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Reviews for Shadow Lover

By : EnchanteNoir
  • From solitare1 on December 13, 2007
    You write some intense stories. I'm just sorry I didn't read them sooner. Excellent work!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 27, 2006
    I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed this until now, my life has been a ball of chaos lately, but I ma SO GLAD you posted the final chapter.

    The hotness of the lemon...wow. I mean...wow. I don't know what it is about Kurama screaming Hiei's name that just does it, and the mating marks at the ned of the lemon with Kurama changing form was exquisite. I didn't think that Hiei was OOC, because it was well done and explained in the story. I also loved Hiei just appearing and telling everyone to get out (that is totally Hiei).

    I really loved this story, this is totally in my recommended reading!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on January 24, 2006
    So great!I loved the story and really I don't think Hiei was"that" out of it in the last chapter after everything he went through
    to get what was his to begin with.I had hoped it would be Hiei from the begining of the story yet the other demon was a great touch.
    I really look forward to the one shot and second arc of this story.Nicely done
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  • From ANON - Kurama_is_mine on January 24, 2006
    loved it!! im glad their okay now and getting married. thats so cute!! yay one shot please!! looking forward to your new story!!!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on January 24, 2006
    Excellent fic with an awesome ending. I loved it.

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  • From ANON - hColleen on January 24, 2006
    Nice. I like the way you deal with the emotions and shock that Kurama forced upon himself and how Hiei reacted to that. I was gonna say more, but my brain decided to go on vacation...

    I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to more :D
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 29, 2005
    OMG this kiss! and the Youko-ness and the not hurting Hattori! I LOVED this chapter - but then again, I love anything that has Hiei being all soft and vulnerable with Kurama, and that image of him with the rose whip around his throat asking for the kiss...GYAD.

    And I so loved that Hattori was so involved with thinking that Kurama was "his Rose" that he never noticed that Kurama had all these powers (Ahem, where DID that rosewhip come from? Heh).

    You know, at first I was hoping that Hiei would rough Hattori up a bit for what he did to Kurama, but you wrote such a convincing OC that I began to feel for him and I realized that he's just a confused kitsune who lost his love, so I'm glad you didn't hurt him (much) after all. Good job.

    And your compliments made me blush. Your story is GOD, I am worshipping you.
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  • From ANON - tinyteeth on December 28, 2005
    Another beautiful chapter not as heart wrenching as the last, Thank God, but still very good. Sad stories and a cold do not mix very well.

    I am undecided if I like the fact Hattori ended up with Rose. true he did only want to be with her, but what of the others he killed and tossed of like worthless stones. Death in this case seemed like a reward not punishment. Perhaps I am looking to deep into but it just gives me an empty spot in my heart.

    Ok enough with that, hope you enjoy your visit to Va. the weather has been fairly decent for the past few days here.

    Once again thank you so much for letting all of us enjoy the workings of you and your muse.
    ~bows to your greatness~
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  • From ANON - Sukini on December 28, 2005
    YAY! Yay! Yay! Hittori and Rose are happy together! Thank you so much for ending (well, nearly) the story like that. I thought your Youko Kurama was well written too. Your lemon scenes are hottt! Not too long either, and they fit so well with the story.
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  • From ANON - Kurama_is_mine on December 28, 2005
    YAY!! two new chapters!! *throws cookies* i loved it although since im a mean person Hattori should have just died and not been able to go back to his love for what he did to Kurama and Hiei!! the emotions you put into the two were amazing!! i love the way you write so keep it up!!! anyway update soon and yay for lemons!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on December 28, 2005
    Noooo! Don't rewrite chapter six, it's fine. I'd rather have the epilog and what I hope will be a hppay ending. Please update before you leave.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on December 28, 2005
    Wow,what a ending chapter yet I thought it was just a little (I dono"dry) or something.After all Hiei was put through he didn't even see the smuck get it.Plus Your right it was a little lite for a fighting scene yet still very good.Kurama has quite alot to answer for with Hiei yet being under the influance of another counts alot I'd think.Plus paying Hiei could be made to be fun for both of them,Like slave for a month or something.Can't wait to see what you do and hope you update it soon
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  • From ANON - hColleen on December 28, 2005
    I'm glad you got through your classes :D Yays. Personally, unless you're only doing minor tweaking and editing, I wouldn't scrap the chapter. Seriously. I think about trashing almost everythinig I write, but I am a lot harder on myself than you guys are...I can't ever clarifly exactly what I don't like about my writing, but I'm never happy with it, y'know...I'm sure you do. But, I also have gotten to the point (mostly) where I realize my opinion of my writing is invalid until a couple of days later (after I post it) and then I can see it from a "reader's" point of view, rather than the "author's" view point...does that make sense? Until then, I really don't know what people see in my writing...I am genuinely confused by my reviews...they make me happy, yes, but confuse me...anyways...about this chapter (which is what this is supposed to be about, right?) I'm glad Hottari saw that he was deluded. Does his death mean that Suki won't die? I suppose so, since it broke his hold over Kurama. I feel so badly for Kurama...with all the pain and confusion he's feeling...and the guilt over the things he said to Hiei...and nearly killing him, too...he's got a lot to cope with. I mean, we know Hiei's already forgiven him, but forgiving one's self is a lot harder. Anyways...look forward to what comes next!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on December 27, 2005
    WOOT!!!...Great chapter!!! Thanks for updating!!!

    hmm... now that would be something... if Kurama caught Hattori having sex with the mortal girl...

    Update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on December 27, 2005
    I hope you're not teasing us with a 2 year old story that you're not going to update. It's really hot and deserves at least one more really hot lemon chapter. Update soon.
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