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Reviews for Unwanted Feelings

By : WindCharmer
  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy to Sign In) on February 28, 2005
    YAYYYYY UPDATEEE! This fic is so awesome it draws me in so very well. I almost feel like I need to get off my butt and finish my own fic and post it on here. I am at the last scene of the story, and I have been too damn lazy lately to finish it. Oh well, but I promise I'll get it done if you get another chapter out soon. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! I don't wanna wait too long now... I love this story and you describe the feelings so well. So again... Please another chapter soon? I'll be good! I'll give ya candy!!! ::Puppy Eyes::
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  • From ANON - Yamistar on February 27, 2005
    Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! She's back! I thought you'd given up...but then I thought "No, she can't give up," and I kept checkin' at least once a day. Though, usually I'll check everytime I get on. Which, given what day it is, I'll get on about three to four tiems a day....*shrugs* I hate school. It's evol I tell ya! But hey, that's alright that you go slow. Don't feel bad. I do the same thing. Though, long chapters aren't my problem. It's keeping the right tense, and choosing which POV I wanna do....*cries* You must continue!!! ~Ys
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  • From ANON - LittleKitsune on February 27, 2005
    Woo for procrastination!
    (Well, not really. But hey, that's me being a hypocrite)
    What does the stuff at the top spell out- don't tell me,
    "You must wait".
    Foo.
    Anyways, still great
    (and short.. but whose complaining? I mean, besides me)
    I shall be waiting for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - Lythande on February 24, 2005
    I think I really want to read more of this. I only read it because I wanted some Hiei/Kurama yaoi short enough that I could read before I went back to class, and now I'm kinda hooked. So hook me up - update!
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  • From EmbersEye on February 24, 2005
    I like it. I've seen a lot of one shots done with this theme. It will be nice to see someone finally expand on it. I hope you add in a past rather than just a future.
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  • From ANON - Koorime1905 on February 24, 2005
    You do it good so never worry about your writing because it very good and very passionnate.Ne,minna-san.Update soon,I'll wait for you.Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Yamistar on February 21, 2005
    One of the good old authors comes back to save AFF from the evolness that is crappy ass writing!!! I thought you'd never come back!! *laughs* But hell, I like the way it's going. Are ya gonna make them fall in love? Or are ya gonna be angsty and like, have one die, and the other be sad that he let such a good opportunity go by! Good, there's so many ways that you can continue this. But hey, whatever you choose, I'll be readin' it. That is, if you make this into a fic...*looks hopeful* Pwease? ~Ys
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  • From ANON - kurayami_ni_koorime on February 20, 2005
    Yum... I had forgotten what this song sounded like until now. Mmm... that was good, hopefully you wont just leave it at that and have it be hot mindless smut; Id love to read more. There weren’t even any spelling mistakes, truly and wholly a great beginning.
    Fav line: The dark haired figure broke the encounter, "Slower, softer." The redhead continued his actions in response, a silent answer.

    -kat
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  • From ANON - LittleKitsune on February 19, 2005
    Oooh... songficcy, at first. This is going to get good! The lemon was good, and i shall wait for the next chap! Mwaahaahaa, screw buddies turned more.. or not, depending on Hiei... ah well. Ja ne!
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  • From EnchanteNoir on February 19, 2005
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I love it I love it!!!!!!!!!! You have got to update soon. Please? This story ROCKS! And who is that song by?
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  • From ANON - Midnight Vixen on February 19, 2005
    I'm enjoying this so far. It's well written, blissfully coherant, and there have not yet been any disgusting breeches of character. Please continue on with this story.
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