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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - Everqueen on April 09, 2005
    Great chapter, I can't wait to read more later. Wow, boton is missing, that is crazy. And with Yukina and Genkai unavailable, Kurama is in some danger. Although, thanks to Bugs, we know he will be fine. YAY. can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 07, 2005
    Damn. Poor Kurama, he's been getting the raw end of the deals so far. But I know things'll get better; how else would "Bugs" happen if they didn't? ^__^ I find it cute, how Hiei's kind of unconciously warming up to Shiori just *slightly* I'll look forward to another update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mea on April 07, 2005
    I just wanted to let you know that I have already read these chapters so I might not review every time. I really hope you update this story on Media Miner. Update Soon!
    Sincerely Mea ^_^
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  • From ANON - D.S. on April 07, 2005
    Wow! O.o This fic is just as 'Bugs'. Wow I hope you update really soon! I also really love your stories. If you were to ever own Yu Yu Hakusho, I think you would do a great job of coming up with the story lines! And who knows, maybe one day you will own Yu Yu Hakusho^_^(wishful thinking I know but honestly you really never know)
    Well anyways...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! Bye Bye
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on April 07, 2005
    Oh wow,two chapters at the same time and what a two they were.! I cried through the 3rd chapter.
    And what a chance for Hiei and Kuramas mom to get to know each other better,With this kind od damage done to the fox I wonder if Hiei will still to for his sister because we as humans could'nt give the help he needs. hm... Update soon pleasssse
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  • From ANON - Mz.Bitz. on April 06, 2005
    GASP. NO KURAMA WAKE UP!! ::shakes the fox:: Oh this was such an emotional chapter. I love your writing, I could almost picture Hiei in that last scene. EEPS! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on April 03, 2005
    I've been reading your other story(Bugs) and found out about this story there.I was hoping you'd put this one on AFF .I'm glad you did and was not disappointed in it at all.Please update this very soon
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on April 03, 2005
    Yay! chapter one!

    Who cares if there's no citrus for awhile? If it's good, then it's good. 'Sides, they say those good lemons are the ones that you "build up" to. I know I can read this elsewhere too, but I'll still be happy when the next chapter is up, so I may re-read it again! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Mea on April 03, 2005
    CC is here! And I'm the first reviewer! Yah! I hope you update it on Media Miner.org also, I want to see what happens next! Update Soon! Sincerely Mea ^_^
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