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Reviews for Unwanted Feelings

By : WindCharmer
  • From RChan on October 01, 2005
    I've never reviewed this? Wow, you've gotta be kidding me! I really, really liked it. It's sweet and has a great ending, not too happy, but not the saddest either, I really appreciate that. Keep up the great work, I hope to see more of your stuff soon!
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  • From ANON - Foxgirl_500 on June 30, 2005
    Nice, I just wish at the end they had gotten together. BUt in not having them do so, you did make the fic a bit more realistic. (reality sucks, don't it?) And if you are the one who made the virign Youko fic, then you have gotten better, that fic seemed the total oppostie of belivibale!
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  • From kogaluver on April 21, 2005
    Wow! That was the most amazing fic I've read in a long time. I had tears in my eyes. Your writing is so poetic and emotional. I'm in total awe of you. I usually do not read Hiei/Kurama fics anymore because I've read so, so, so many when I first discovered fanfiction sites with my favorite anime characters. But after awhile the pairing just became very redundant and boring. I mean, how many different senerios can you put two people in. And there are thousands of stories featuring these two. So this is the first Hiei/Kurama fic I've read in a really, really long time. I'm so impressed with what you did here with their characters. It was so touching. Also, I'm a sucker for a happy ending and these two not getting together at the end of this fic was really sad, but you made it work. I hope I'm making some kind of sense. Bottom line is that you are an exceptionally talented writer. I feel honored to have read this. Now I'm off to see what other fics you have for me to read. I bet they're all Hiei/Kurama fic too, LOL.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 07, 2005
    OMG, that was a perfect ending!!! I'm not a big fan of "sad" endings, but that one just fit soooooo well with the rest of the story/the general feel of the fic. Bitersweet, and with a possibility that Hiei may grow to love Kurama in return. (after a while.....who knows, ne?) ^___^ Absolutely wonderful -- congrats!!! Oh, and i likes the second song more than the first......it just seemed to flow better in the context of the story, and it mentioned key things like "demon" and "one last hit", etc. Just fyi. ^^ Keep up the good work!!! Bye!!!
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  • From ANON - sisko66002(not signed in) on April 07, 2005
    Definantly the second one. The words go with the chapter a lot better. It's a wonderful ending to an even better fic.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on April 07, 2005
    I think that was lovely, really. I mean, it's not like they really decieved themselves...very nicely written...
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom on April 07, 2005
    Awsome fic. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 05, 2005
    *snickers* "We Make Love But Don't Fall In Author's Note" *cracks up* (LMAO) Sorry, sorry, I just couldn't help it!!! ^^ I reeeeeeeally like this story a lot. It's very creative, and a plot line that I think more people should write about. I really like the way you have protrayed Kurama's and Hiei's characters -- very realistic! Oh, and I have enjoyed your writting style, too......... ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? I can't wait to find out how you end it!!!
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  • From KitsuneBaby2004 on March 31, 2005
    I can't believe the next chapter's going to be the end! *sniffles* This is still one of my favorite Kurama/Hiei stories ever! No Hiei acting too sappy, no Kurama acting all rough and tough (which in Youko's case isn't a baad thing). Anywho, I hope this last chapter is a blockbuster! Keep it going! ^_^
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  • From EmbersEye on March 27, 2005
    I'm awaiting the ending in anticipation. I do love the way you're writing the story, keeping everyone in character nearly perfectly (nearly of course as all fans have different interpretations). The one criticism I have is that is always seems to me as if you never proof read your chapters very carefully. I am constantly finding grammatical errors (mostly in tenses) that would easily be found if you read the chapters aloud.
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  • From ANON - December Wind on March 26, 2005
    Ohmygod you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!
    I'm actually kind of ashamed to admit this but I come in daily to check if you've updated....(Yes, I'm a stalker)
    I can't believe this is going to end soon! Please update ASAP. I'm dying from the suspense!
    I actually kind of like it when Kurama and Hiei don't end up together... (whether it be external or internal reasons)
    Oh, of course I gripe on it and tear out my hair in frustration but I still enjoy the heartache all the same :D~
    (Then I scream, Nooooooooooooooooo!!!!! , and debate whether I really do like sad endings or not)

    Anyway, keep up your good work/ can't wait for the ending~!
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  • From ANON - Heidi on March 26, 2005
    Just wanted you to know that I love the story and can't wait till you update
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  • From ss_dragon_lady on March 26, 2005
    I hope this is not going to be a fic where one of them dies. There is way to many of those out there. Please don't kill one of them off. It would be too sad. Let them live happy ever after. I know I'm a sucker for fluff. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens as long as it is not one of them dying. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Yamistar on March 25, 2005
    I swear, if you have a character death in this story...I'll scream! Trust me, I'll do it too. But hell, what does it matter to you. That chapter was...kinda weird. It felt like it was just a filler. But that's okay. In a kick ass story like this, fillers are the smae as the main point chapter tot he story! Really. You'd better finish soon! Iw anna know what they do. Just please don't Make Mr. Bishonen Angst Waves aka Kurama kill himself! I don't like the bloak too much (and I'm not English) but don't make him die! Hi-chan would never forgive you! But, considering that fact that he's a fictionalcharacter, it don't really matter. Damn it. ~Ys
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  • From ANON - hColleen on March 25, 2005
    Oy, why does life need to be so difficult? Wouldn't things be easier if we never learned to lie? I'm sorry, my brain's not functioning too well. I look forward to the ending. I do enjoy this story :D
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