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Reviews for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

By : kogaluver

From ANON - Arasagi(too lazy to sign in) on October 26, 2006
i love this story to death and i sooo glad that you put up chapter 9, IT WAS HOT!! I was wondering if you may also give some links in this site for some kur/yus pairings..
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From ANON - FluffyFox on September 21, 2006
Oh Kami! I love ur story!! Please keep it coming!!!!

Ja Ne!

ps- loved ur title, 'crawl to daddy, my little firefly,' utterlly priceless!!
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From ANON - Jax on September 18, 2006
i love your story! its sooo hot...god...i have to pace for a few min to hold of my relese...plz update! i read your inu story and i loved it!i look forward to your update!
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From ANON - kome on September 09, 2006
damn!! your on fire gurl !!!!! i love that idea you came up with on how yusuke was going to fuck hiei and kurama @ the same time
you go girl keep up the good work
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From ANON - Snowfall on August 27, 2006
Hey Girl! Sorry that I haven't been reviewing like I should, but you have to know that all of your chapters are well written. You have such a talent for allowing us to see what is going on in your head. I never get confused about the positioning of your characters or anything! Jo was such a cute character. I really liked him. Too bad I can't take him home with me. Oooh, and you always melt the north pole with your lemons. Hiei is so funny. You wrote his character well, all of them actually. I just lurve Kurama. He makes such a good uke.

Um, my mind isn't working properly, so this review really sucks, but I'm trying, ne? I like that your chapters are so long, eh, even if beta'ing takes freakin' forever! You really leave the reader satisfied. I think that is one of the reasons why you have such a following. The other reason in obvious. You are a class A hentai!

I know that you worked hard on this chapter and it turned out really well. Take a vacation. You deserve it. Although, I'm sure that your hentai mind is already developing scenes for the next chapter!

^_^

Snow
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From ANON - lady silver on August 27, 2006
hi, i like what you have so far. and i can not wait for the next chapter becasue i want to know what yusuke does to kurama.
maybe hiei could return in later chapters for more lessons with yusuke. becasue he seems to enjoy them some much. and we could learn more about kurama's past.

please let me know when you update so that i can read it. becasue i really like this story.

katie
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From ANON - Rylan on August 24, 2006
Wow you updated and that was freakin hot too. I wonder if any males read this? They'll definitely need a cold shower =P Lemon's the plot! lol
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From ANON - Kel on August 14, 2006
Wow . . . Wow . . . I think I need a cold shower. Make that very cold. That was absolutely amazing. I hope you and your laptop produce many a more work. And I'll be back to read more. Madre Etva.
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From ANON - night_tigres on August 10, 2006
That was well worth the wait, I loved it.
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From Strailo on August 07, 2006
I finally got around to reviewing this fic. Its good, well written.
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From ANON - kitsune Girl on August 07, 2006
Yay pervesion... I love this fic!! You are my favorite person!!!! *give's you "kitsune girl's favorite person" hat* Keep writeing this has been the best thing I've read in monthes!
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From ANON - Skittles The Sugar Fairy on August 07, 2006
So, good job. (HA! Understatement of the year)

After reading this I had to take the loooongest cold shower EVER. This is so amazingly well done my brain malfunctions after I read it. I adore the thought and effort that went into Hiei. He is harder to write sometimes. You get everyones emotions and actions and thoughts down so well.

And the lemony goodness. One can not begin to describe how incredibly hot it was. I loved how Yuusuke was incontrol without being over the top. Love Yuusuke's dirty talking too.

I have to ask(beg) if you would do a certain bit because I think you're the only one who could do it....Could you do somesort of 'after Sensui' thing. I imagine both of their emotions would be all out of whack and no one ever goes into the detail of the trauma that would bring to a pre-relationship. Especially watching Yuusuke die again. Certainly all Yuusuke's new instincts would make for an 'interesting' lemon scene.

But back to worshiping the new chapter of greatness (the whole fic!)

Mmmmm Kurama. And I took a peek at Ryo's pic(s). I got inspired to write, but just wow. I can so see how it would affect someone's writing.

I especially liked Hiei's 'I didn't know it could be like this' It seems very Hiei in how he wouldn't be one to do foreplay. But really if you think about it it doesn't seem like something most demon's would bother with.

Keep up the amazing work with whatever you choose to do! ^____^ I am such a happy fairy right now....Lol.
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From ANON - vivian on August 06, 2006
that chapter was well worth waiting for. parts had me laughing while others made me need a cold shower. loved the little bickering session between hiei and kurama. think i'd have to argue to, in that case. I eagerly await the next update. as always you did a splendid job. keep up the great work *hands you Aoshi cookies and a beer*
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From BlueUtopiah on August 04, 2006
Really girl, where do I begin?

First of all, I want to apologize for not reviewing this sooner, but I wanted a bit of time to think it over, and life did not allow me to review until now. But really, you outdid yourself. I know I read the first part while you were here - and what I read was perfect, but then you went and imporved on it. Then, I get to read the second part, and all I have to say is YOU WRITE THE PORN - KHL FOR THE WIN! Seriously, this lemon is putting you in the history books. In 20 years, YYH fans far and wide will be like "KHL? Oh yeah, she writes the PORN!"

Aside from the whole hotness-my-brain-melted-and-you-owe-me-a-new-one factor, this was just beautifully written. You take the time and effort to bring something great to the table and it shows. No, I am not blowing smoke up your ass...it's true.

But let's give examples, shall we?

HOLY FUCK THE POSITION. You were right, I haven�t seen that one done before in fanfic (and we all know I�ve been around the fandom). That was crazy...really crazy. I don't know if I'd rather be Hiei or Kurama at that point, there were obviously benefits to both.

The image that greets Hiei when he arrives in Kurama�s room, the way Yusuke and Kurama are positioned, what they�re doing, and what they�re wearing�just�really that's nosebleed central. We have to get Ryou to draw that for me.

Those paragraphs where you explored Hiei�s thoughts before he showed up at Kurama�s were very well done. You managed to get in a perfectly characterized view of Hiei�s psyche, and you did it with 5 paragraphs. Perfect.

Kurama tossing his hair and Hiei begging yet at the same time yelling at Kurama to get the damn hair out of his face. That was hilarious.

�You know how I like it, my little fox bitch.� HAHAHAHAHA. Yusuke just hits the dirty talk right on.

�Multitasking was one of Kurama�s strengths.� BEST. LINE. EVAR. I read that to EMOD and he said �I really don�t want to know what Kurama is doing to deserve that statement, do I?�

�Damn, I love the way you do that, Kurama. Let�s hear it for having skills,� That�s just so Yusuke.

I love the fact that Hiei doesn�t have any pain during penetration, I mean, he�s a demon, and his anatomy is not exactly like Kurama�s and Yusuke�s, and very few authors acknowledge that. �Maybe our little firefly was meant to be uke.� Yeah, Yusuke was good enough not to say that out loud, but I�m sure he shared that thought with Kurama later and they laughed over it.

Kurama�s eyes flashing gold as he came � nice. Then the way he responded to Hiei�s little jib about passing out was so�KURAMA.

You know I'm going to read this, like 500000000000000 times, right? You own everything, I so love you, and I gave EMOD that kiss. Sure, I'm a pervert, but you're right there next to me.
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From ANON - Katonie on August 03, 2006
Hey it's me again. okay so I was just reading some other fics and I have to say that your story trully, undeniably, is the best! None of the other stories compare to the greatness of 'The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke'! I have to take a break from reading so I can enjoy other fics.(that's not a really bad thing, I guess.)...So yeah, yor a great writer.
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