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Reviews for Slip of the Tongue

By : cillaxox
  • From ANON - The Empress on February 19, 2005
    Nice Story. Hope you write more. >:)
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  • From ANON - She-wolf on February 18, 2005
    Great chapter. I love the part were Hiei kiss Kazuma. So the next chapter going to be a about Hiei and Kurama? I wonder are you going to make Kurama will jealous right? Please have Kurama jealous! Any way, I like how Hiei dreaming of Kazuma and dosen't know it him. UPdate soon!
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  • From sisko66002 on February 15, 2005
    Of course we like it. Please update this fic soon.
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  • From YaoiGoddess on February 14, 2005
    Yay! *glomps cillaxox* You're writing another Hiei/Kuwa ficcy! I love you! *glomps again*

    Uh.... Anyway....

    I liked the beginning so far, especially how you described Kuwa-chan as being all light, warm, and protecting.

    I swear, if I ever meet a real life Kuwa I'm gonna grab him and take him back to Kentucky with me, and I don't plan on sharing! *sighs* Why can't more guys be like Kuwa? Tall, strong, honerable, kawaii, and likes cats.

    Yeah... I'm done now. ^ ^;
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  • From KuwaLover on February 14, 2005
    I loved it! That was great! I think Kuwabara would give someone the feeling of safety and protection. Anyway, please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - Yamistar (not logged in) on February 13, 2005
    The plot of the story is a little fast, but it's going alright. But, I got confused a few times when there should ahve been a comma after or before some text, and there wasn't. It got confusing some, but I managed to figure it out. You might want to see about someone betaing your story. I liked it, and I didn't see any major spelling errors, but the biggest thing was the punctuation. But, I really can't talk, because I'm the Mistake Queen! *smiles* I make lots of mistakes, so I can't really say anything to you. *shrugs* But if it's a good, honest review you're looking for, here it is! *smiles* I do hope that you continue this story. Cookies for you! ~Ys
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  • From ANON - She-wolf on February 13, 2005
    I just what to say. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love how it starting! I can't wait for the next chapter! hehehe I love the way kazuma and hiei fight but I can't help but think that they are just beating around the bush. Thank you, for making this Hiei/Kazuma fic. Thought I wonder what Kurama going to do see how Hiei is his lover not Kazuma. hehehe I can't wait, please come out with the next chapter soon. Thank you so much! But I want to ask you something, if you could change Kazuma to a witch, vampire, or half human half tiger which would it be? and again thank you. *Bows down*
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on February 13, 2005
    This is such a wonderful start. You had me laughing my butt off from the dialogue. You are very funny. I enjoyed the whole dream sequence, it was really unique and different. I'm looking very, very forward to seeing how you get Kuwa and Hiei together. Good luck
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