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Reviews for Lesson One, Demon Pride

By : kawaiikitsunethief
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 02, 2005
    Holy Shit. OMG, that was amazing!!! What a neat idea!!! Oh, I do hope that you plan to continue it............ *wants to know what happens when the others realize what Kurama has "turned into"* ....I just hope that you don't have him......"do anything"......with Kuwabara. *shudders* Sorry, can't help it......not that I don't like Kuwabara, per se, it just that.....welllllll...........you know! ^^ Now Hiei or Yuusuke, on the other hand........ ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - suchahentai on April 02, 2005
    that was awesome. the last image was perfect, its about time kurama got some spine.
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  • From ANON - Lurker on April 01, 2005
    *mouth drops open in shock* *sputters* You cannot be cruel enough to keep this as a one-shot! Hell if you do keep it that way, there must at least be a sequel! I mean, jesus. *stares at fic again and re-reads it* That ending is just begging for a sequel. Hell, *I'm* begging for a sequel! I've never been the person that fully embraces the whole 'Kurama has two souls in one body' thing (frankly, the idea has me brooding for a bit everytime it comes up, and I frequently avoid the topic whenever I can.) However, stories like this always interest me; I did like the way Yoko confronts his human counterpart and makes him accept who he is and who he will always be. I've always taken a liking to Yoko, probably because I'm all for demons and bloodshed (or bloodlust for that matter). Letting the youko out after such a long time of holding him back promise's much bloodshed, so I'm all for this fic. *nod nod* (What can I say, I'm sick *shakes head at her undeniably freakish ways*). But again, the ending is going to kill me, there is so much weight in those words... I'd really love to see more of this if you're willing to write more.

    Basically, I enjoyed reading this immensely, Yoko in all his cold, cruel, demonic glory; defiling his counterpart (and what a fucking headtrip THAT was!) is always a good way to start off my day at 4 A.M. lol
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  • From ANON - cillaxox (not logged in) on March 31, 2005
    WOW! That was so good. I've never read a fic like this before. It was very in character, very creative and very sexy. I enjoyed it from the first line all the way down to the last one. And that was a great ending line, it made me smile. I think that's all I have to say.
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  • From ANON - Hotaru1421 on March 31, 2005
    Wow...that was just...wow...why must that be a one-shot? do you have any other Youko/Kurama stories? Please tell me!
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  • From ANON - shikari on March 31, 2005
    that was a ausome story!!! it sent chills down my spine!!!

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