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Reviews for To Yield

By : buenagirl
  • From ANON - hColleen on January 21, 2005
    This is beautiful. I really can't think of another word to describe it. I like how in the chapter "Sweet Lemonaide" you contrast the two couples' style of intimacy. That was very beautifully done. I'm glad that Shuichi's step-father didn't get any farther...and I think your portrayal of Shuichi's angst/trauma and Yusuke's caring was very sweet...although, that's not quite the word I want, but I've already said beautiful a lot . :D
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on January 18, 2005
    OMG!!! That was one of the cutest stories I have ever read!!! Yay!!! ^____^ Very clever and well done!!! *gives you chocolates* I really liked the ending, but the way you set it up made it so that you -could- have an...epilogue, of sorts. As in, they find out what happens to Suichi's step-father, and they feel the need to... "celebrate"..... yeah..... ^^;; ....Or you could just forget that and leave it the way it is. Why mess with perfection, right? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

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  • From ANON - Juli on January 17, 2005
    This story isn't bad! I hope you write more of these!
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  • From ANON - fff on January 13, 2005
    i love it
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  • From ANON - Trinity on January 08, 2005
    finally a decent yusuke/kurama pairing... it was really good... the hiei/koenma thing was a real twist...i likey ;)...keep it up
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  • From ANON - anubiset on January 07, 2005
    That was sappy, but overly so. It was the perfect way to do this and it was magical. It was like reading my first romance novel all over again. Only shorter. The way you wrote was elequent. I loved this.
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 on January 07, 2005
    that was a very well written story that was good, sad, funny, and tragic but all together good. i loved it when i was so trapped in chapter one, i couldn't believe i was still on it. i love long chapters and long stories. it gives me something good to read. also, this story rocks!
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  • From ryukotsusei on January 07, 2005
    absolutely beautiful story. I loved it, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Sayge on January 06, 2005
    OMG that was great!!!! You are the best author ever! That was just soooo beautiful!!!! I'm so happy right now that I'm crying!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kyoden on January 05, 2005
    OMG that was the most beautiful story I have ever read. Idk wat 2 say. It was perfect. Great plot and grammer. Great storyline. Great characterization. And GREAT lemons. Absolutly wonderful. One of the best stories I have ever read, period! Thank you for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Supi-chan1026 on January 05, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.... sooo cute! ^_^
    I loved it! write more stories like this one please.

    -courtney
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  • From Bakurah on January 05, 2005
    Awwwwww! That was cute!
    *Hugglez Shuichi!*
    Hiei and Koenma I've never seen that done before heh they're cute!
    *Hugs her Hiei Plushie*
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotilih on January 05, 2005
    I love this fic!

    This is THE best Yusuke/Kurama I have read!

    5 out of 5!
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  • From ANON - LittleKitsune on January 04, 2005
    *Tears in eyes* I FRIGGIN LOVED IT!!!! Maybe the plots been done before, but WHO GIVES A FLYIN DAMN!!!! You descibed everything beautifully, and as I was reading this I couldn't stop. Even better that it was put up finished, but... damn, you've got wicked style. I cannot tell you how much i enjoyed the story. *Shaking head* Great AU, great pairing, great author, who did it right the first time. Need i ask for more?
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