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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : mhmartini

From ANON - comicfancat on April 19, 2005
Sorry I didn't review at the last chapter but you know how computers act up(I hope)
Anyway,All I can say is wow to the last two chapters.Its great to see Hiei and Kurama's mom
connecting so well,you almost hope she gets a moment alone with him,almost.
Gotta figure Yusuke would be the one to understand without saying and help the two out as well.
Hope you update soon. Hey when are you updateing "Bugs" Aren't you going to let Hiei wake soon or what?
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From ANON - Botan on April 19, 2005
I applaud you for what you've done. I'm glad that you've stood up for your story being stolen. Especially if it's your baby. I know the first one I've ever written (The search for Puu) Is my pride and joy and I just love it to pieces. I'd post it up but it's like rated 'G'. And i couldn't stand if anything happened to it. Later. Botan
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From ANON - Mz.Bitz. on April 18, 2005
I can't organize my thoughts so, here's a list:
1. �He already thinks I am too feminine. To find me in the arms of another male....� < AWW. I thought that was such a cute line.
2. KURAMA IS SO SWEET, KEEPING THE SECRET, EVEN THOUGH HE IS LIKE DYING OF PAIN!
3. I can completely understand why Hiei couldn't say it back, I totally see it! Why am I talking like this?, or rather typing. Anyway, oh man these two are just toooooo cute. =]

I can't wait for the next chapter
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From hColleen on April 18, 2005
And shame on me for not reviewing sooner. I've read this on your site and over at ff.net...I've reviewed it over at ff.net...so why not here, too...

I've run into nurses like both the ones you described. Personally, I (and the medical community is *starting* [slowly] to) think pain management should be the number one concern...there are all kinds of pain killers, cycle them if need be...I am typing random thoughts invoked by the story...

I really like your writing style...were you to have a book written, I would definately need to buy it :D (there, that may be more of a review, ne?) I've gotten too much sun today, so I'll wander off now ;D
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From mhmartini on April 18, 2005
*sigh* I have never reviewed my own story before, and usually I am against such an action, but I have had about enough. I want to make my opinion known, and I absolutely refuse to do so by appending replies to garbage flames and taunts to my story. I value it much more than that. These events will not affect my writing; I will not change it, discontinue it, or otherwise bend. I do this for me, and have found that others enjoy it, and that is the most rewarding gratification I can gain. So rather than contaminating my story, I shall express myself here. I will most likely erase this in a few days, since I do not consider it a true review.

First of all, to all the authors and reviewers who have boldly stepped up to defend me: I appreciate your support more than you know. I am so flattered that not only do you read my work, but you respect it enough to stand up for it. Thank you all so much.

To Anon: What have you ever written? You make such snide comments, but you have no idea about that of which you type. You should try posting something that has part of your soul in it for the world to read and either embrace or degrade. It�s scary. Apparently it is too scary for you, since you will not even sign your name to a one line comment. I really do not appreciate your presence on my review board, and if you have nothing constructive to say, then please just go away. I have been patient, and have ignored you, yet you still seem to revel in attempting to cause disorder here. What did I do to you? If it is a matter of you not liking my story, then just don�t read it. I have been very kind to you, please extend me the same courtesy.

In response to the courtesies you have already extended me, I would like to return to you the following: It�s called an apostrophe. Look it up. Capitalization is your friend. Merriam-Webster has a lovely, free online dictionary available for you to use. If you are unsure of grammar (which you are) please refer to the online blue book of grammar, I believe you may find it useful. Once you have learned to spell your name, and you have grown up just a bit, you will realize how incredibly dumb you make yourself sound. You have been back almost every day to taunt me and my reviewers with personal barbs and insults, and yet you cannot even express yourself effectively there. Please direct this energy into improving yourself, and perhaps soon you will be the author putting your soul into your work, and finding the courage to share it publicly. If that does happen, I will not flame you as you have flamed me. I do not think it is fair, and I would not do that, even to you.

