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Reviews for Obligations

By : buenagirl
  • From on February 05, 2010
    I'd like to welcome you back to fanfiction and offer a plea for you to keep writing Yu Yu Hakusho. I've been reading and enjoying your stories for a long time, and it would be a pleasure to see a continuation of Obligations or some newer ones with the same wonderful creativity, and perhaps a more mature style.

    Looking forward to a reply (if my email doesn't come through, it's stalkercrow@gmail.com),

    Sekah.
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on January 13, 2010
    come on!!!!! Write more! Why did you stop when it was just getting good!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - tala ishter on August 26, 2006
    you have to update. i want to see what happens
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  • From ANON - tala ishter on July 08, 2006
    this is a good fanfic. i hope that you update it soon. i want to see what happends to kurama.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    wow absolutely love it!!!!! plz plz plz update soon. i really like where this story is going. cant wait il you put up the next chap. plz hurry ciao
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) on October 01, 2005
    Wow. Please continue, that was amazing. The social dynamics of the canon's main characters along with those of your own creation has me absolutely on the edge of my seat throughout each chapter! My comments for the first three chapters: 1) "assets" - very cute 2)In the first chapter Kurama was 10. When did he suddenly age 7 years? 3)It sounds like this is aset in a fantasy novel-like world. There are obviously demons, but they aren't the normal demons we are used to seeing - not a bad thing though. 4)There were a few grammatical errors, nothing too detracting from the story, but you once, for example, used "serene" as a verb. 5) "Prescience" = ubercool word. 6)Majari keeps refering to Hiei as "beloved." I suppose that is just Majari being wierd, right? 6)How are the common people dealing with the ruling rivalries between Yama and Karasu? That political situation could be fleshed out a bit better. 7)Please update!
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  • From ANON - amber on September 08, 2005
    I really wish you would update soon it;s driving me crazy

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  • From ANON - amber on August 23, 2005
    When are you going to update? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - amber on July 28, 2005
    that was great. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kiri on July 09, 2005
    wow... i feel so cool!! i have a chapter dedicated to me!!
    good job, the update was great!!
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  • From ANON - Kayla on July 09, 2005
    This story just keeps getting better and better. I so can not wait for another chapter lol

    Please get another chapter out soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - JadedSoul on July 07, 2005
    Wow! This is such a wonderfully elaborate plot. The time and effort you must have put into it really shows. Update soon if you get the chance, I simply must know what happens.
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  • From ANON - jay on July 07, 2005
    ohhh my god that was really good keep up the good work man
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  • From ANON - kiri on July 03, 2005
    come on!! you must update!! the idea you have is great but it won't be any good if you don't actually update and continue this story!!
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  • From kittyblue on May 15, 2005
    Wow!! I love your stories and this one is not an exception!!
    After reading "To Yield" and adoring it, I came to this one.. And I'm completely loving it!
    The idea is pretty interesting and til now I really can't wait to read more!!
    Want to see some Yusuke/Kurama drooling scenes!! But til then..
    I'll go for anything /Kurama!! :p
    Poor Kurama-chan! ^^
    I really hope that you update soon!
    Kiss
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