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Reviews for Lesson One, Demon Pride

By : kawaiikitsunethief
  • From Rossettarette on May 11, 2008
    Sweetness! When is lesson 2?
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  • From caramelkisses on November 09, 2007
    Ahh. Just the way a demon SHOULD behave.
    I liked this, very much.
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  • From ANON - Kawaii-Keke-Chan on August 07, 2006
    Like, wow. Hot. Absolutely hot.
    There is really no more i can say...
    but wow!
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  • From ANON - ValleyKnown on December 27, 2005
    Wonderful job, really! I would've liked to see a bit more description towards the end when the others find him... I was mildly confused...was Kurama when they found him their old Kurama, Youko, or the "new" Kurama? Other than that, good job! I'd like to read more!
    Sincerely,
    ValleyKnown
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  • From ANON - HieiJaganshi11 (not logged in) on December 13, 2005
    awesome!!! ya think ya could make a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Swirly on November 21, 2005
    Sugoi... this is intense. Are you planning on another chapter?
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  • From ANON - wouldn\'t you like to know? on November 17, 2005
    HOLY CRAP!

    That was CREEPTAZTIK!

    I love how EVIL you made Youko! He is a demon afterall....

    And that madness about it being Shuuichi's mind totally pwn3d ASS...

    "Do you need to be taught a lesson?" is now written on all my binders. The profeseurs look at it and say I need to be taught a lesson, which makes me pretty much laugh my ass off. Because all my teachers this semester are these old geezers that I think would die if they ever saw a guy with a guy.

    But that's just too bad for them, ne? They aren't privy to such CREEPTAZTIKNESS as this story, which is really too bad.

    KEEP WRITING POUR LES PETITS ENFANTS!!!
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  • From ANON - KawaiiKoneko89 on October 26, 2005
    That was great I loved it!!! I swear that was great I am a sadist at heart so it would have been nice if you coulda put in some of the ways the low level Youkai died. But I am satisfied.
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  • From ANON - whirleeQ on October 05, 2005
    Wow. I second my 'Wow'. That was... twisted, and yet, so beautifully written... and the last line was classic! You truly have a talent for this. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Kiri on August 02, 2005
    I've read this several times by now, and i have to say this is amazing. Are you doing a sequel at any point? If it wasn't at the point of night when i am half-asleep, i'd be typing "please" every other word with many exclamation points and whatnot...
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  • From ANON - Aikou Yami on May 26, 2005
    That was one hell of a good story :) I love it.
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  • From ANON - Kuranga108 on May 01, 2005
    this one-shot was awesome!!! never read anything like it before. this was way too cool. great, great story!!!
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  • From ANON - Hotaru1421 on April 15, 2005
    Do you have any other yaoi stories with Youko in them?! Please tell me you do! E-mail me!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on April 04, 2005
    That's actually kinda creepy...in a weird and twisted and...whoa...type way...very strange
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  • From ANON - LittleKitsune on April 03, 2005
    Disturbing, but oh so good. I love the last line. Silly mortal, mercy is for fools!! *looking evil* ok, this has brought on a drak mood.. but in a good way.
    Must listen to heavy metal now (or at least rock)
    *gets two HUGE thrubs up signs*
    I Salute your dark mind!!
    *we see a certain little fox drawing evil chibis, listning to Rammstien and Metallica*
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