Now, please leave my story and my reviewers alone.

Regretfully submitted,
mhmartini
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From ANON - Mea on April 18, 2005
To Anon-
You are a stupid homophobic bitch, who is gonna get her ass kicked some day! If you don't like this story, don't read it! I like this story, other people like this story, so leave us alone! This is a really good story that has a great plot! Most stories today don't have that, but this one does! So stop all this flaming! :P
To mhmartina-
I love this story, Anon is just stupid. Please continue!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
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From ANON - Altar of Wishes on April 18, 2005
Anon,

I thought that we tiold you to cut the crap. Nobody's kissing mhmartini's ass; we're just kicking yours. No go back to your stained sheets and shut the hell up if you know what's good for you.

--Altar of Wishes
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From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2005
youre all a bunch of lesbian hoes. thats why youre all kissing her ass.
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From ANON - kettricken on April 17, 2005
Hey there =) I've read your story in its currently-posted entirety on your website, but it's easier to review here on AFF... I just wanted to let you know that your stories--all of them--are beautiful, they are truly works of art as well as labors of love, and you should be so proud of them. I read your note about the theft of Coming Clean, and I hope you know that all of us faithful readers out here are so very sorry for what happened. I hope the whole mess gets cleaned up soon, and that you get the credit you deserve on the site your story was unethically posted on. Good luck, and keep writing!
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From WindCharmer on April 17, 2005
The bashing of this story is completely shocking. To be completely honest, it's hard to find such a well-written fic for an anime - especially one that has been introduced into the US for so long. And I love this one and "Bugs"! Seriously, do people have no lives? It clearly states Shounen-ai in the descr. I'm just very sick of homophobia, and seeing as one of my friends is one, I think I've had my daily dose. SO to move on, THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL FIC. It's completely moving, beautiful BEAUTIFUL writing, and brings that clutching feeling to my heart. Plus, this is probabaly one of the longest reviews I have ever written, I'm no good with reviews. So I think I should stop here. hehe..
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From ANON - thoth_moon on April 17, 2005
Oh yeah, and to join in with all the "Anonymous" bashers....

To the hateful, cowardly "Anonynmous",

Haven't you anything better to do than read a story that you evidently don't like, and then post flame after flame? You know, something better to do like, oh, learn to SPELL, or perhaps to learn not to make such dumb, childish jokes like "which one kneels" (NOT "neels")"for the other?", you damn illiterate, immature swine of a homophobic peice of cowardly excrement.

Yours to loathe, if so you wish (Hey, what do I care? I'll consider it a compliment, if anything at all),

-- thoth_moon
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From ANON - thoth_moon on April 17, 2005
Ahh... such sweet yet subtle displays of affection. I love that phrase, "love that transcends gender", or however it goes. Of course, I doubt someone such as Hatanaka will take this as subtle as Shiori (well yes, I know he doesn't take it well, as one may see in "Bugs", but whether he blows up or is passive/aggressive or whatever...)
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From ANON - Everqueen on April 16, 2005
HEHE, fox torture fetish indeed. Poor Kurama, but it gives Hiei a chance to keep rescuing our favorite Kitsune and Shiori to see that Kurama and Hiei are a good couple.
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From ANON - Altar of Wishes on April 16, 2005
*scrapes Anon's guts off the floor* I guess this means I have to keep reviewing since you now know that I read "Coming Clean". To tell you the truth, I read this at Animespiral.
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From ANON - Jade Tokier on April 16, 2005
You know, I truly detest reviewers like you who give no specified reason as to why they hate a fic, only their lack of maturity and down right cry baby antics are shown. Also, I agree with Altar you must be a chicken shit if you have to be anonymous. Even if you don't have a pen name a simple EMAIL ADDRESS would suffice, but no, nothing. So therefore you are officially dubbed a chicken shit!
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