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By : lildemonicfoofoo
  • From BlueUtopiah on December 17, 2005
    I am a big fan of The Metal Ring, and I just LOVED chapter 5 of this story. There's something amazing about how Hiei and Kurama met, and when you layer it with your tale, it becomes so incredible. And, um, yeah, it was hot - very hot (likes the image of Kurama in Hiei's lap). Is there more?
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  • From ANON - ko-krama on December 17, 2005
    Ha! That was great! I'm glad you're still writing! And the chapter before this... you are definately bold lol

    Later ^_~
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  • From ryukotsusei on June 27, 2005
    Very Interesting, haven't seen that scenerio done before. Great works! Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - gasps on June 27, 2005
    Urk... warn people of the pairings. I don't like to be tricked into something I don't want to read. Major turn-off.
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  • From ANON - Ko-Krama on April 04, 2005
    I was about to say, you're really on a roll here with the updates lol ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ko-Krama on April 04, 2005
    YEEESSSSSSSSS!!!

    ...See what I mean?

    ...That was an awesome fight scene!!! He didn't use his Rose Whip or noth'n! He just ripped some grass into the air and "WHAM!"... more like "CLUNK." but you get the idea. It was just so... it seemed like something Kurama would do, you know? 50 points for creativity.

    May I make a note? That was the fastest update you've ever made, but I guess that means all the previous chapters you'd made in "The Metal Ring" won't be included here? *sob* But Tiny~... please? God, I don't want to be a nagging pain but... don't you think this breaks the rule you had set for yourself? No? Okay, sorry, sorry... ^ ^'

    Please update as soon as possible and share your divine writer's thoughts with everyone! Bye! ~(^-^~)
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 04, 2005
    Not too bad a bit disjointed, since it went from 1 place to the next with no explaination. I think that 1 of the translations of Sesshoumaru is killing perfection, I have heard others.
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on April 04, 2005
    Well, lemon's were very nice. I'm still a little... *boggled* at the idea of 'consenual rape' though. Non-consensual sex, yes. Consenual rape, huh? Point of rape is that it's an act of violence, and dominance, and not wanted. At all. Non-consenual sex (IMO) is when someone does not want it, but their body still find's pleasure in it, so it's not entirely an act of violence and dominance. But, maybe I'm just reading that wrong. (It *is* 12:30 AM, with my nocturnal habits, I'm still rubbing crust out of my eye's.)

    Yeah, couple year's back I read Sesshomaru mean's either "perfect killer" or "child of death". What a wonderful name for a child, but then again, his brother *is* named Inuyasha... (will never get over that) I guess the parent's didn't want either of their son's to ever have an 'identity crisis' lol
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on March 25, 2005
    Though this was a very very hot chapter,you changed it abit.Somewhat for the better
    I think.I loved The Metal Ring story even though it got alittle off track and can't wait to
    see what you do to it now .Hope you update soon with it. I printed it out the first time to share with some friends and they've been asking about updates,hope I can tell them
    that they're coming soon

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  • From ANON - Ko-Krama on March 25, 2005
    The original seemed to me, something likes... *BHAM! BHAM! BHAM!* While the revision looks to be more descriptive, though still just as worthy of attention.

    Requests!? Oh God yes... all I need is you putting the YuHaku characters in hot, saucy situations with your racey, ninja writing tactics! I'm sure you'll always give your readers a feeling of orgasmic euphoria... just from seeing that you've updated. No joke, and not flattery... it's the goddamn truth.

    Vell. Are you going to revise the other chapters, as well? And now the big Kahuna- Are you going to be writing more stories? ... You're not just going to leave me here in a very *painful* predicament are you!?! You gotta stop that cliff-hanging... you're gonna kill somebody one of these days.

    I hope to see an update... or I'll have to bang my head against the fridge... ... I want ice cream...
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  • From WindCharmer on March 24, 2005
    I think this had a better flow. But still, what a cliffy tease! =D
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