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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on April 16, 2005
    Anon,

    You have a lot of nerve to flame someone like that. I bet you haven't even read the story. In fact, I can also bet (and both bets are practically failsafe) that you're a homophobic male pig. You need to grow and get out of your mother's basement. Nobody's going to take you seriously when you can't even spell properly. Hell! You use circular reason in your arguements, so I know you're nothing but chicken shit.

    --Altar of Wishes
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2005
    oh bed-buddie huh? which one of ya neels for the other?
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 16, 2005
    How could I ever flame you? Screw that anon. person (they really should learn to spell), this story's great.

    Could it be that the reason why Kurama feels the tear gem is familiar is because maybe it resembles the stone of Kuronue's pendant? Or maybe he was just somehow aware of when Hiei cried it? Eh, whatever. But hey, they're in love, that's always great...
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    you're also stupid and sick-witted.
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  • From ANON - Ragna01 on April 15, 2005
    So cute! So sweet! You made ME cry! Go on!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on April 15, 2005
    Great Chapter. So glad that Kurama woke up and wow on Yusuke and Keiko's part. Can't wait to read more, as usual.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    That's right. 'cause you know what you are.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on April 15, 2005
    Very good so far.Nice to see Hiei open up even alittle.Always knew the others could
    fight alone if they had to yet together they are better at handling things (no?)
    Can't wait for the next update,hope its soon
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 12, 2005
    Tsk, tsk.... my, aren't the guys being just a LITTLE foolish, directly doing what this note said NOT to do? Well, except Hiei, I can understand why he didn't go with the others....

    ELEVATORS ARE EVIL ^__^
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  • From ANON - BWinner(Not signed in) on April 11, 2005
    Wow, this is so well done! I like the emtions you're bringing out in the characters. All of them are so wonderfully portrayed and the way Kurama broke the secret to his mother I found to be rather believable, much to my own shock. I think you are proceeding with this nicely, and I cannot wait for your update!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on April 11, 2005
    OH see, that is just evil. LOL. Good chapter though, about time Keiko and Yusuke admitted their feelings for each other. Can't wait to read more.

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2005
    this story really sux ass. I mean gay pretty boy and angsty preety fuck. the end.
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  • From ANON - Botan on April 10, 2005
    Hey, I was just wondering if you have another account on another site called animespiral... because it seems that this story seems very fimilar. I know I've read it before somewhere. It's a great story. I would just like to know if you've got another penname somewhere. Anyway update soon. Later. Botan
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 09, 2005
    You know, in a way I kind of pity Koenma. Yes, that may sound strange, but if I was at birth assigned a job with THAT much responsiblity, I'd probably be a) putting a pistol in my mouth, or b) trying to crawl back into the womb.

    I sympathize with Hiei: I hate elevators. And escalators. One time I was on an elevator with my mother, and I got off, but the doors shut before she got off, and I was alone on this strange floor for five or ten minutes. It really sucked, cause I was only three or four. Then, relatively around the same age there, I feel down an escalator... As far as I'm concerned, little boxes are for dead people, and I'd rather climb the stairs than have the stairs.....whatever....

    Poor, poor Kurama........
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  • From ANON - D.S. on April 09, 2005
    Wow! Things just keep getting better and better for our poor hero's! Man you can be really twisted sometimes! Well at least you're in your right mind so you can writer this story. That's a very good thing. Don't forget to update soon!^_^ and keep up the good work your an amazing author! See ya XD
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