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Reviews for The Worthless Humans

By : Oreana
  • From ANON - bowserjr on March 14, 2005
    Hi, it’s me, bowserjr, from ff.net. But that doesn’t really matter, does it? Anyway, to the review….

    As soon as I read the first chapter, I was hooked. This is such an original idea. The plot is simply amazing. Nari is such a great character. The things she has gone through was terrible, but very fascinating (to me at least). I even cried at some points.

    The best part about it is you used Kouronue (I know I spelt it wrong), Yoko, and Yomi. I find it very hard to find stories containing all 3 of them, and set in their thieving days. You even stayed in character with them, which is just great (although, Kouronue only showed up in the movie, right?).


    There aren’t enough words to say how much I love reading this story (all of your stories to be exact). And I love Kouronue (damn it! I have to read it again to get his name right! >.
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  • From ANON - Anime-Alee on March 13, 2005
    Wow, she might have another baby! Yay! That would be interesting, make it Yomi's, that should make him flip his wig. Please update, I'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - Sora on March 11, 2005
    YAY! MORE MORE MORE! AHH! I love your story, and i love how you get Yomi's personality exactly right, so many people get him....to.....mushy! Yeah! But yes! Please more more more!
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  • From ANON - Supi-chan1026 on March 11, 2005
    I Luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv it !
    this is a really well thought out story. i wonder what's gonna happen next! I can't wait till you update again. make it soon please? ^_^
    *huggles*
    - courtney
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  • From ANON - anime-alee on March 11, 2005
    Keep up the great work, the abuse is a little frightening. But the whole KuronuexNari romance is sweet,
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  • From ANON - Sora on March 07, 2005
    YAY! MORE MORE MORE! ENCORE ENCORE ENCORE! Thankyou for posting so soon as well its really nice when you do that, so its not like waiting for months at an end for one chapter. I love your story! WHEE!
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  • From ANON - D-Chan on March 06, 2005
    I'm loving it so far. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sora on March 05, 2005
    I love you story! Omg! OMG! Please please please write or type more, post post post! PLEASE! I was at scool the eniter day just saying, i want to go home and read, read reaad! I apsolutly love your story! ^^
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  • From ANON - Amime-Alee on February 28, 2005
    Aaaw! Kuronue is such a kind demon, Yoko's a meany.
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  • From ANON - Kasashi Maru on February 27, 2005
    OH MY GOD WHAT A GREAT FANFICTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SPENT ALL NIGHT READING IT!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!..................... GOD IT'S GOOD!!!!! BEST SEX SCENES I'VE READ IN A WHILE! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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  • From ANON - Anime-Alee on February 24, 2005
    this is so good, please continue as soon as possible, it would be cool if the baby was Yoko or Koronue's. Aaaw ! that is if they let Nari keep it.
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  • From ANON - kuramasbluegurl on February 21, 2005
    oh man what a cliffy
    geeez
    Great fanfic you got going here.
    thanks for the great read.
    can't wait for the next update
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  • From on February 20, 2005
    You have a decent basic plot. Having KuroKuraYomi abusing human as sex slaves is not a common idea; so I’ll give you credit for that. Now, what you need to make this story so much plausible and enjoyable is a beta reader. A beta reader could work with your grammar and the story’s flow, plus you’ll be able to improve your writing skill in shorter time than it would usually takes without a beta. You already have a good tendency to explain things that needs to be explained, i.e., how Nari was kidnapped (if you have her suddenly appeared in the Makai to be a sex slave, I’ll throw bricks on you), what kind of pain rose whip could cause, etc. You only have to hone up the sensibility skill about which bits that need more explanation and which bits that would be boring and become wordy if you mention it over and over again.
    BTW, poor Nari and NO, girls don’t bleed that much when they first fucked. I thought she was having her period or something. Or was she? Otherwise, I like this story and definitely want to know how things turn out.
    You sick psycho and I’m glad YYH section still have a psycho like you to live things up a lil’ bit! Mwahahahha!!!

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  • From ANON - crystal_moon13 on February 16, 2005
    Humm....well good story so far, I like it. Nice idea for the plot line. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I wonder if there are going to be some relationships in this story.
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