathe wants, then you had to show up!!
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  • From ANON - Miranda on October 16, 2007
    -picks her jaw up off the floor- Wow; just...wow. -applauds- another awesome chapter, been reading this one chapter by chapter, and they all are great for me, I must say that you are truly gifted at writing stories like this ^^. I would totally pay to see this sort of action, and for some reason, I find it odd, but you paint a picture of it so well. -continues drooling- Ever need someone to beta for you, I'd be more than happy to, until than, I will simply be a devoted fan of your work.
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  • From Staphanie on October 14, 2007
    hey are you ever going to update thid story or what or are you done with it all together. cause i really think its great and that you should coninue espesially with joe in the mix now. and im guessing this after the dark tournament and before sensui so yusuke isn't a demon yet.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on September 03, 2007
    i'm pretty sure i say this to you every chapter but i can help but say it again: i fucking love you and your fic totally owns my soul. you treat my yy boys so well! *glomps* i'm so going to go and brag to my friend right now about the awesome update. well, maybe not right now. first, i gotta go catch me a cold shower (or 2) then i thnk i'll be somewhat calm enough to talk to my friend and not spontanously combusting while talking about this fic. i eagerly look foward to your next update whenever that may be. this update, like always, was SO worth the wait.

    ~Devious
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  • From Nekoastrid on August 23, 2007
    wow that brings new meaning to "thats one hell of a sex scene!" two new awsome chapters as always! ^^ I'm so glad I came back to this section of AFF I was wondering if any of my fave aurthors had updated. I've been spending alot of time in the naruto and bleach yaoi sections as of late so I'm glad I came across your fic again. Ryo-chan is one of my fav aurthors too so I'm glad you mentioned her. Hope to read more soon its getting so interesting! the threesom between yusuke/kurama/hiei was so hot but it was sweet too that it had that emotional aspect for hiei. I was so suprised that Jo out did kurama O,O I was like omg how did that happen!. but the Hiei Jo thing is definitly cute Hiei needs himself a little Uke, even though he likes yusuke dominating him he's way to proud to do it all the time. I await a another great chapter.

    Ja!
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  • From kitkit on August 20, 2007
    hot as always
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on August 15, 2007
    O.O *dies* Oh my gosh, this was too freakin hot! I don't know how you did it, but oh my gosh!!! I'm pretty sure I read through this thing twice. Not completely sure because I think my brain turned into mush about halfway through. You are too good for you own good.
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on August 15, 2007
    Yaaaay! *Does the happy happy updated fic dance.* I've been stalking this fic for a bit, and couldn't believe it when I saw it had been updated! And yes, it was most definitely worth the wait. Wow. I think I need several cold showers after this, and possibly an ice bath for my brain. ^__^ I hope they keep Jo, he's a sweetie (in a sexy, smutty sort of way). *cuddles him* I'm also wondering (though I doubt you'll tell me) if he'll find out about what they do when they're not bonking each other silly, and especially if he'll meet Youko. *g* Just to see how he finds out, and his reaction. Then again, maybe his former Master was a demon and he'll just be like "Yeah, whatever." Okay, sorry, shutting up now. :-P Well, almost. Yay for helpers! *huggles you all* And hope it updates again soon, especially with the evil teasing ending to this chapter! XD
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  • From ANON - rita on August 10, 2007
    oh my freaking god, you are the god of yaoi, lemon and fanfiction in general. this story is so awesome i cound'y get enough of it. you truly have a very creative, perverted, and talented mind and imagination. Awesome work though. :D
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 09, 2007
    Where the fuck do I begin with this chapter? How about an overall analysis of the great fucking lines:

    "and hours of playing hide the snake in various locations and positions." Hahahahaha...hide the snake.

    "Yeah, well, you better be puttin’ something on that’s uncomfortable and really gay, too!" And may I just say that the outfits you have them in are motor-burning material. Really, Kurama with the glitter and the NAIL POLISH. Hiei's reaction was priceless, of course, as was this line:

    "Kurama was showing off a neon arrow pointing to his crotch saying ‘beat this, bitches.’" For weeks I would think "beat this bitches" and then snicker to myself.

    Heh, I loved the bouncer hitting on Kurama and teasing him because he's a pretty bottom boy. Speaking of which, when Yusuke is punishing Kurama at the bar, and the guys looking on are shouting things, when one of them said: “Bottom bitches that pretty need a firm hand!”, I popped a gasket laughing, that's another line I still snicker over. And the cuffs being thrown at them from everywhere? Brilliant.

    The image of Yusuke and Kurama grinding all over each other and frenching was mad hot. And although I do not like OCs, you executed Jo's character brillantly. You keep him perfectly submissive, and use him more as a plot point, a way to bring the lemon to new heights. Because you couldn't have that contest without a fourth, and there's no one in the cast who could play Jo's role adequately. Loved it. And it was awesome that Jo won the contest over Kurama...sometimes the fox needs an ego check.

    Then we get to the smexing. Let me say that anytime Hiei and Yusuke would kiss as they were playing with their *cough* toys, I started sweating. You just write so damn hot that sometimes I can't think. I love how your mind works. And really, the positions...Hiei working Yusuke's ass and making him come early cracked me up. That's so Hiei. And I love how you have Yusuke refer to Kurama's ass as his fox hole ajgdkagkdgkakbs. But that lemon...BITCH YOU CRAZY. *bows* And what I love about your lemons is that you give and give and give - not only do you have pages of foreplay, but then a contest, and then fucking in position one, then position two, then position three...somewhere in there piles of brains are lost for I'm sure I wasn't the only one losing my mind.

    And adding Sensui and Sniper to the end was sheer genius.

    EVERYONE LISTEN....KHL WRITES THE PORN. DON'T DOUBT IT. SHE OWNS ALL OF YOU.

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