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Reviews for Shadow Lover

By : EnchanteNoir
  • From ANON - Kurama_is_mine on December 13, 2005
    i hope you update soon!!! poor kurama and hiei so much angst but who doesnt love that!!! actually i hope hiei kills hattori no offense though!! sorry to hear school is stopping you from writing *curses school* well again update soon i need to know what happens!!!! and you write beautifully!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tala Ishtar on December 13, 2005
    i like this story. i also know what it is like to have a college class the is hard. i had one this term. good luck. tala
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  • From ANON - sukini on December 08, 2005
    Great Story ^-^
    Please, please, please, don't let Hattori suffer too much! I'll understand if you have to kill him, but maybe as a special favour to me he could find his old lover's soul in the afterlife or something like that? It's just so sad that he's not going to get a chance of happiness when Kura and Hiei will get one another. I just can't stop thinking that he's going to die in a state of lonliness and sorry and regret...maybe I'm making too much of the character, but I really like him. ALSO, to be fair, his behaviour is inherently demonic, and confusing demon metality with human can ruin a story. I don't think that Hiei would consider Hattori a nasty piece of work because he killed humans, but because he was simply jealous. Remember, selfishness is part of being a demon, and Hattori probably wouldn't have been brought up to know wrong from right.
    Anywho, that's my pitch to save the OC, which is a rare thing for me (I usually hate OCs), so please humour me!
    Lol
    Sukini
    xxxx
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 06, 2005
    Hey - I know that aff has f*cked up majorly and there is no "latest chapter", but I wanted to review since I read it last week and didn't get a chance to review.

    GODS, I LOVE YOU. You actually had me wincing during the part where Kurama is screaming in pain and cursing Hiei, who is at the end of the corridor listening. Our poor poor demons! This is one great story - I was even telling my bf about it, and he was like - hey, that sounds really really cool - you usually don't get that kind of creativity in fanfiction - and he's right!

    Also, most people don't know how to do OCs, but you have created quite the intriguing one! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From hColleen on November 22, 2005
    I'm sorry you've got sucky classes. Hopefully, since I know their part of the required courses, once you're done with them, they're done for good and you can focus more on classes that you like (the benifits of college) Good luck and best wishes!
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  • From mhmartini on November 19, 2005
    As much as I hate to admit it, real life has to take priority over fanfiction writing. When you update it is when we'll read it.

    If you need help with math or science, I was always pretty good at those (majored in animal science, so had to take plenty of each). Let me know and maybe I can help. Feel free to e-mail me; my e-mail is in my profile.

    Good luck during your finals.
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  • From angelfoxsam on November 07, 2005
    i love this fanfic, please update soon! T.T *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Kujata on October 30, 2005
    Blood and Roses sounds more intriguing. Sorry, I'm not much into Yu-Yu Inuyasha crossovers, it makes my brain work to much, lol. I liked this chapter, I can't wait for the next one, that one will have me on the edge of my seat, so to speak (if I actually was on the edge of my seat, I would fall out of my chair, lol). Well, check back with you soon.
    -Kujata-
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on October 29, 2005
    I'm relatively new to this site and am taking the time to read some stories every day. I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see more of it. You are a very talented writer... I LOVE the descriptive passages as well as how intimately you know your characters.

    And if I am, for your next story, my voice is 'The Reunion of Blood and Roses'.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 25, 2005
    I am enjoying this story very much and wanted to let you know that I appreciate your attention to grammar and spelling. You have done well portraying the character's feelings. As for the next fic; Please do the YuYu/Inu.

    Snowfall
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 25, 2005
    LOVED this chapter as well - Hiei's confused emotions and obvious pain at betraying Kurama are heartwrenching yet wonderful to read. I'm SO looking forward to the next few chapters.

    And my vote is for the vampyre story (I'm not really an Inuysha fan), but you really should go wherever the muse leads you - or work on them both!
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  • From ANON - Lady Baltimore on October 25, 2005
    Sounds narly. But which one should I pick...? ... Gahhh... I'd like to impose... "Saikai", if I may... ^ ^
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  • From ANON - hColleen on October 24, 2005
    I like that you didn't have Hiei totally in denail about his emotions, just not quite totally understanding them...I like you had him hurt to "betray" Kurama and htat he appologized as he acted. :D My brain is shot at the moment, but as for your next story, write the one that's loudest in your head.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on October 24, 2005
    nice chapter. i don't think this chapter was sadder than the previous one, though. i don't think you described the emotional scenes as well as you did last time. it was more like watching an unknown person die in a movie versus reading a fanfiction about two of my favorite anime characters. update soon, though! i have a feeling next chapter will be really good.
    oh, and about the stories, i vote for the 20-chaptered one because that one seems more interesting to me.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on October 24, 2005
    First for this story I love it. I don't envey them what will happen when Kurama wakes up but look forward to Hiei saving and I hope winning Kurama. Update soon. As to another story, I don't mind alternate universe and the occasional other character but I don't like crossovers. I am very monogomous to YuYu Hakusho.
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